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Almost out of pressy's tumble, but it is considerably slowing down now seeing the posts made. Any constructive criticism for the story so far?
@Cyclone thanks for the copy ^^ was looking for it for my post.

@frapet

It just occurred to me that seeing as Chugo came cmpletely unexpected and unannounced (as everyone is so keen to point out ) Grenn wouldn't have had the chance to do some research on who he was beforehand.

It still could make sense for Grenn to know who Chugo is and that he's the Khan's cousin, since Chugo is somewhat famous and also happened to be part of a Khargat mercenary company for a while. I'll assume that the mercenary connection is how Grenn knows him, and that Chugo similarly has heard of Grenn.


That and since cousin is the most numerous family title for anyone I figured it was a good guess ^^
Ill try and make a character sheet somewhere this week, prefferably wednessday ^^
could you put your char sheet/ nation sheet under the characters tab as well? for future reference ^^@Cyclone
“First of all, it's de Warenne, not 'Dwarenne.' That not every man in the council can speak like a man and instead speaks like a peasant child, that is fine by my, but I would appreciate you would at least show me the respect I deserve, and attempt to pronounce my name correctly. Second off, I am here to provide the king with my sacriligious duty to provide comfort, council and security. Not make friends with the sorts of you. I've heard of you. You're a vagabond, a man without honor. Your company much the same.. woe the days, where chivalry still existed.”

Grenn had to put up his most lack-wit smile to suppress the urge to punch the man’s throat. He had heard that de Warenne was a self-righteous and disdainful cunt but had still had expected a bit more pragmatism from a man of his stature. Retorts referring to raised trade tariffs imposed by the Mark or cargo ending up lost raced to the surface before Grenn decided against it. Too soon to put any cards on the table, even if his intentional mispronunciation had drawn out enough information. He decided on the simplest of retorts.‘Good to hear my reputation precedes me, still good to see you here, de Warenne.’

The lack-wit smile didn’t leave his face, but his eyes hardened. He didn’t bother about the effects as the servant spoke of the Khargats.

Grenn followed the exchange of insults and courtesies closely. A highpoint for him being lady Farwynd, though not necessarily for her arguments. The entire exchange between de Warenne and Chugo unfolded before his eyes. He had to hide his amusement when the King rebuked his uncle and de Warenne jumped in ‘like a peasant child’. When de Warenne drew his blade however Grenn couldn’t help but take a more active role. Stepping forward while with his left, plated, hand he made the universal calming gesture of lowering and raising his hand, palm to the floor. He even winked at de Warenne when he raised the finger of his right hand and looked towards the King to indicate he was waiting approval to speak. The Khargat had already taken the floor however, and Grenn waited patiently when Laxion’s boy moved up in an amusing anger:

'Tell them!' he shouted, looking towards the king, 'tell them to stop! Have they no respect for their lord and master! They draw their swords and tongues before you with the utmost disregard for your presence and your authority. Is this the court of the Grand King of Emperiat, or is it a playground for children?'

Grenn didn’t even try to supress a smile, he even bared teeth when the Laxion stepped in:

‘F-forgive him, my liege. An overexcited youth. The untamed fires and passions burn yet within him, though, perhaps, there is some truth in what he speaks, would that you both draw back, for this confrontation is most unseemly, and most disrespectful, before our king.'

Decent save, and a good move to bring the boy to court. He would have to keep an eye out for this advisor from Andaluja. Grenn turned his head again to see how the exchange affected the king, and to gently try and keep it clear that he still wanted to speak.

(would he be ignored he'd step back with a smile and nod at Torinus, read the hider content at your own risk ^^)


For some added intrigue there might be previous relations between the Driftmark, Belintash and Dieuporteille due to the Driftmark lying on the primary road between them. Maybe that the Mark has repeadetly tried to strike deals for keeping the roads safe or something?
@frapet Who knows?


well the OOC says his most trusted advisor, but it is more a general question about what is generally known about the kings murder.
Who stabbed the king in the back?
FYI, @POOHEAD189 and I will be working on a collaborative post since we're the only ones in the scene currently. So that should be up later today.


Nice, first collab, what about you all? @Sleater@MonsieurShade@Azazaa
@Asura Where do you want to go with the character? What role would she fullfill?
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