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@ Fern Your writing's fine! Don't worry about an atrocious reply because it's not. Just do what you do best and write, write, write. Doesn't matter if it's 12 paragraphs or just 2. There are stories waiting to be told and an entire world rife with conflicts and politics worth exploring! As always, don't hesitate in challenging yourself as a writer, but don't stress out on one upping another writer's skill or content. I hope you enjoy your weeklong escapades.

@ Everyone - I just wanted to clarify that invitation letters have been delivered to each character regarding the next evening's dinner banquet so don't hesitate to include their reception and delivery.

Posting wise. I don't, by any means, expect posts to exceed or match the introduction so don't feel pressured to post or write a bajillion paragraphs. If you think you could offer a different perspective to the unfolding conflicts, post or write away!
I also wanted to say thank you to Peik, Aristo, and especially Nevis for clarifying plate armor mobility and I stand corrected! It's incredible how versatile plate armor knights were and also emphasizes just how wrong some historical sources are. Some years ago, a cocky former friend once claimed that chainmail could not be worn in conjunction with plate armor given that it'd be too damn heavy and likely negate mobility. I can say for certainty how much an imbecile he was and just how effective chain mail - plate armor truly was! I did read somewhere that bodkin tipped, longbow arrows couldn't penetrate full plate, but I would like confirmations as to their effectiveness.

Regarding plate armor, Nevis, you're right in the sense that fire arms were solely the reason for the decline in plate armor owed to a user's increased danger. Trained and well equipped mercenaries could afford themselves armor, experience, and training not granted towards most other feudal levies and yes their presence made a huuuuge difference on the battlefield. That they contributed to the decline of plate armor isn't actually true per say but the fact that they changed how others fought their wars! As time went on and nations began to professionalize their armies, they did emulate the way certain mercenary groups fought and trained so there's that too. Yes, Feudalism was already declining, but wearing plate armor was still very much effective up until gunsmiths initiated greater firearm refinements.

As gunsmiths refined firearm potency so did production costs and as they took an increasing role on the battlefield, it became much cheaper to train equip, and utilize firearm wielding conscripts than it was to craft increasingly obsolete armor and weapons to select few landowning knights. I'll reemphasize in that the point to firearms wasn't necessarily accuracy, but in the economics of production and training. Training became much easier and superseded the years of training required for bows (crossbows, composite, and longbows alike). Application wise, firearms were remarkably successful in punching through plate armor and made wearing full plate very dangerous.

The decline in Feudalism itself can be attributed to the Crusades, but also the rise in Absolute Monarchies owed in part to the fact that Monarchs consolidated their power through centralizing and reorganizing administration towards their effective rule. The Crusades and their effects did diminished certain ranks within many aristocratic hierarchies while allowing others to seize land and authority back towards their respective domain. On the other hand, it's in fact argued that the Hundred Years War effectively diminished the French Monarchy's grip on the nobility. Most of the Ancien Regime's goals prior to the French Revolution involved recentralizing the aristocratic ranks and administration, thereby attributing to France's delayed industrialization and in some respects feudalistic ways. The French, of course, were super ceded by the Russians, whom further delayed industrialization and serfdom until sometime in the late 19th century!

These seizures and the rise in absolute monarchies allowed for more effective law drafting methods and application/policing while also refining taxation. This in turn changed life and as you stated, allowed for greater education, which in turn yielded more merchants, which in turn spurred for greater exploitation of resources and infrastructural development. Bear in mind, commoners didn't owe their allegiances to their local noblemen or knights, they fought for the state. This was huge because instead of petty regional squabbles, people began to fight for their country as a whole. In much later conflicts, men from differing regions fought together instead of company or regimental confinement towards respective regions!

I'd also like to point out that the desire to repeat the Late Republican/Western Roman Empire also brought about feudalistic decline given that instead of each commoner supplying their own arms, the state supplied the weapons, arms, and training. You all probably already know this, but the rise in professional armies and long conscripted service, owed in part to changing draft and service laws. Centralizing the state's taxes levied for a budget to supply arms, training, drill instructors, officers, and armor for a country's army. Some centuries down the line, we certainly see War Colleges and Military Academies appearing, where select individuals studied and refined war deployments, geography, tactics, strategy, logistics, and military theory, but I'm certain this more widespread during the 18th century and onwards.

We can also attribute the Church's Decline as another reason for the rise in absolute monarchies and feudalism's decline along with the religious reformations that brought the rise of Protestantism.
Now I think I've already drafted another historical, classroom lecture and as such, would like to inform all of you that not only is another post on the way, but that if any of you need writing introduction assistance, I would be more than happy to collaborate to bring all of your characters into the mix!

@ Romaneck and Skulls - Don't know if you remember interacting with Mr. D, but I'll quote him for old time's sake .

On Tue Mar 29, 2011 7:32 pm, Mr. D said
"Hey Mr D you could totally reply to your own RP."

"Hurr, no I'd rather sit around and waste my time looking at pictures of cats on the internet."

Again don't feel any posting pressure, everyone, and just have fun introducing your characters! Just remember these words and heed them well: Conqvist knows ...
Hey everyone! I can't tell all of you how happy I am to announce the first IC post. It's been overdue for launch and owing to lessons learned from previous collaborative-writing incidents, I managed to throw something together. It's my pleasure to deliver the official IC launch post and I look forward to posting. That last post literally took me a weekend and several entire days as with all ginormous story plot introductions. I will certainly try to shorten future posts, but it's been an ongoing struggle in the face of throwing out additional content.

Bear with me if the quality's not up to par because I'm as much a growing writer as all of you! For considerations sake, I would like to issue a general warning that some of the material is graphic, highly sensitive in nature, and mature so ... just thought I'd throw that out there.

On a side note and for plot purposes, please find creative ways to bring your characters to Voltas and may the gods be with them. There will be many cross plot arc opportunities, character trials, and violent conflicts so I encourage you all to be creative in shaping the world and the many struggles that are plaguing Carcassonne. If you all need clarification, you all know where to find me 8).

@ Dreamshell - Ghisault has been approved!





A charging steed carrying two riders burst through the outlying roads, throwing dust, debris, and god knew what else over the open air. As they raced through the packed roads, shouts and gallops echoed nearby in light of the sky's whistling arrows. In the distance, over a dozen bells chimed into the sky as the sun emitted a glorious, red-yellow glow not usually seen until the country's early autumn intervals. One rider glanced strangely towards the dwindling countryside, which had since become a littering of side roads and irrigation ditches stretching into the horizon. Valania Proper had seen better days as did the Voltasian outskirts and it seemed nature had not proven kind to the former Kingdom's crop territories.

Valania was deteriorating and ever since he'd left, Lucius could not help, but have felt somewhat responsible for his kingdom's decline. The days spent in and out of Voltas, stalking streets, and gutting careless turncoat patricians had only earned the Prince an enormous bounty not seen since Sarife's independence. The past year involved a race across Valania and outwitting tenacious Sipahis at every turn. They were incredibly resilient bastards, even if they resembled Sarife's inexhaustible conscript detachments.

His time spent alluding their pursuit had brought him through several notable resistance circles, yet he never remained in one place for too long. The list of compromised resistance dwellings were too many to count and in lue of aggressive Nezam soldiers, Lucius found himself hunted on all corners of Southwest Carcassonne. Only the coastlines held merit, where upon the Imperial Sarifen Navy inadequately policed Valania's shores. Not known for its naval prowess, Sarife's large navy guarded its shipping lanes with mixed effect, leaving piracy confined to remote and often secluded locations. Lucius for one found himself confounded as to the resistance's lack of effort to establish any notable coastal resistance havens and discovered foreign cartels operating along what easily should have resembled resistance controlled havens.

