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Romaneck said
Come now this is not A song of Ice and Fire


Come now, why can't this be like A Song of Ice and Fire? ;)

Konica said
-_-' My knowledge of game of thrones is limited to that South Park episode. I'm just saying I don't mind killing off my character as long as its not premature.


Character deaths maybe inevitable, but not unexpected so there won't be any Russian Roulette or unreasonable George R.R. Martin mimicking despite the prevalent dangers existing throughout Carcassonne 8).

@ Skulls - Onatha is Approved!

@ Everyone else - Updates are inbound as I am working closely with Nevis and Romancek to bring their characters into the mix. Expect additional SM Character Sheets, an introduction IC post this weekend or next by the earliest. Liking what I'm seeing, collaboration wise and if I haven't responded to any additional PMs I apologize and promise to return them ASAP

Edit: Something to chew on before the First IC Post ...

"You see a leaf fall and you think you know which way the wind blows. Well ... there is a wind coming, madame, that will sweep away your pride ..."
Glad to see we're all still here and kicking. Trying to work on answering everyone's questions while working with Skulls, Nevis, and Romancek for character development. Been a crazy, albeit productive weekend, but we're moving along! I'll be waiting for the others to sort of join in the mix as I'm sure dreamshell, Ivory, babby, Peppers and maybe a couple others are probably working out their own character sheets, but just as a precaution, I've already sent PMs to see what they're up to. If the weekend rolls by and we don't see more faces, I promise that I'll throw up the IC so we can all get started this show on the road.

Here's the thing, I've been from to and from the land of the dead and I gotta tell y'all, it's a scary place so a word of advice. Try not to get killed! Alright? Alright?!

I kid, I kid; but anyways. I figured I'd let you all know that we'll be starting very soon and the scenes I've written and drafted for the future will involve all parties. Additionally, I just want to mention that this will be a survival struggle in what's supposed to be a solid death sentence, grins.
Apologies to y'all for not getting back, but battling for time here before I get to work. I will be posting my own several character sheets by tonight or tomorrow so stay frosty! Until then, I'll just pull out my Story Master's approval stamp. It's not as big as my other stamp so don't ask where I got! ; ^ )

@ Fern - Take some time to flesh out Dae and Ash, but other wise ...

Corisande is approved!

@ Konica - Nice work revising Adrianna for Altaea!

Arianna is approved!

@ Peik

Korkud's got one helluva history and he'll have one helluva story when we start ...

Korkud is approved!

Alright, now I really have to go. I'll see you all tomorrow, preferably the wee hours or early afternoon. Toodles ...
@ Everyone Was reviewing Character Sheets and they all look splendid, but I seriously need to hibernate so I'll get back to y'all later or Sunday 8).
@ Nevis

Yes, we are still accepting more writers and as the saying goes, the more merrier!

Regarding the historical tidbits, I'm glad you're sweeping the story's historical inspirations and I commend you for calling me out on potential inconsistencies, but just note that for storytelling purposes, we aren't necessarily following an exact chronological replica, but taking a bit of this and that for world and story-building purposes. I did state before that this is a very technologically advanced Late Middle Ages so ... socially and living-wise, most North and Southwest Carcassonians are still confined to feudalism and certain living situations. The existing pictures are really just very aesthetically appealing images that could allow other writers to get a rough sense of what to expect.

Nevis said
Also, the technological level you keep describing (and showing pictures of) actually isn't Medieval or Middle Age,or even early Renaissance-it's late Renaissance and early Early Modern period- the late 1400s though the first half of the 1500s. Full-plate armor reached it's apex (and the designs that you keep showing) well or even late into the Renaissance and during the Early Modern Period. The presence of firearms to the indicated degree, especially, points to the Early Modern Period. In our world-firearms hit a critical mass starting at about the 1570s where they began making full-plate armor, pikes, halberds and so on obsolete at a much faster rate than even before. As this it taking place a little before that, I think something like 1530-1560 is roughly where this setting is in terms of technology.


Take what I say with a grain of salt, because I'd like to share where I come from because I do what know what you're referring to. Timeline and technologically, you are correct in the sense that some of Altaea's existing technologies can be categorized between the late 1400s and early 1500s, but to if you look at when the Late Middle Ages ends; historians generally agree that it spanned all the way to the 1500s while the early Renaissance is said to have begun during the 14th centuries. The lines are somewhat blurred in terms of categorizing what culminated into the arts, cultural expansions, literature, education, sciences, wide-spread media, and other major disciplines. Multiple Renaissances also occurred in certain areas of Europe at later parts of the 15th century, most notably France, England, the Netherlands, and Poland. I left mention of the Renaissance a bit vague to give breathing room to emerging ideas, philosophies, scientific discoveries, and pioneering architectural advancements.

