Kasachi Hyouta:@Zombehs I understand leaving some of the bio free so that you can fill it up later with the other characters.
Now, moving up to the next parts of the review.
Brutal, very much so. I like how his convictions are to protect those he considers as siblings.
The double kagune is a cool add-on, and the kakuja seems more for protection rather than actual fighting, aye?
In any case, you did answer my question, though not quite in the fashion I expected xD
So, yes, I do not see anything glaringly wrong with it as of now. I look forward to seeing how he will develop in the future, and I get the feeling that his good natured could be rather easily corrupted by using the others.
Accepted. Feel fee to post him over in the Character tab-
Itsuki@Raijinslayer: Another 'I got to protect my siblings' with a Kakuja.
I like the concept of his kagune and kakuja though.
His backstory is also cool, reminds me a bit of Kimi and Nishiki. Plus the Dove and cannibal bits.
You however, forgot to add the answer to the question asked in the OP xD
There are also some typos here and there in the backstory, so I'd like it if you could fix 'em.
His somewhat emo persona goes with the edgy effect I wanted for the RP, so that's cool too.
So, just fix some of those typos and add the proof of having read the rules and it'll be accepted.
In other news, I'm working on my own character now. Probably going to be a girl.
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