As he mulled over what his recent coastline escapades had uncovered, his attention suddenly reverted towards the trench lines flanking the decaying roadways. The strange looks befitting the dirt-faced onlookers spoke of immense pain and hardship as some sported sunken waste lines whilst others carried stumps that once resembled arms or legs. Still others suffered through malnourishment and stalked the roads in gaunt and often skeletal forms barely resembling anything human. The occasional wagon sporting what resembled crops not only stood few and far, but became increasingly dwarfed through what resembled grim faced harvesters and large soil clumps littered in white, yellowing grub. The red orange glow of the dusk's twilight only worsened such sights and the largely emptied carts only further asserted several notions accentuated towards a bad harvest. That there still resembled small, smoke puffing cottage homes and wooden houses dotting the surrounding landscapes did little to ease the Prince's scowls as he and his companion raced past near emptied livestock pens.

It was between crossing a crowded crossroads intersection, the rear rider quickly stole a glance as the two darted past two disheveled men splitting bread with sharpened axes. In-between observing various roadside beggars, additional shouts and bow thrums immediately stole his attention as the raging horsemen continually bolted into furious, thundering gallops, further amplified through the metallic clanks projected through their armor. Many loud and synchronized shouts followed as sounds resembling clattered sticks erupted overhead, however, through sheer brilliance and skill, the lead rider's efforts managed to maneuver the horse around several merchant carts traveling the opposite direction. The two riders quickly ducked low as over several dozen arrows and javelins discharged overhead and across both flanks, some of which imbedded harmlessly onto other nearby wooden carts whilst others whistled past their right and left flanks. Several arrows struck screaming bystanders, felling the victims in a manner only befitting vegetable sacks. Cursing, Lucius watched helplessly as the pursuing horsemen trampled several fallen bystanders across the roads into heaps of splattered blood and bones.

As more riders appeared, additional javelin volleys sang through the air, only to join the chorus of purrs and war cries. The Prince clapped his companion along the shoulder and shouted several ineligible words before hurling into a low, ground level hang along the horse's left side. A moment later, the man seized a jutting javelin protruding off the road, then another, then another. Following a push to realign along his previous spot, the rear rider hurled a javelin straight into a pack of advancing horsemen, striking the leader square in the throat. The leader's fall tripped several riders into tumbled heaps and provoked an additional javelin volley overhead before prompting the front rider's decision to rear the horse over a stray broken cart blocking the road. Shouts of alarm cried from behind as the frontal horsemen ranks slammed into the cart. The screaming horses loudly rang overhead as the cart's splintered features impaled their throats and legs. Almost impossibly, other horsemen hurled over the tangled human-horse knot before regaining speed towards the two riders. A moment later, two pursuing horsemen managed to threaten the pair's flanks, swords drawn and held overhead.

β€œBoro be jahanam!” a nearing armored horseman fanatically screamed as he swung his saber towards the rear rider's head. Ducking the armored wearing, rear rider viciously slammed a fist across the other horseman's face whilst immediately reaching down to draw a pistol. A half second later, Lucius unholstered another pistol and forcefully jammed the muzzles along each horseman's forehead before cocking and firing both pistols at point blank. The two unfortunate horsemen jerked backwards and slowly slumped forwards as the rounds tore through their skulls, splattering blood and brains out onto the dirtied, cobbled roads.

β€œRelentless bastards, Ona! We can't possibly survive should continue like this,” the Prince shouted as he rose and leaped onto a fallen horseman's saddle, β€œEntering Voltas is our only chance!”

Ona nodded. She wasn't entirely sure she understood everything that was going on. It had been a whirlwind since she had woken. Things were so different and now things were happening very quickly. Her knuckles were white on the reins. She couldn't remember the last time she was even on a horse. She had steered and guided the beast as Lucius had kept their pursuers at bay. Now he rode on his own. Onatha glanced to her left. She dug her heels into her horse and urged it to go faster.

"I do not know where I am going!" Lucius had told her things but she was not at all familiar with the land, the landscape, geography, any of it.

"I will follow you!" She yelled to him.

Lucius shouted in warning as several javelins hurled almost impossibly close before only narrowly clattering against his shoulder guards. He had the Zhayedans and their Emperor to thank for allowing the necessary opportunity to steal a set off a rack amongst one of their many armories. That Ona had not the proper time to acquire her own suit had spelled an annoyance only further exacerbated through the untimely Sipahi arrival and their doggedly relentless pursuit. The Prince made good on proving his promise as a worthy companion and quickly wrapped an arm around the girl's chest-line before his powerful grip handily wrenched Ona backwards in an effort to dodge the additional javelins soaring overhead. The rapid motions yielded their survival as soaring javelins missed their mark or clattered harmlessly off his bowled helmet. The piercing rings and whistling rushes proved enough to test the Prince's morale amidst the rapid gallop across the cobbled roads.

Compounding these developments came the loud bell chimes ringing nearby and as Lucius quickly regained composure, he observed the rising stone walls towering into the skies. Voltas, his former home and capital city; now held under the Sarifen Empire's tyrannical authority. For a moment, mixed emotions flared as long buried, childhood memories resurfaced. Those memories weighed heavily through his heart in lue of familiar sights edging along the city's terraced ramparts before reality shattered the brief relapse. Deafening shouts spread across the walls as warning bells, signal torches, and scattered troop movements alerted the urban garrison's cry for arms. As the city walls continually rose in height, Lucius' sights uncovered several enlarging arches resembling the famous Porte de Patay, one of the city's many gatehouses. Further ahead, the armored garrison billmen quickly marshalled men towards the gate in an ragged attempt to form an entrance guarding, spear-wall. Some meters away, behind the assembling men, the portcullis creaked and clanked as interior gatekeepers furiously heaved to wind the draw bridge upwards.

Calmly, the Prince urged the horse onwards and quickly whipped the riderless horse parallel his companion's position, throwing the beast forwards into a raging frenzy that sent it surging into the half assembled spearwall. As the beast crashed into the armored men, many scattered in disarray as oblivious bystanders and stray horses reared up and around to create open pockets within the frantic garrison lines. Pointing towards the lowering, portcullis and ascending draw bridge, Lucius reigned into full gallop before shouting, β€œCome along, we've only got one chance, Ona so we're going to have to leap over that gate!”

Everything around her fell into disarray as Lucius shouted and for a moment Onatha closed her eyes, wondering if she were still asleep and dreaming near the chained desk.

"Gate," she repeated as her gaze narrowed to where he'd pointed.

Just make it over. Just make it over, she breathed. The sound of the horse hooves was deafening provoking Onatha to cease breaths and as they reached the moated river trench line, time seemed to slow as their horses hurled into a mid air leap ...









β€œIf you cannot control your peoples, I wonder if sparing you and your city so many years ago was a mistake. Do not think we are blind to what happened! The lost shipments were inbound for our men and their seizure was your responsibility. The army is stationed outside this city and will recompense the losses. Clearly Yadin-Hamon is out of your favor for our warships have already sailed within ten leagues away. If there are more misfortunes as is what is clearly occurring, our vessel will soon have their guns trained on the miserly lavatory you call a palace. We will also not hesitate to use your heights to unleash our Sheng Namak-i čīnΔ« on this filthy watering hole. Yadin-Hamon knows our crews have yet to prove their worth. This is our final warning, Souverain. Do not allow any other men to tarnish our stay or the Emperor shall bring all of Sarife to your doorsteps. Heed my words and we may reconsider our recent military deployments. Think on what we have said ...”

Sneering, the Bozorgan of Bactria spit on the royal floors and stalked away, contempt and disgust masking his face. One by one, the Sarifen Δ€zāds and Nezām-e JadΔ«d commanders followed his leave, spitting as they departed the court. As they filed out the main arched entrance, their armed retainer retinues followed before leaving the main throne room largely empty. Only several select retainers, Crown Watch officers, Valanian aristocrats, and Knights remained.

