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This is still open right cause I got a few ideas to run by you:

1. Could we possibly add Monster Hunter to the list of games? Giant dinosaur monsters roaming the land would be super ultra fun.
2. I was also hoping that we could possibly add Starcraft to the list of worlds? Not really as much for its content but I would hella enjoy being able to play a rendition of Sarah Kerrigan to give some otherworldiness to the cast. If we're going to allow some of the rather powerful stuff from Skyrim with the possibility of Argonians I wouldn't see it being much of an issue.
This is a rather interesting concept to me and I think I'll enjoy it very much.

I have an idea for a eccentric magic user with an affinity for the undead. If I can have an undead pet cat thatd be beautiful but I can understand if not.
Yeah I'm just gonna bow out :| It seems like you're looking for something entirely different than what the interest check was selling from my point of view.
@FrozenEcstasy So looking over the revisions thus far, I feel like you've done a good job at focusing Omega, but now that he's just a "researcher," he's left in a nebulous sort of position where he doesn't quite have a viable role on Nova Dawn. If he's simply a biologist with some light combat and magic abilities, I can't quite justify Sulk taking him onboard. This isn't the HMS Beagle after all. Regarding his status as an android, I stand by my earlier suggestion that making him a fully robotic lifeform from a robot world would be the best and most interesting solution.

So here's what I'm suggesting: fully embrace the researcher role. The idea of him being adapted into a war robot just detracts from the strength of his theme as a character. Making him a navigator again would work very will with him being a researcher, as he would be committed to researching and deciphering the Aetheric Lexicon, giving him a solid role on the ship. If you wanted to keep him as a biologist, sure, but if you were going with the robot world idea and/or this suggestion, perhaps an astronomer or cartographer would be more appropriate.


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We're in a setting where our characters will find themselves on strange worlds, some of which that aren't developed, with strange creatures that could be extremely lethal. A research robot with the ability to assimilate into the world's ecosystem, scout for threats, and develop bio weaponry... Isn't helpful? Not to mention they're pirate's, who's to say they're never going to smuggle some alien creature offworld to sell it or something? Like there's always that thing were the crew lands on a jungle planet and someone is almost eaten alive by a carnivorous plant...

Like I understand... Somewhat... But if I try and make the character any more singular in theme its going to be very forced writing and far too typical for me. I'd have to bow out cause this wouldn't be a fun experience.

I mean I even went as far as to follow a common trope in sci fi settings and he's STILL not consist? Even the whole "scientist weaponizing their research" thing is EXTREMELY common and well accepted idea. Setting wise his story is believable as well.

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Also he's a pirate, I want him to have minor combatant functions because he's a pirate. His theme isn't more farfetched than asking a parasite ridden insect to be a cook.
@Ink Blood That's roughly what @FrozenEcstasy's character amounts to, though I feel as though those aspects of his character are not emphasized enough yet. If you wanted to come to an agreement between players, that would be between you two.


I re-worked Omega's character. Changed him from Navigator/Researcher to Researcher and Wildlife specialist. Put less focus on his homeworld and more on his original function as a research android. I kept the sense of dichotomy I aim for but put less focus on it, now rather than a dichotomy in personality it's an ironic dichotomy between him being a cybernetic life-form that thrives in natural environments. The cool thing is, the whole "android protecting/having a soft spot for nature" thing is a common trope, so I was able to build upon a more concrete, singular idea like you wanted. I hope he's a lot more up to snuff this time. If the fact he's still an android is SUPER bothersome, I could always downgrade him to a cyborg and keep the fantasy.

Also, with Navigator back open, and Omega being less focused on magic, @Ink Blood could look for a wizardy anthropologist/navigator thing. Anthropology expands on archaeology and gives a basis for interest in navigation, especially if the character is focused on discovering lost civilizations, as cartography is very important in that sense if you've ever watched Indiana Jones or similar. As long as his characters not a robot I don't see any issues. I mean the characters would serve different functions entirely.
@FrozenEcstasy Be that as it may, vFear was the first to provide a "war robot" character that met my standards. While we're discussing revisions, I would prefer that Omega's status as a navigator/researcher was a more impactful part of his background. As it stands, his only claim to the positions are "he was refitted from a research android" and "he's curious."

@jasonwolf Took me a second to realize fully what you were asking, but it sounds alright. I like the idea of the master of ordinance or the helmsman being diminutive like a kobold or something.


You, unmeaning, gave me an idea that'll help.
@vFear Looks very good, accepted for sure.

@FrozenEcstasy I understand your intentions, but trying to represent a dichotomy with a single character is a tall order, especially if all aspects of them are present at once. When I talk about refining a concept, vFear's character completely delivers on that idea. Nearly every aspect of Eleven builds on a singular theme, resulting in a very strong character thematically. It's much better to have one theme that works great than multiple that are underwhelming, which is about my appraisal of Omega thus far.

I think some revisions should be in order, not in least to differentiate Omega from Eleven. Perhaps rather than a war android, Omega is an artificial life form, of a race of similar beings? Reproducing, self-sufficient, sapient automatons. This could be the entirety of their race, and perhaps even their planet is artificial, which is how they managed to outlive their sun. This brings up other thoughts; perhaps their civil war is over the last remaining energy resources on the planet, rather than being purely ideological. Omega's motivations could be greatly simplified at this point, making him simply a refugee from the civil war rather than some kind of escapee.

These are merely suggestions of course; it's a direction you can take the character that would be unique, interesting, and better focused.


o.o; I kinda had the war robot idea first in the IC. If there needs to be a difference I'd point out that Omega is a magic robot and Eleven is purely martial, along with completely different backgrounds, and the fact Omega contains a soul.

I'll go and simplify him I guess, not to sound difficult or anything it's just I have more fun with complicated characters yo.
@FrozenEcstasy I more or less like where you're going with this, but overall the character feels unfocused. There's just a lot going on thematically. He's a war robot, but also a medical robot, from a planet that is a high tech center, but also a dead world, but also undergoing a vicious civil war. He's a rogue android, but also insatiably curious, but also violent by nature. Kind of understand what I'm getting at? He would benefit from having his concept refined, in my opinion.


1) War Robot, the light medical function is due to the fact he's fighting alongside humans and cyborgs, it's not uncommon for soldiers to carry medical supplies, that's the entire logic.
2) The World is supposed to be dead, sure, but it's not because it's a high tech center, or I should say "was" since they're in a war now. I mean yeah I'd understand if I said there were barely people on it and it still was, but no, it's being artificially sustained because of it's populace and its status as a high tech center. None of these things are necessarily mutually exclusive.
3) He is war android fashioned from the leftovers of a research bot that retains some of its memories, his personality is going to be influenced by both these factors. It's obvious he's more concerned with research, and left the war to due so. However he did leave a war he was made for to follow frivolous intentions which brands him as a deserter... again none of these things are mutually exclusive.

I understand if you're looking for a simpler concept here, but the character is from a world split down the middle and it's not too far a stretch to say its also shown in his personality and his creation. Most of my character concepts involve a dichotomy and the character is a product of that. I can still change him, but I feel like he's well put together. If I need to refine the wording to make that more clear I can do that as well.

@Dead Cruiser
Omega Reyes has been finished and is awaiting to report for duty.

Also I have a question, to what degree do psiionics interact with being of pure machination, if at all? When it comes to mind things anyway.

Edit: LOL do you play Ragnarok Online? xD


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