Nevis said Also, a slight misuse of the word-the Renaissance was not about people's rights and equality, especially not class; that's more from the French Revolution aspect. The Renaissance is marked as a return to and flourishing of the 'fine arts', such as music, painting and especially literature and education, and was particularly characterized by a fascination with the self and self-importance (as compared to the importance of others and society as a whole, out things, from before).


This brings me to my next point in that Valania is heavily based on Ancien Regime France and the Kingdom Poland and the Grand Duchy of Lithuania, better known as the Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth. Since the Renaissance is said to have likely occurred in France and Poland within the late 14th century, that does make perfect sense to place the beginning of certain advancements, held back by Sarife and Valania's aristocratic authority and largely feudal systems. I did borrow several inspirations from the French Revolution so really I'm glad you caught that. My intention was and still is to combine certain elements from the Renaissance, Age of Enlightment, and the Modern Era to craft a masterful tale with other writers so we won't necessarily strictly confine our creativity.

On the schpiel about the Renaissance, it wasn't just an expansion in the arts, literature, or self-discovery. You could certainly argue that during the early Renaissance, the Bubonic Plague actually culminated a transition into a sort of Late Middle Ages Industrial Revolution due to largely reduced populace, large surplus wealth left to surviving Europeans, advent of early manufacturing (paper production from discarded clothing, mechanical engineering for crudely automated organs or clock systems, and greater metal production).

Coupling this is the spread of Christianity and pilgrimages is also said to have set wheels for early predecessor for organized companies and wide-scale urbanization due to increased demands for lodging, food and beverage vendors, attractions, and expansions within various commercial sectors.

Regarding Firearms, they were really developed as a cheaper and more powerful alternative to crossbows or ranged weapons, in that they required less training to punch through armor. Firearms also really weren't fully optimized until recently and even then, modern rifles aren't in some respects 100% accurate. Muskets certainly did make pike, halberds, and certain close quarters weapons obsolete, but the accuracy left much to be desired. In fact, to maximize muzzle loading firearms, soldiers of the Renaissance and Early Modern Age clustered firearm wielding infantry together for synchronized barrages.

Arquebuses, Wheel locks, and other firearms certainly weren't entirely reliable or accurate and in some instances even dangerous to operate. I will go on to argue that during the late 17th and early 18th century, the Swedish Carolean army's arms combinations with pikes, swords, and muskets produced devastating results against their enemies. Even at 100 yards, muskets were quite inaccurate at which point, only rifles, mortars, rockets, or cannons could snipe or obliterate the intended targets. The Swedish Caroleans knew this and did not open fire with their 17th and 18th century weapons until they came within 50 meters, at which case, they unleashed one massive firearm barrage before charging at full force. Suffice to say, they killed a lot of enemy soldiers before exhausting wars against the Poles, Danes, and the Russians irreversibly shattered their military power.

Nevis said
Rapiers are also specifically not primarily a battlefield weapon-they are specifically designed for dueling (and specifically for unarmed combat at that, except for things like the tuck/estoc) and were uncommon on an open battlefield. At this technological level, arming swords (the vanilla Medieval-setting one-handed double-edged cruciform sword) and side swords (can be either an arming sword with a rapier hilt or a true hybrid of the two-never especially popular), though longswords would be in decline (though not greatswords like zweihanders; this is actually when they reached their greatest use!).


This is all true, but regarding Rapiers; the term Rapier was referred to various weapon types, some of which did not necessarily refer to the unarmored, single target types we know about today. Certainly, existing longswords, two-handed weapons, or zweihanders will have their uses in certain parts of Valania and Sarife, but between Pikelines and Static Shield Walls with supporting archer and firearm elements, their uses are deadly in that they are effective for assaulting shock troopers 8).

Nevis said Will you please explain in more detail about the magic that exists and what is allowed for player characters to have?
Also, is there any lands and/or nations that parallel western and northern Europe, such as France, Spain, Germany and England?


Existing magic is actually very weak in that wielders and their abilities are very rare and few and far in between. You'll have to PM me to know what magic exists!

Regarding Western European parallels, Valania is probably one of the only known Western influenced nations within Carcassonne and draws heavy inspiration from France with a very slight of Spanish touch. The reason being that the Western and Eastern Roman Empire equivalents, Vectis and Vorst never fell. Additionally, the Carthaginian equivalent, Ivalis still exists so there's that too 8).

Now ... all of this being said, I'm done with the history lessons and I'd like to offer my hand in welcoming you to Altaea, Nevis! I'm glad you've taken interest and that you're pointing out potential inconsistencies and honestly, this all helps to hammer out potholes. Again, take what I said with a grain of salt and if you have any other questions, just hurl something my way 8D
Fern, everything takes practice so draw to your heart's content! 8D

As promised, OOC's up!