Richter Von Conqvist sat patiently upon his throne as the main palace courts emptied, ever the calculating man that had taken the seat. It was no small wonder a man of his authority could have wielded so much power as the common masses continually suffered. He'd consigned the death warrants of many thousands of labelled heretics and squeezed every bit of coin to be had amongst the surrounding populace, thereby condemned the fortunes afforded towards hard earning artisans and common folk. Who dared challenge the gifts granted in Yamin-Hamon's name? The lowly peasant swine populating his city domain would extort his will through their timeless service. He demanded continuous payments for their lowly existence and the blessing bestowed upon his ability to preserve the realm. Valania owed him its continued preservation and his salvation had thus far kept leash over the Sarifen hounds prowling its doorsteps. So long as coin plied Sarifen coffers and the land's sanctity was continually proclaimed in Yadin-Hamon's name, the Emperor's fury remained largely satiated.

The aristocratic arrival had come amidst the Sarifen empire's agent reports owed towards failed harvests, increased naval piracy, falling revenues, renewed guerrilla activity, and political assassinations. The nightmares brought many a sleepless night, though in hindsight, the cruel happenings were a product of the mismanagement, incompetence, and conspiracies plaguing his kingdom. Conqvist was no stranger to either and in either case, had witnessed much during his reign over Valania. To this end, he would murder thousands more and implicate entire generations if it preserved the status quo. He was the King of Voltas, King of Valania, and the second to none. That the Sarifens dared question his authority amidst the surging activities wrought by upstart swine proved a serious transgression he could not forgive. The most accomplished Kings did not squander their god appointed gifts to rule nor concede any accommodations towards the common masses.

Smirking, the Sovereign King rose and briskly strolled towards the finely polished windows before witnessing the Sarifen patricians disperse through the ornate palace courtyards and lush gardens. They would undoubtedly return before long and inevitably demand his head, that he was certain. Of course they would and to that end, Sarife's ruling elite could certainly try to retake his throne. He surmised they would arrive no later than the thirty first, which was, in all accounts within several weeks, marking the month's end. By then, he feared their ambitions would fall upon a rather unfortunate detour. The game of politics was ever more vicious and he understood all too well how disfavorably calamity affected profits. Men were as fickle as scattering leaves and swayed whichever way the wind blew. Conqvist understood weaknesses where ever they appeared and found that where ever trouble bred itself anew, the generous principle associated towards swinging loyalties lay within the term, plying the coin.

Elsewhere, marauding Sarifen conscripts plundered the surrounding countryside, seizing whatever wealth could still yet be found throughout Valania's villages and townships. The immediate Valania auxiliaries holding station levied no authority to halt the pillaging and helplessly watched as the unchecked Sarifens sacked the villages and desecrated tombs with relative impunity. Further still, some reported findings announced desertions as unpaid levies dispersed to form marauding bands or embarked upon lives as sellswords.

There was no law out in the country side and as Sarife dispatched greater troop build ups, the sooner their coffers emptied. It was simply put, an undeclared war of attrition, and the longer they lingered, the greater their downfall. The world would come crashing down upon Sarife and during that hour, none would mourn their passing. The fickle lords would usurp the Emperor and his Empire would fracture into a large smattering of insidious duchies as the Tyrun Isles had a century ago. The suffering masses were of no concern towards his greater ambitions and to the extent that fate dealt their hands, would continually perish so long as Conqvist consolidated his own authority.

Smirking again, the Sovereign retreated as the last patricians disappeared through the tunnels leading back towards the main palace gates and stared out towards the setting sun over the glittering blue bay. To the west, lay the inland valleys possessing much of the city's agricultural frameworks, to the north stood the peaks where the Kingdom's forges mined and smelted metal ores, and to the east along the palace rear stood the open seas where miners hauled the city's considerable source limestone reserves. Voltas was indeed as much an authoritative center as it was a gem along Southwest Carcassonne.

All the same, the rich tree groves dotting the cliff lines and heights overlooking the city harbor and the surrounding lands would soon be dotted in cannon, trebuchet, and ballistae alike. In time, he would enslave Sarife and amass a fleet to bath the coast in fire, Sarifen blood, and corpses to become sovereign over all of Southern Carcassonne. A quick glance to the west unveiled darkened smoke trails, no doubt the resulting carnage wrought by marauding Sarifen conscripts and mounted guardsmen. Indifferent, his gaze turned east as his sights trained upon the modest seagoing vessels sailing along the glistening coastlines and various fishing galleys. Valania's true saving merit involved its flagrant merchantile shipping lanes. The Sovereign had initially heeded various commissioners and through the course of his reign, approved upon the investments necessary for expansions along several wharf fronts and various dockyards.

The piers, docking platforms, storage facilities, and harbors had theoretically supported renewed trade and elevated income, however, lacking investments along other districts surrounding the dockyards quickly devolved the city into a denizens attractive towards arriving foreign cartels and Ivalian shipping monopolies. Ivalian merchants and financial investors quickly capitalized upon the destination and converted the surrounding facilities towards their own purposes, disrupting local Sarifen traders and former Kingdom seagoing vendors. In regards to localized control, the past few years had proven somewhat disastrous, yet profits continually yielded enough to fill Voltasian coffers.

β€œLadies, gentlemen! I am pleased to have enjoyed your company this afternoon,” Richter voiced upon returning towards his seat along the throne, β€œIn time you will be rewarded for your services to my court and notified following further developments within our beloved city. You are all dismissed ... until further notice. Chaque chose vaut son prix!” Everything is worth its price.

β€œAnd may Yadin-Hamon be praised!” the assembled ranked entourage answered. Silently, the knightly entourage and Crown Watch officers announced silently rose and slowly emptied the halls until only himself and several others remained. The Sovereign smiled and waited for a time as his gaze settled along the decorated domed ceilings. Many elements within his developed frameworking required lubrication and as treacherous schemes entered his mind, he found his thoughts narrowed towards the day's most anticipated events.

β€œEverard,” he jubilantly called, β€œDo inform our esteemed guests that I am ready to receive their audience!”

A portly looking man dressed in fine liveries peeled away from the sparsely assembled court audience, and rushed across the marble floors before reaching a row of famous motifs depicting Valania's ancient founders. Ever the obedient man, Everard gave no notice and simply hurried to activate a lever mechanism connected to one particular tapestry featuring Richter himself. Several oddities along the walls parted as an entire section caved in to reveal a large, glass encased corridor. Offering a welcoming hand, Everard offered a welcoming hand as the Sovereign's heavily armed retainers and most trusted subordinates entered following the Sovereign's entry. Following resealment, the passage's discreet opening once again resumed its proper position along the walls, granting the travelling men and women unrestricted movement. Their travels brought him some ways away before reaching various waiting figures.

To the left stood Saren, the Chief Inquisitor amongst the Sarife's Zendricaanist Inquisition and Valania Proper. His surrounding company featured a ravishing appearing, yet tired looking woman, and several rather strangely dressed Zendricaanist Inquisitors. The Sovereign managed several steps before halting twenty meters. His eyes cautiously darted between the woman and the Chief Inquisitor and in the chamber's gloomy lighting, offered a silent prayer towards the figurines doting the walls. A modest bed, well furnished tables, and book cases spread across the blandly decorated walls and polished, wood plank floors.

β€œSaren, I trust you are well this evening,” Richter grinned in earnest. The man parted arms and through a curt finger snap, summoned a robed courtier. Huffing, the petrified young boy bowed in frightening rapidity before producing a small golden chest. Bowing yet again, the boy departed, granting the Chief Inquisitor space and without hesitation, he swept the small treasury case into his waiting arms. Upon its opening, the shimmering coined contents elicited a wry smile before ultimately provoking the Chief's Inquisitor's humbling bow.

β€œYour activities warm my heart and reassure the Inquisition this city still yet carries Yadin-Hamon's good graces. He is with us and as always, the aptitude he brings our judiciary keepers has delivered added success over the false heretics. Fortunes be praised, the heretics populating this city have tarnished Yadin-Hamon's name. That these swine continually cling to the heresy they still call Augurianity troubles my very being. ”

β€œSubjects,” the Sovereign quickly corrected, β€œYou would do well to heed my words regarding spoken titles entering public ears. The common dwellers remain content and pay their dues, knowing they are more than simple cattle. By name at least, hahaaa.” He procured a malicious laugh, earning widespread chuckles throughout the room's inhabitants.

