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Yeah, the post is fine. I'll get working on mine.
It happened quickly, the death of a stranger, the tree’s destruction, and the appearance of the foreign man. Taking all of the events in tolled the knightly man, as he tried his best to recollect his surroundings. Here he was attempting to rescue the man trapped in the carriage, and now he’s freed.

“Buah wuah,” astonished, the trapped man removed himself from the carriage. “What, but how?” The man had no idea what took place. It was far beyond the natural realm for discovery. Something supernatural provided help. However, the trapped man and the knightly man knew not the cause; only that the foreign man stood before the two.

In unison, they inquired, “Was it you?” Looking to the foreign man, they waited an answer for a moment. Then, realization hit in, as the freed man remembered, “Wait, we must flee this place.” As he tried to move, his leg froze, and pain shot out his mouth, “Yeowch. Might I get your assistance?”

Bending down, the knightly man wrapped the man’s hands around his left shoulder to drag him. He commanded, “Let’s make for that clearing!”

At the clearing, in destitute of medicine, the knightly man put the man’s right leg back into place. CRUNCH and another yelp of pain likely provided their position to the pursuers. Fortunately, the foreign man too followed, acting as an unknown third party, but yielding protection. The knightly man wondered his fate to be tangled from the supernatural to the runaway.

Without a weapon, or his tent, the knightly man sat on a stump, questioning the foreign man, “You’ve saved our lives, but without a weapon. What are you? A demon?” The bible of the ice kingdom spoke of inferno beings, those who wanted to burn the world named demons. Even though, the foreign man produced no flames, it remained an oddity to the prior encounters.

The two had time to speak with another for the trapped man rested despite the pain.

Feeling ashamed for his sudden questioning to the savior, he reassured the foreign man, “Look, I mean no harm. My name’s Richard, a knight of the Ice Kingdom. I just want to know what’s going on, so tell me what’s your name? And I’m sorry for calling you a demon. I’ve never seen something so unreal.”
I would pm but I fear I would forget the ones I liked.

I like the alchemy one: play another alchemist
MMORPG : another player in the game (fantasy based play would be cool)
ESP : another Esper

Throw me a pm when your back online and we can chat


One word, Esper.


Can you two please delete your posts, as I use this thread to give updates when I add more plot ideas. Thank you.
@golden dragon
The interaction can be so/so.
like, it starts off yelling and such, because your' character thinks mine is a thief and possibly stole the sword in question. Then, we can go from there, both contributing to the interaction, if that works.


Yeah, that works. So I'll end the post with an interaction between the two, once everyone's been situated away from the wreck to a calmer state.
@golden dragon
I finally finished.

We can go with the latter, that all that would be seen is the tree disintegrate, whatever makes the most sense.


Alright, thanks. That'll work, but since this world is humans at the moment, the characters will be frightened/bewildered. Demons/Sorcery is starting to appear, but it's not fully known.

I'll get a post up probably in 1~4 days again. My ideas for the post are

1. Revealing the carriage man's purpose.
2. Finding out what started the crash.
3. Details on the Thief (Unless you would prefer to expand on that instead of me)
4. My character confronting your character about the lost sword.

I can advance the plot farther, if you tell me how you would like to interaction to go between My character and Your Character about the lost sword, or I can end my post there to give you the chance to explain.
@golden dragon
He used his powers, which I suppose could be a combination of sword skills, spirit power, and brute strength.


Thanks for the answer. Do you have a description for how he did it? Like was it a single touch to the tree with his finger, or what did he do to do that to a tree? Or does he move so fast, that all anyone would see is the tree disintegrate?
@golden dragon
oops...well, I already edited it. but I can always put the thief back in.


It's up to you. Just let me know what finalized post you decide to go with.
@golden dragon
Did you want me to change that a bit?


There's nothing you need to change, since I'll incorporate the thief as another character. But I am confused to how the Sword transformed Human managed to destroy the tree and roots. Like is it a specific power he used?
Alright, also, how does he destroy the tree and roots? Is it his brute strength, or do you mean he pushed the tree aside?
Good post (There's enough plot advancement considering you added the Thief character and replied to the action). Just to clarify, it may not have been clear in writing, but my character thinks your character is a thief. We can however keep the current thief you've added to the story as a plot element, but when my character was calling out for help, he was referring to your character.

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