Ferdinand de Braekeleer. Strijdtoneel met Kenau Simons Hasselaar. Handmade Oil Paintings.




The year is 2999 UC, and the ancient continent of Carcassonne is turning aflame. Humanity has long considered the continent their home and its major bedrock civilizations are literally on the verge of entering a Renaissance, yet recent, irreversible wars are fusing the land into a volatile powder keg. Widessread condemnation can point towards the Fall of the Kingdom of Valania and her mighty armies. Fourteen years have passed since the Sarifen Empire established itself as Carcassonne’s dominating military power, however, the promises for peace and prosperity have not been fulfilled. Scars of the War of Sarifen Conquest still exist and many subjects of the conquered Kingdom of Valania grow weary of Sarifen rule, including the former Valanian crown prince, Lucius Delacroix I and his sister, the crown princess Ryanna Delacroix.

The people suffer and toil under an archaic Feudalistic way of life rife with corruption, sexism, civic inequality, economic slavery, and classism of unprecedented scales. To make matters worse, unnecessary continental wars, famines, and political assassinations threaten to tear society apart. Within Valania itself, its former territories are in a state of heavy decline, due to institutional neglect, excessive corruption, gluttony, and indifference to the suffering populace. The gap between the rich and the poor is appalling and the mortality rate has risen as the people either starve or barely scrape by.

Famines have also spread across Sarife, however, the Emperor Aryanpour I and the Empire's many Sarifen aristocrats turn a blind eye to the mass suffering as they indulge in lives of unchallenged privilege and comfort. Whispers have also spread throughout the land that a deep rift has emerged between the Emperor and his son, the Royal Sarifen Prince Bahramesh Azad Aryanpur II; whom holds no love for the Empire's buckling economy and the people's suffering. As Sarife falls further into decline, the prince watches helplessly as two generations of incessant guerilla warfare within Valania's territories have finally emptied Sarifan coffers as his father refuses to disband the Empire's massive conscript army.

All the same, reports from Sarife's most accomplished agents speak of a secret alliance between Carcassonne's Southern rulers as the Kingdoms of Vectis, Vorst, Ivalis mobilize their armies along Valania's Southern borders. Simultaneously, disheveled refugees arrive from across the sea along Carcassonne's West and Northern coasts. Nightmarish tales have emerged of ancient nations falling to merciless and unstoppable hordes wearing impenetrable, plate mail armor. Heroes and Patriots are needed once again to fight the injustice that once again threatens to engulf Carcassonne into anarchy and totalitarian rule. Where are Valania's champions during its hour of need? Where is Valania's Crown Prince, Lucius or Sarife's Royal Prince Bahramesh? What toils await Sarife as famines drain their rivers and farmlands? Nothing is certain; however, a storm is coming. With unemployed masses, crippling debts, and suffocating class imbalances; the people must look within themselves than towards their local indifferent aristocrats to bring life to their dying nations. Who will answer the call? Only those whom dare to dream, stand a chance of survival and whatever happens, the next chapter within Carcassonne's Blood-Riddled Sagas will soon unfold. Those whom decide to reverse the peoples' dwindling misfortunes will forever inshrine themselves into legend for this is a new age! An Age of Revolution ...





























Don't worry, Fern, that OOC's in the making so just keep a sword and a little extra gunpowder handy because we'll be launching soon 8)
That's perfectly plausible, Ivory; I love a good tale involving a nobleborn woman oblivious towards her true heritage. If you decide to roll with her, I look forward to watching her develop! I can promise you twists and turns in the near future so stay frosty 8)
@Ivory - Firearms are past the arquebus and matchlock phases, however, due to stringent laws, they are only issued for existing aristocratic retainers, exclusive mounted noble troops, commissioned assassins, Royal Zhayedans or the crack soldiers of the Nezām Corps. Naturally the Sororitas Melitas would certainly prove exempt to this and allowed to carry firearms.

I've suddenly realized that a Lieutenant rank would bridge the massive hole that exists between the Company and Squadron level so I've decided that adding the Valkyrie Apostle rank is the most logical inclusion. Note that a aristocratic title is required for any rank above Valkyrie Apostle so only a woman of noble birth could become a Dame Knight or Grand Baliff. Given that the Order's headquarters resides within Voltas, the promotions of newer Dame Knights and Baliffs is generally complicated due the lack of Valanian female aristocrats. As such, only noble born Sarifen ladies or women of foreign noble birth are afforded election into the higher ranks. You can imagine the resentment within the lower ranks, held in check only by Grand Master Domenica and Knightess Captain Rosellia's presence ...

Regarding the added information, I actually did the exact opposite in that I copied and pasted the above information to my first post!
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