β€œDo understand the nature surrounding politics, Inquisitor. It will serve you well should the occasion present itself, but ... I digress, we haven't the time to simply impersonate courtly jesters. How is she?”

β€œYou are wise to keep your distance,” Saren retorted, offering a gracious nod before dramatically parting his arm in a cape sweeping flap towards the fatigued woman. β€œWe've managed to subdue yet another bedeviled entity within the seer's own living form. She is a promising prospect and her results have thus far proven very impressive.”

β€œHow many is that this year, hmm Catherine? Five? No … make that six! Gods, woman, you are Victor Delacroix's true successor and your homage would do much honor towards his name. What have you uncovered, dear?”

β€œMuch, your grace, but I fear I am dying. I've tracked your subjects in question for over ten hours each a day and an additional ten hours these past three months. I can only do what my body may allow and I am at my wits ends. I've done everything you've demanded and to exert otherwise is sheer and utter m...”

β€œSaren,” Richter interrupted, β€œThe scriptures please ...”

β€œAs you wish, your grace,” the Inquisitor answered. Bowing, the Sarifen turned towards his fellow judiciaries and following a brief nod, the men immediately set about ripping down the inscribed parcels nailed along various locations along the chamber's walls. A scream echoed across the room before Catherine collapsed to the floor, seizing her head in agonizing shrieks. As the inquisitors removed additional parcels, more screams followed suit, forcing the woman into a spasmic convulsion. Her flails were met with indifference as the other members simply looked on and it was only after several long, drawn away minutes did Richter issue a hand gesture, animating the Judiciaries to action. As they returned the scriptures along their original locations, the woman's convulsions slowed until she lay heaving upon the floor. Smiling, the Sovereign directed yet another hand motion, arousing several Inquisitors to action whereby their forceful motions brought the woman skyward.

Another hand motion motivated Saren himself and following several gestures, the Chief Inquisitor hammered additional parcels, populating the room's scripture plastered walls. As more parcels dotted the walls, Catherine's eyes suddenly lulled over as her breath began to quicken. All at once, she began to spasm again, though in this case pleasurable moans escaped her lips. The woman bit her lip as her back arched towards the ceiling and within minutes, her thighs began to wet. Not long afterwards, the woman began to execute thrusting motions upon her pelvis until she elicited a long and pleasurable moan. As liquids ejected across the floor, amusing laughter filled the chambers as the surrounding retainers and inhabitants watched in fascination. The sphere illuminations began to flicker before pulsating gently and within several minutes, once again projecting the previous individuals' faces.

"Please ... make it stop," she gasped whilst shuddering profusely, "I am perfectly capable of delivering my services for Valania. Please ... mercy your grace!"

β€œI don't usually offer second chances, however, your abilities are of little use to our people if your protests continually jeopardize our freedoms, yes?" the Sovereign taunted as Saren removed the excess parcel scriptures, "We are so close to locating the purpetrators usurping our kingdom, my kingdom and it would do well that you understand the severities threatening our subjects! Now, what … have you found?”

Wheezing, the seer slowly regained composure before tending towards the varying spheres projecting warped images presenting varying individuals. Sighing, Catherine supressed the urge to vomit and simply craned as she lulled into a backwards arch. Her hands pulsed a darkened orange as her eyes shut into utter focus. Several minutes passed before each sphere illuminated enough to project each individuals' exact locations. Silent, the Sovereign watched through curious eyes as the hushed murmurs expanded across the various Inquisitor and retainer ranks. His fingers immediately snapped and a subordinate immediately pried way towards a desk along the chamber's far corners. The Inquisitors followed and the man quickly set to work inscribing various notes along various empty ledgers placed upon the table's cluttered omnibus collections.

After enduring closely observational moments, Richter unveiled yet another finger snapping motion, summoning another figure. A young man wearing entered the room wearing scribe robes, whilst laboring to grip almanacks under his armpits. His sunken eyes and mop laden hair proved stark, familiar resemblance towards the fatigued woman, yet he dared not glance her way lest he face the Sovereign's wrath.

β€œThese men and women,” he began again, β€œThey interest me, Rothion. What have you uncovered? I understand the forks of prophecy are quite numerous, however, given how foolishly your predecessors behaved, I surmise we must follow our customary cautions to ensure the Kingdom's stability, yes?”

β€œYour grace,” the young Valanian carefully answered bowing, β€œI've managed to reaffirm their importance in the coming weeks and months. I cannot neither pinpoint nor predict their exact life routines nor immediate decisions without plying additional forks, all of which may demand exertion on my sense. Of course, if you'll allow me to explain ...”

β€œTell me what you know,” the Sovereign interrupted, β€œWe'll uncover further details as you uncover their future as well as their destinies ...”

The robe wearing man swallowed and cast himself upon the ground before reserving a moment to delicately select his words, β€œThe men and women you speak of; they are without question, the greatest gift ... your realm could ever find. Ensuring their meeting and gathering will follow a fork benefiting your ambitions and survivability.”

β€œEverard,” Richter called, β€œBring the papers and prepare the invitations!”

β€œYour grace,” the portly Everard affirmed as he joined the busy subordinate. The two sat side by side and as the chamber's candles flickered, the portly attendant thought he saw several uncast shadows moving along the walls near the fatigued seer's location. Their forms resembled ghastly shapes only conjured or witnessed in legends, fairytales, and a horrifying nightmare.

β€œGaston! Have you surmised their exact locations?”

The finely groomed subordinate nodded obediently, dipping his ink quill before turning several pages as he glanced between the illuminated spheres and his work below. His cursive filled the pages, describing their exact whereabouts and the descriptions detailing each individual's physical appearance, height, predicted age, apparent nationality, and occupational descriptions. As time passed, Gaston offered his master a question-inducing expression before ultimately acknowledging the Sovereign's curt affirmation. The well groomed man summoned Rothion forth and within minutes, had pinpointed the scribe's matching reports regarding their names and meticulously accounted biographies. Additional ledgers soon filled additional pages along Gaston's almanac, detailing and matching each individual's profile memoir.

β€œEverard, the invitations,” Richter commanded following a brief stroll across the chamber, β€œInclude these exact words along each envelop. To Be Addressed to:. Space. Then ... inscribe the individual recipient's name.”

"When you have reached the cover letter, inscribe these exact words. Salutations from the seigneur de Beauvais, Ecuyer de Aubigne. Honored guest, it is with great pleasure that the seigneur de Beauvais invites you this evening for dinner at the D’Aubigne residence. Dinner will begin tomorrow at half past seven.”

Everard set about scribbling and manufacturing the necessary preparations required towards the various waiting papers and envelopes. His earnest diligence earned notable and approving nods associated towards several nearby Judiciaries. Not especially, the Chief Inquisitor himself evoked a nod as he closely examined the illuminated spheres.

β€œWell now,” Saren amusedly quipped, β€œthe Seigneur de Beauvais? A clever choice! Does that man not own branches throughout the country and abroad?”

β€œHe does, however, his importance is inconsequential towards the fate we have currently chosen! His lavish dinner tomorrow evening will merely prove a means to ensure our legacy continues. Everard, in addition, I wish to include additional invitations towards selected guests amongst our esteemed aristocratic retinue populating our beloved city.”

Several coat fumbles later, the Sovereign unveiled a key before placing it along the courtier's side. β€œYou are permitted to enter vault number forty four. You will find the D'Aubigne's familial seal within the lower chambers. After you've concluded your retrieval, I want those invitations marked, sealed, and delivered before day's end, are we understood? Do this and you shall be handsomely rewarded for your deeds done this day.”

β€œI understand perfectly well, sir!” Everard gleefully acknowledged before moving to depart, β€œI'll ensure their delivery shall begin immediately ...”

β€œWait,” Richter snapped, recovering the courtier's attention, β€œDo revisit our coffers? I fear a direct course of action may require additional gold and ... more persuasive assistance ...”

Beaming, Valania's Sovereign rubbed his chin before several finger motions ushered away the chamber's inhabitants, save Catherine, whose labored breaths devolved into relieving sighs. Upon their departure, a smile escaped his lips as he offered the seer a curt nod before his gaze focused upon a side passage, where upon laughter and giggles filled the air. Richter fell into a rhythmic stroll and confidently traversed through the corridor before ultimately emerging along a lavish, brightly lit bed chamber overlooking the bay. Crystal window panels opened onto various balconies, allowing fresh ocean breezes to course through the wide chamber's opening. His arrival evoked loud giggles as various voluptuous appearing young ladies swarmed his flanks. Groaning, the Sovereign fell upon the cozy bed as the alluring ladies undressed in a spectacular display that concluded the evening in rounded breasts, fleshy thighs, curved buttocks, and voracious fucking ...
Two Weeks Ago - Intermission


"Yeah you know, after that uhhh ... fuck up at Citadel Miwaukee, I haven't exactly been around the block. I'll be honest though, glad to be here and out of the frying pan. You guys fight pretty good."

Sipping his coffee, F.A.S Trooper Peter Tao sat in surprising comfort as his fellow colleagues, Carolyn, James, and Derek flanked him along the bar counter. The gang had only just begun to enjoy a nice steaming brew to revel the recent downtime following a surprising return from Battle Zone Chicago. The resulting outcome could've been a lot worse and in their company, Peter felt only felt too inclined to enjoy the R&R while it lasted. Southeast Sector had been one of the lucky compared to Southwest Sector, where reports of heavy casualties and lost assets had already reached filtered through the ranks. Amidst Brucie's excellent cooking, Battle Zone Chicago's sequence of events had already begun to circulate amongst Bunker Chicago personnel, yet for all it was worth, Peter just wanted to enjoy a damn coffee.

"I've mostly been on mission outside Bunker Washington or near Bunkers New York and Boston. Scary shit up north. You guys don't know want to know what bag of dicks the Yorkies have to put up with. I think you already mentioned the fact food ain't exactly a commodity over there, James, so it's a miracle your buddies even pull off surv..."

Peter stopped in mid-sentence as a pack of uniformed soldiers wearing the insignia, Military Police arrived. The man in center wore officer's stripes that spoke of at least mid-echelon ranking. Sipping his tea, the F.A.S. Trooper curiously eyed the men as their gaze swept across the packed counter and seating hall. Before he could fully assess their arrival, the lead man cleared his throat and voiced, "Is there a Specialist Peter Tao from BWSEC?"

"Yes, that's me,” Peter answered as he lowered his cup, β€œWhat's up?"

β€œI have orders to bring you in and I'm afraid you're going to have to come with us.”

β€œWhat's the issue?”

β€œI don't have authorization for any explanations until we've reached a safe location. We need you to come with us and as in now...” The officer issued several hand signals, prompting the other uniformed men to surround Peter's position. Peter nodded intently as he rose into a surrendering posture, hands held high.

β€œSorry I've gotta split, but uhm … I think Military Police's got a little beef on me.”
"Alright, Specialist, here's the schpiel. We've got a priority one call waiting on encrypted channel two-seven from Bunker Washington's Surgeon Liason and she sounding a little more bat shit. Desperate sounding woman on the other end claiming to be Director of Research. Patching through now.”

The screens blinked to life as the officer flipped and twisted several switches and knobs in a bid to jump start the video uplink.

β€œStand by, Colonel Myers,” the officer uttered, β€œWe've got Specialist Tao on the line."

β€œThank you, Lieutenant. We'll take it from here. Director Tao, we've got your husband. He's alive so it's up to you what you want to do ...”

The F.A.S. Specialist heard shuffling through the audio channels before his jaw dropped as sight of a uniformed woman enlarged onto the massive communication screen.

β€œHoly shit! Hey Kelsey! I was just about to call you, how did you find me?”

β€œPeter?! Oh my god,” the ravishing woman uttered as she cupped her mouth, β€œβ€¦ oh … my god...” Her hands moved to her forehead where after several deep breaths and exhales, the woman returned to fully face the screen and seemed to strain from not panting heavily. Follow several face covered moments, the woman's expression immediately transitioned from frightened relief to something remarkably cold and unforgiving.

β€œBabe, I...”

β€œPeter! Are you in Chicago?”

β€œUhhh… I don't think you're gonna want to hear what I have say. Part of OPSEC and ...”

β€œPeter! You are not answering my question,” Kelsey grumbled as she covered her mouth again, β€œWhat … the fark are you doing in Chicago?”

β€œI'll leave you two alone," the officer uttered before departing. The door's silent closing momentarily gave the two pause before Peter ultimately broke the silence.

β€œListen, Kelsey, just … calm down okay? I owe you an apology for not calling sooner, but you're going to have hear what...”

β€œPeter,” Kelsey interrupted, β€œI have been scrambling through BSEC chain of command for over twelve hours! Do you know what kind of strings I've had to pull to even get on this channel?”

β€œOh geeze, we're in deep shit,” Peter mumbled as fear of their execution surfaced, β€œLet me get this straight. You risked bypassing upper echelon to get a hold of me? I … aw man, aw shit … okay … you want to know what the fark I've been through these past twelve...”

β€œGod damnit, Peter,” Kelsey shouted, β€œDon't what the fuckery me, you almost gave me a heart attack! Just answer my question and …” sighing, the Director pinched her nose as her eyes heavily squinted, β€œ...explain to me why you've been gone for the past two days before I seriously kick your nuts off.”

Peter pulled out a chair and sat, looking away. His vision briefly darkened as his face fell into a distanced frown. β€œIt's bad here and uhhh ...looks like Chicago's in deep.”

β€œOkay ...” Kelsey uttered between controlled breaths, β€œGo on...”

The trooper's gaze returned towards the screen as a sigh escaped his lips. β€œThe higher ups in BWSEC. They know what we're they're doing anddd … with all the mutie traffic, looks like everyone's vamping up the flame bread. We just got sent here and now we're going...”

β€œYeah, no shit, Peter. BSEC's upping security everywhere. My uncle said something about F.A.S.T. shipping out two d… oh my god … you're with F.A.S.T aren't you?”

β€œBabe,” Peter uttered as he gripped the radio microphone. β€œYou're gonna have to let me talk. Yeah ... I'm with F.A.S.T. Beyond that, I really can't tell you what we're doing or else we're both gonna get shot. You have to understand that. Now ... tell me; how's Jimmy doing?”

Massaging her temples, Kelsey exhaled in irritation earning the F.A.S. Trooper's relief. To Peter, that spoke volumes and renewed hopes that his wife had begun to accept their situation's reality. β€œ...he's fine. Built another block fort yesterday without any help. Would be nice if his dad came home, buuuuuut … daddy's out there killing baddies sooo … daddy's off the hook.”

β€œTell him daddy's coming home and that he's learning a thing or two about Chicago style goodness. Come's with job since food here sort of trumps what they're cooking out in Washington. Red tape's not bad either. Think they've even got Nanotech clearance n...”

β€œHang on a sec,” Kelsey interrupted. Siging again, she lifted a finger as other voices echoed on the other end, β€œYes Colonel, we're just about done here.”

β€œBunker boys want their toys back, Peter so ... I'll tell Jimmy that daddy's a big jerk wad.”

Smirking the F.A.S. Trooper grinned before answering, β€œA good jerkwad. You him that!”

β€œSure. Just … ugh ... nevermind. Call me when you're off, okay? Love you.” The Director's finger kiss held for a moment before she planted marks on the camera screen.

β€œLove you too Kelsey. Try to...” Peter blinked as the screen cut off and in a spur of the moment provoked several, virally strung curse words. Sighing, briefly opened his wallet, staring towards a picture featuring a smiling couple and a 2 year old boy. After a time, the trooper stalked away, stashing the photo with delicate precision …
Peter TΓ‘o – U-Arm Wing




β€œWhoa, we're half way there,” Peter sang, crouching below the sandbags in an effort to round off several arm warm-ups, β€œWhoaaaaaaa, livin' on a prayer ...”

The F.A.S. Trooper had somehow found a position parallel the MG positions and found himself staring out towards the empty streets. Downtown Chicago was ugly as fark, but given the way ADAM and Bunker Security called the shots, Peter simply followed orders. He wasn't sure what the other squads were up to, but given that the recent Battalion casualties, he could only hope the muties in Shadow wouldn't get the first jump. Mutant Colossi and Frankenfark were bad enough, but out in the wastelands, Peter could only guess what sort of abominations prowled the Shadow Zones.

In the distance, the Washington native watched as the insertion chinooks peeled away and into the distance, marked by the fading beautiful white-yellow halos so prevalent from most live illustrations of the Kopp-Etchells effect. Somewhere, several hundred miles away, he knew Kelsey and his son were boarding similar looking chinooks enroute to Chicago as part of an aid package to accelerate and continue gene and anti-virus research following Annie's disappearance.

"She brings home her pay. For love, for love ..." his earbuds rang, earning the specialist's smile.

β€œSheeeeit, I can't believe they gave you F.A.S. homies som o'dat power armor,” the black machine gunner to his left voiced, β€œMan, dat shit's fucking beautiful!”

β€œYeah well, I'm not taking any chances, I mean this is farking U-Arm we're talking about," Peter voiced as he completely stashed his MP6 and earbuds, "The way I'm seeing everything, they're gonna try to cut us off, but long as we got our flanks covered, it looks like you're gonna fucking kill something with that MG!” His eyes stared intently towards the post cataclysm streets. He had a feeling Bunker Chicago Security would redeploy him, but with his rolling paychecks, futuristic toys, and christmas-ey firepower, the trooper couldn't complain. He wasn't in the mood for debate given that some higher up decided that upgrades were overdue.

β€œAy man, do I look like I'm worried,” the left machine gunner said. β€œWid you, brother man, imma waste dese mofos.”

Nodding Peter tapped his earpiece as extra transmissions flooded the radio net. Chatter about rigging op zones 8 and 12, power armor infantry escorts, a tank, and riflemen squads nearing the Sergeant's position. That was the first wave and if he didn't know any better, he could almost smell probing teams and infiltration tactics. The F.A.S. Trooper already watched as Marvin plugged the center between the two gunners, but surmised their exposed left and right sectors were prone for flanking. On the other hand, if Bunker Security got the job, maybe they could setup killzones or enfilade fire within a reasonable error margin. A reasonable margin of error, Peter mused as he lifted his LMG cautiously jogged his way to reinforce James' position within the two-story corner store.

β€œRelocating near your position, Yorkie to follow your lead. Cover my six,” Peter muttered into the radio as he carefully swept the corner store's first floor for the best possible overwatch position to James' position and the rear intersection ...
@ Nevis and Peik - I'm not familiar with the pros and cons associated with armor types, but you're both absolutely right in that the plated Maximilian and Three Quarters Armor were very effective during their heydays. Firearms were not entirely refine until later and as such, wearing plate armor could effectively offer its users enhanced protection at the cost of mobility. I'm not sure if they still crane hoisted knights onto horses, but to my knowledge, the armors afforded its users great reliable protection. I do have a soft spot for Almain rivet armor, hammers, mauls, maces, and crossbows, due to fact that they did pack a punch and could inflict some plate wielders serious harm, but their expenses (mainly crossbows) largely accelerated their obselescence following greater fire arm developments.

I have great respect for the both the Landsknechts and the Swiss and I agree with you, Nevis, in that Landsknecht fashions were quite overtly pompous and … like you said … clownish 8). I'm not sure I'd wear any sort of baggish, attire myself unless I entered a royal banquet of sorts, otherwise, the clothes would certainly impede my performance, which would likely leave me severely injured or killed 8P.

Since pikemen dominated battlefields enmasse from the early of the 14th century all the way to the early and mid 18th century, I find Almain Rivet and Breastplates to be quite useful given that state sponsored infantry would have at least acquired breastplates and helmet for protections. As such, training able bodied commoners to wage war outweighs heavily trained nobility or fuedal levies, whom often broke when facing cavalry charges.

@ dreamshell, Ivory, and Nevis – Great characters that need slight tweaking. I've sent messages via PM so after you make those finals tweaks, your characters will be approved!

@ Everyone – First IC Post is in the works, bear with me here as I am busy tweaking it. As a warning, expect long and drawn out sections given that there's a ton of content. I'm also a bit rusty so I'm open to feedback as the story progresses 8)

Edit:

@ Aristo - Didn't catch this, but I thought I'd point out something minor since you included the word Sarafid in your character sheet. They're actually termed Sarife 8).
Sounds like you know your taste, Skulls! Had no idea you had a craft beer blog or that you like dark styled beers. Personally, I'm more of a fan of the lighter, fruitier beers, but that's really just me because I like my sugared wheat flavors, hahaha. I gotta tell you peeps, some breweries draft some really good quality drinks. But hey! Skulls, you should forward a link so we can tap your beverage wisdom 8)

Nevis, interestingly the ReislΓ€ufer and Landsknechts held a fascinating rivalry during their heydays. To my understanding the Landskechts were in much greater numbers and availability while ReislΓ€ufers were generally preferred when available. At any rate, you seem to know your armor so you can tell us your thoughts on the dress patterns between the two. Also looking forward to that CS, Nevis!

- Swiss ReislΓ€ufers
@ Ivory - Please read the Rules and GM Notes!

Glad you could join us, Ivory! Aside from reading the Rules and GM Notes. This is nothing serious, but I'd like to request a minor change, particularly Maria's last name to something more French sounding due to Valania's mostly Ancien RΓ©gime French inspirations. That being said, this is a very minor request to an otherwise worthy character!

@ Aristo - Guillame is approved!

Wow that was fast! Same as I told Ivory in that you'll want to change around the naming, particularly Agnise von Breuburg and the Duchy of Oppenheim. Agnise's last name and estate are remarkably German sounding and Vectis is primarily based on the Western Roman Empire so I must request changes for Agnise' surname and estate to something ancient roman sounding.

I blame myself for not emphasizing this, but be aware that the Vectisian Legions swear fealty to King Winsgate II and would not march across the border without widespread Senatorial approval or the King's approval. Otherwise, Guillame is very approved 8)

@ Fern - The sky's the limit so don't feel shy to throw something out. Doesn't matter if it's 2 or 3 paragraphs; just write from the character's perspectives and enjoy it!

@ Konica - I think the Coal Company's merely Etchelion's company name, but Romaneck would ultimately know best.

@ Skulls - I'm so jealous. Work on the weekends always stifle weekend festivities like Oktoberfest or the Ren Faire. I'm curious about what your favorite craft beer anyways?
Working on a post as we speak so just wanted to let y'all know. Just wanted to say that y'all have some nice armor references! Actually did some research and I found munition and almain rivet/half armor fascinating, especially given they were mass produced. What're your thoughts, Nevis, Peik?
This information is very informative, Nevis, and we appreciate your input given that it provides historical accuracy to what might otherwise seem counterfactual. Being a history buff certainly does have its perks and will help in hammering out realistic mannerisms. As such, links to sources providing historical insight would be a huge help to all of us in helping to refine Altaea.

That being said, I'd ask if you'd reserve from what I'm seeing as tactlessness for the antagonists or we're going to have more than just words. I've been a bit more lenient on the discussions until now and I'd appreciate it if we worked on the plot, historical inconsistencies, and realistic mannerism with a grain of salt and finely drafted beer mug. What I'm saying isn't a personal affront so don't take anything personally, but I'd like to point out that we're not all here for an information pissing match per say, but to write a good story 8).

Regarding the mercenary skill, status, and pay; you make a fine point in that mercenaries were indeed very well paid, dangerous, and all the same, prestigious, both in arms and fashion. On the other hand, the conditions affecting Etchelion could have easily involved several ridiculous incidents where nefarious factions invited the Coal Company to a banquet, poisoned or drugged the drinks, before seizing their baggage train/treasure chest/arms wagons.

Historically, some mercenaries' contracts were subject for betrayal and while this was not common, we could certainly have seen this having happened during the Spanish Empire's history. Indeed, there were moments when soldiers as well as disenfranchised veterans-turned-mercenarii were not being paid or compensated during certain grueling campaigns. Examples could certainly point towards the Thirty Years War or during the Spanish Incursion into Mesoamerica.

In the case of the Spanish lead, Mesoamerican Conquests, Hernan Cortez rallied a somewhat sizeable Spanish strike force when he set sail from Cuba and managed to conquer the Aztecs. The dirty works were of course done by his men and though promised with riches, Cortez ultimately claimed the riches and the prestige for himself, while neither creditting nor imbursing his men for their sacrifices or work.

We can also point towards the Knights Templar, whose humble beginnings as a monastic militaristic order involved abject lack of funds, equipment, or organization. Provided, this did not last long, but can provide a framework for Romaneck. The Knights Templar were also punished and arrested during King Phillip IV's reign due to the fact that he had other plans for France and owed the Order large financial sums. Naturally, he decided on an excuse to dissolve and relinquish the debt through false heresy charges rather than to pay in full.

Edit:

I'd also like to point that even though naming nomenclature is important, I'd say that there's no problem with the name Etchelion, but in regards to names with a 'lion' sounding convention, this link is a fine reference for suitable lion sounding names.

Now … I'd like to say that we're overdue for an IC post, which I'm working on as we speak so keep your sword arm ready 8)

By the way, nice pictures, Peik, aristo. I'd like to display my own timeline image regarding armor styles (courtesy from Romaneck)

Welcome Aristo, welcome! As SM, I'd like be the first to say that your entry into our growing circle would honor us 8). As for the story, it isn't simply Valania's struggle; it's Sarife's struggle too! That being said, it's certainly plausible your character could have retained Vectis, Ivalian, or Vorstian lineage or trained and lived in any nation, however a primarily Vectisian, Vorstan, or Ivalian character would seem out of place. I'd like to make a request that you keep heavy Valanian and/or Sarifen lineage and backhistory set in Valania or Sarife. If you have any questions regarding character drafts, PM something my way and we'll work something out!
@ Romaneck - Etchelion is approved!

Etchelion will make a great addition to the cast and for however much we push Age of Revolution's story, we would all like to see him grow and develop as you, Romancek, reveal more about his character history.

Fern - Ash and Dae are Approved!

Don't be too hard on yourself and don't feel daunted about the other character sheets. Ever character's got a unique history and it takes time to really develop a decent character background! I'd say Dae and Ash's character sheets are perfectly fine and to be honest, I myself struggle with character sheets. The key here is not solely in who drafts the best character sheets, but how the writers craft the story so don't feel pressured! We're all growing writers with strengths and areas for improvement ...

Everyone else - Didn't mean to leave y'all hanging, but I've finally revised my own character sheet! Still working alongside dreamshell, Ivory, and Nevis with character sheets so don't think I've forgotten about y'all! We'll be starting this weekend or Monday at the latest so expect an IC Post 8).

Character Sheet

Name: Lucius Vii Delacroix I

Age: 21

Race: Human

Nationality: Valanian

Allegiance: Valania and Himself

Appearance:
Lucius is a young man of twenty one years standing at a brazen six foot two inches height. His shoulder length black hair falls over his eyes in long thin fringes and is tied in a low ponytail behind his neck like the bristles of a paintbrush. His dark blue eyes are only further enhanced behind gold tanned skin of clean radiance and the lean, athletic build speaks volumes of his well defined muscles. Sharp and seductive in all respects, the Valanian heir's features strongly resemble his father and grandfather. On the move, Lucius' prefers a white, long sleeved tunic, an ordinary belt sash, and dark trousers. For public occasions and social gatherings involving higher courts, the man sports much more aristocratically luxurious clothing.

Notable Skills and Abilities:
- Able blade master and marksman, though far from a master in either.
- Accomplished tactician, strategist, and leader
- Intuitive intellect and animal cunning
- Highly developed knowledge of psychology, philosophy, oration and manipulation
- Adept at stealth and sleight of hand
- Knowledgable in the arts, sciences, history and economics

Equipment:

As a guest to the Vectisian embassy, Lucius owned little to nothing save his name, the Le Crosse heirloom pendulant, a dagger, and the clothes on his back. His Vorstan teacher Sytonia managed to both cultivate his own sleight of hand and ingenuously channel his strengths to quickly master the improvised and crudely effective arts associated towards lock pick crafting.

Other Notes:

- Despite his athleticism Lucius at times, displayed physical frailty; so much so that he sometimes became prone to physical relapses and in his own words 'cursed with the body of a noble, rather than a warrior most unsuited to war'.
- Heavily conflicted regarding his previously vengeful desire to eradicate Sarife and its peoples
- Harbors a deep found respect towards Sarife's Imperial Prince Bahramesh II and Princess Farah

Biography:

Lucius was born Lucius Vi Delacroix, to Lothair and Celestine Delacroix, the unusually pragmatic rulers to Valania. As the young prince of Valania, his birth came at a tumultuous and altogether turbulent moment in Valania's history. The Delacroix family line had expanded throughout the years, yet decades of mismanagement and incompetent corruption had allowed certain cancers to fester within the Kingdom's own institutions. All the same, the lack of a male heir earned the eyes of many a conspiring aristocrat and it was following Lucius birth that his mother Celestine convulsed in terror following the oracle Lyscia's prophecy that he would destroy the world. Shortly after delivery, word reached the rulers that fires had burnt down the Temples of Yadin-Hamon and Athirat. Rumors soon circulated throughout the Kingdom regarding Lucius' arrival and that both Yadin-Hamon and Athirat had left their sacred temple sanctuaries to accompany his birth.

His early years were considerably happy ones and time spent with the various children, most notable the eldest of the L'Fevre line, Daelynn L'Fevre. The delightful and pleasant days grew increasingly fewer as Lothair pulled Lucius away for horseback training amidst reports that border skirmishes had increased between the Kingdom's Hussars and Sarife's Sipahis. Soon afterwards, Lucius had barely turned 5 years of age when both Lothair and Celestine were brutally assassinated, thereby vacating the Valanian throne. As the Crown Prince and the royal family's direct male heir, Lucius was immediately elevated near the throne where his retainers, including his uncle, were called to manage the state's affairs until a time in which he was deemed old enough to take the crown.

Matters changed, however, when assassins arrived again to slay his younger brother, Rothion, his two younger sisters, Catherine and Ryanna, and himself. Coincidentally, the assassin architect overplayed his hand, having believed he had effectively removed the throne's primary obstacles and in a dramatic political push, offered a conditional marriage proposal towards Lucius' elder sister Marianne to seal his rise to power. Unbeknownst to him, the assassination attempts failed after Lucius struck down the assassins with his own hands.

Shortly afterwards, the Crown Prince uncovered his own uncle as the sole mastermind behind the treasonous dethroning operation and ordered his arrest, trial, and execution by firing squad. His ruthless and calculating nature revealed that Lucius' early age talents showed promise and that given time, would become a capable and competent Valanian ruler. It was not long, however, before Valania's Sarifen neighbors invaded his land and crushed the Kingdom's vast armies before annexing all of Southwest Carcassonne in one fell swoop. With Valania's fall, came the dismantling of Carcassonne's only line of defense separating the titanic Sarifen Empire from overpowering the other remaining, Carcassonnian Kingdom.

Lucius, his childhood friend Daelynn of the ancient L'Fevres, and his younger sister, Ryanna, escaped the ensuing political purges that followed the Sarifen annexation, having managed to acquire asylum within the former capital's Vectisian embassy. His brother Rothion and older sister Marianne could not properly elude the Sarifens and disappeared shortly after their capture where rumors of the execution soon surfaced. It was not long before news soon spread regarding the Sarifens and their decision to elevate a new ruler to Valania; a vassal of Sarife's emperor by the name of Richter von Conqvist. Upon learning the news, Lucius’ vengeance set aflame and following the Conqvist's unchallenged rise to power, vowed to do anything to uphold and resume his duty as their one true ruler.

Aspiring to regain his kingdom and free its people from their oppression at the hands of the Sarifen Empire, Lucius vowed from the moment Emperor Aryanpur I seized Voltas that he would suffer through unspeakable lengths to achieve this; no matter if cost Sarife their armies and sovereignty. Patience and proper execution became the better part of valor and it was these principles that he found Valania's liberation not a right, but a duty. Sometime before he departed the Vectisian Embassy in Voltas, Lucius promised Ryanna he would return for he held her dear to none in Carcassonne and the world.

To preserve the vow to reclaim Valania, Lucius and Daelynn escaped Voltas and parted ways. His journey across Valania proved anything, but pleasant and he witnessed cruelty and barbarism beyond reckoning at the hands of marauding Sarifen conscripted soldiers. He managed to learn much of their ways and survived several close calls against various patrols before collaborations alongside Vectisian smugglers managed his timed escape into the mountains leading into Vorstian governed territories. Eventually he found his way to the great, marble-lined Vorstian capital, Averna, where he became an honored guest in King Drago VI's magnificent palaces. In his heart, though, he knew that his prolonged residence would solidify his peoples' suffering and before long he fell into a shameful despair.

A short time later, Lucius' pursuits stole King Drago's attention and earned the Prince's access towards several Vorstian schools of thought, where he became close friends with the Vorstian philosopher, academician, and scientist, Sytonia. The elder man tutored Lucius, in culture and philosophy, strategy and tactics, politics and manipulation as well as in the arts of psychology and leadership. He also proved instrumental in securing the boy's entry into the Agoge Ludus, the brutal Vectisian Military Academy in Altair, where only handpicked fighters learned to properly exploit the famed Vectisian arts of close quarters combat. Sytonia continued to spill his wisdom acquired during his travels to distant lands and over the years Lucius developed a profound animal cunning and deadly skill in fighting whilst also mastering the classics in an almost terrifying voracity.

As Lucius entered adolescence, he began to enjoy various intellectual pursuits before first and foremost becoming exceptionally learned in the classics, arts, and histories. In his studies he developed a great interest in the sciences, though he kept alchemical and mystical sciences at a distance due to his distaste for their methods and the belief that they β€˜corrupted the soul’, a remnant of his Puritanis Augurian upbringing. The great intellectual disciplines consumed much of his late childhood, however, memories of the War still burned fiercely and for a time, the entire Sarifen Empire as a whole became the subject for Lucius’ scorn and branded hatred as it had during his early upbringing as Valania's Crown Prince. He considered the nation his sworn enemy as his Lothair continually affirmed and sought to do everything in his power to ensure its destruction.

As a academician, Sytonia continued to deliver his intellectual instructions and theories, but soon came to understand the boy’s intentions well enough to know that his Valanian pupil sought revenge on those who had damned him to exile. Dismayed, he discouraged the eye for an eye aphorism and had a profound influence on tempering Lucius' rage as he grew into young man of irrefutable talents.

Shortly before Sytonia's death, his influential teachings unknowingly cultivated Lucius' firm belief in the philosophy that β€˜the ends justified the means.' To this end, the use of whatever methods he deemed necessary to achieve his purpose became a mainstay in a long list of underhanded counter-measures. This included but by no means stood limited to theft, bribery, blackmail, and murder. Nevertheless, time secretly spent with Sytonia and other philosophers groomed his strict sense of justice and personal creed, to which he swore an abiding oath.

Having mostly lost all he held dear Lucius believed he had little to fear and following his graduation from the Adoge Ludus news reached Vectis that Ryanna had been exposed, manipulatively wedded to the powerful Lord Eyrial Elireth, and bore child. Additional reports soon arrived regarding the fact that slave ships carrying Valanian captives had been seized within Vectisian and Ivalian ports while enroute to other nations throughout the globe.

Compounding these revelations, word reached Altair regarding Rothion and Marianne's declarations of dead along with Conqvist's growing hold over Voltas along with reports that Sarifen commanded, Valanian auxiliaries were challenging a guerilla resistance operating throughout Valania's countryside. These developments surfaced a restlessness not unmatched since the day Lucius watched the Sarifens overrun Voltas and though embarrassed, admitted to a new found thrill towards fighting, killing, and exacting revenge. The news of his younger brother Rothion's death proved especially disturbing and shook him so dearly that he vowed to hunt Emperor Aryanpur and his family to a man, even if his reputation suffered. His pursuits brought him back through Carcassonne's Northern territories and into Sarife's heartlands, where upon his visits to Orad and other Sarifen cities became too great to count. Many incidents involved masking the crown Prince and Princess of the Sarifen Empire and through almost animal-like stalking, found their traits to be both likable and genuine.

The realization that they shared more in common than he would have liked caused him much distress and conflict, given that his burning desire to murder Emperor Aryanpur's entire family and slowly begun fade. One day, in the burning autumn sun, an enormous earthquake engulfed Orad and the unthinkable happened as Lucius risked his life to rescue the Sarifen heir and his sister. The altercation unknowingly brought Valania and Sarife's Crown Princes in company and not long afterwards, the three soon shared a close bond. Lucius found almost inseparable and for a time, learned much regarding Sarife's more favorable qualities as well as its ancient traditions. He quickly came to consider both Bahramesh and Farah close to his heart, whilst visiting Orad though he could never forgive their father and the Empire's power mongering aristocrats for the suffering that it caused both him and commoners alike.

Sometime later, Lucius was mistaken for one of the Emperor's escaped Valanian slaves and arrested following a city-wide manhunt. The altercation temporarily landed Lucius within Orad's most repulsive dungeons; however, through Prince Bahramesh's rhetoric and display of remarkable fighting skills, Emperor Aryanpur became so impressed that he issued a decree that decidedly spared Lucius life while elevating his status to that of a closely guarded court entertainer. This unusual circumstance also granted the Valanian Prince freedom to roam the royal grand palaces and hanging gardens, something he enjoyed thoroughly as continually plotted to assassinate the Emperor of Sarife with a complete and burning hatred. Lucius' fortunes were short lived, however, and before he could formulate a viable assassination attempt could be before various intelligence agents operating within Orad's palaces recognized Lucius' true identity, whereupon they immediately alerted the Emperor and his most trusted Zhayedans. Exposed and facing enemies on all fronts, Lucius launched an audacious escape and managed to steal the Emperor's finest steeds before outrunning pursuing Zhayedan teams. His ordeals while on the run only hardened his resolve and he soon found himself working along the coastlines, where he quietly rejoined various Valanian resistance circles.

Following his arrival, the beleaguered insurgents found a steadfast aura of nobility surrounding his every visit whilst his clear, soft voice, impressive intellect, and natural oratory skills acquired whilst residing within Vectis commanded both attention and extraordinary respect. Not one to idle, Lucius soon proved his abilities as both a master strategist and tactician in addition to his remarkable fighter prowess as Valanian resistance efforts under his command yielded spectacular advancements in the drive to cripple Sarifen occupational strength. Throughout his efforts and bids to convince his oppressed countrymen, Lucius found himself at odds with various Valanian resistance leaders whom accused him of treason for acting against various Valanian auxiliaries. Lucius' famed answer involved the reality that Valania could not afford to allow traitors of any kind to exist and that without unwavering dedication towards its peoples, Valania and her resistance resembled nothing of reputable value. His words managed to earn greater support in his bid to punish Emperor Aryanpur and his aristocratic retinue ...
Another Note:

Just thought I might also throw another soundtrack your way to chew on during the intermission before the IC. Enjoy ...
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