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Y'know, now I want Deadpool to interact with all the SHIELD folks and bignames and the like eventually. By the way as I go along constructive criticism is welcome. I've never done Wade before, so it might take me a bit to find an appropriate writer's voice with him.

Criticism of my Iron Fist stuff is welcome too I guess, though in that case I may cry like a baby over what a loser I am.


Doing a great job with Wadey so far. No problems here. I'm interested to see how (and if) you'll handle his tendency to break the fourth wall.
Ah, right. Duh. I forgot that other people have lives. Huh.

Weird.
Is it time?
100th IC post! Yay!

Where's my prize?




Chapter Four
Monday, 21st March, 2005
12:02:59.001pm


The yellow suit. Those red eyes. That backwards symbol. And that smile. That sick, twisted, evil smile.

Thawne was back. He was back to haunt me.

Everything was still; my wife, Wally, Harkness… everything. Everything but him. Thawne. The man that killed my mother. The man that ruined my life.

He just stood there, smiling that smile of his, Iris and Wally behind him, frozen expressions of shock glued on their faces. The boomerang, the one Harkness threw, balanced on the tip of his finger, as still as everything else, mere seconds away from exploding. Something told me that that would take a while.

Anger and fear, rage and caution, all mingled in my head. This was it. The moment I’d been dreading since almost a year before. Fists clenched tight, I grated out the one question on my mind. “What do you want.”

And he laughed. The son of a bitch laughed.

“What do I want, Barry? What do I want? Can’t I just check on an old friend?”

He threw the boomerang, sending it arcing towards the sky.

“What do I want, Barry?” He walked past me, in Harkness’ direction. “What do I want…” His hand started vibrating, a blur of yellow, red lightning curling around it.

My eyes widened as I realised what he was about to do. “Thawne, don’t-- ”

But it was too late. His hand pierced through Harkness’ chest, finding his heart in an instant. The mercenary died before he knew what hit him.

“I’ll tell you what I want, Barry,” Thawne said, turning back to me. “I want you to suffer.”

12:02:59.002pm


“That’s why I came back,” he explained. “That’s why I came back to this exact moment. You see, Barry... It’s at this point in time that the history books say you changed. Where the Flash went from hero… to villain. They say that when Captain Boomerang tried to kill your family, you snapped. They say that you murdered him in cold blood, crushing his heart with your own hand. But we know better, don’t we, Barry? We know that it wasn’t you.

“But they did get something right. You see, Flash, you did snap-- but not mentally. Oh, no-- not yet. That comes later. No. You snapped time. Haven’t you been wondering why everything just stopped moving? Why we can have this conversation, while your beautiful wife stands frozen as a statue? You broke the time barrier, Barry. And with it, your life.

“But the books don’t stop there. No. They talk of how when you killed the captain, you withdrew from society. How you stopped caring. The Gem Cities spiralled into chaos, and you, Barry, you let it all happen. Because it was all too slow.

“You let your friends die. Your family. Your nephew, your father, your wife-- you stood by as they died, second after second ticking by, a small piece of yourself dying right along with them. But in the end, you didn’t care. You just stood by as it happened… right by my side. And do you know what’s funny, Barry? It’s all going to happen again. And you’re going to let it.”


“No,” I said. I refused to believe him. “You’re lying.”

“Oh, but that’s the beauty of all this,” he turned his back to me, walking away. “The only one lying to you… is you.”

I didn’t know this then, but later… when everything went from bad to worse… I would find out.

He was telling the truth.

12:02:59.003pm
The sweet, tangy sensation of mayonnaise. That soft, spicy undercurrent of sweet chilli sauce. The smoky deliciousness of grilled chicken, mixed with the juicy freshness of tomato and lettuce. And the cheese. Oh god, the cheese. Peter Parker had never gotten lucky, but that was okay. This kebab was so much better.

Sitting on a rooftop, legs dangling over the edge, he savoured each bite as he cast his gaze over the borough they called Queens. He liked it well enough. It was, after all, where he lived. The trees were nice. The air was nice. The people were nice, most of the time. But there was just something about it that he couldn’t put his finger on, something that hurt the very essence of his soul… Oh, yeah. The buildings. He couldn’t swing on them. They were too damn short.

The kebab vendor was its only redeeming quality.

“Hey, kid!” yelled some guy from below, standing on the sidewalk.

Peter, halfway through another mouthful, said, “Hmm?”

“Get off my roof!”

Peter chewed. He chewed some more. Then he swallowed. “Hey, no way, man. Finders keepers. I got here first.” He took another bite. “Wow, this kebab tastes good.”

“But that’s my roof!” whined Some Guy, “My apartment’s roof!”

Chew. Chew. Swallow. “Nice.”

“So get off!”

“Hey, listen, guy,” he paused to wipe some sauce from his mouth, “I’m just trying to eat here.”

“Yeah, well, you better not get any on-- ”

“--Your roof, yeah I get it. Now please, I’m almost done. Can’t you just learn to share?”

“If you don’t get off on the count of five, I’m calling the cops!”

“Now sir,” Peter said, shuffling on his behind away from the roof’s edge, “That really won’t be necessary.” Out of Some Guy’s view, he removed his backpack, extracting from it its contents. Suit: check. Mask: check. Web shooters: check. “Because,” he continued, hurriedly putting said items on, “I,” he stood up, in full view of the street below, “Have taken care of it.”

“Spiderman!” exclaimed Some Guy in surprise.

“That’s right. Have a cookie.”

“You got that kid off the roof?”

“Yup. You’re welcome.”

“So, uh… how about you get off it, too?”

“They don’t do this to Captain America…” muttered Spidey, dejected. Half-eaten kebab in one hand, backpack in the other, he leapt to the neighbouring roof, turning to address Some Guy for one last time. “You happy?”

“Yes,” said Some Guy, “Thank you.” A smile on his face, he entered his building, not bothering to grace Peter with anything other than the bird.

None of this would have happened if I was on the Avengers… thought he, lifting his mask to take yet another bite of his delicious chow.
Sorry guys. I really like Gareth, and the characters you've all created, but I'm just not feeling it anymore. Once again, I apologise, and I wish this game a lengthy life.
After heaps of time spent procrastinating writing, I present to you the third Flash post. Shit's getting real.




My name is Barry Allen, and I’m the fastest man alive.

That used to mean something to me. It used to fill me with confidence, make me want to be better, to use my powers to help people. I would wake up every morning with refuelled optimism, thinking that whatever went wrong, wherever I went, I could fix it-- that I would fix it. That I’d care enough to make a difference. To stand for something.

But that was before.

That was before Zoom.



The house was empty. Dark shadows everywhere, the only light above the kitchen bench; a phone. Not mine. Not Iris’. I heard her voice, a desperate cry for help. “Barry!”

She was in trouble. But where--? I searched for her, my head turning, sharp movements. Panic seized me. Fear clouded my thoughts. “Iris?!” I called. “Iris?!” Where was she? What was happening to her? Where was she?

“Iris?”

Nothing.

Only the insistent ringing of the phone.

Ring.

Ring.

Ring.

Click.


“Hello? Iris?”

“No, Barry. Zoom.”



Chapter Three
Monday, 21st March, 2005
4:05am


I woke with a start. Heavy breaths, skin clammy. The bed sheets damp with my sweat. Beside me, someone stirred. I exhaled in relief, breath shaky. Iris. She was safe.

“Barry?” she asked, touching a hand to my cheek, “Are you okay?”

"Yeah," I said between gulps for air, "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to wake you. Just had a bad dream."

"Do you want to talk about it?”

I looked at her, meeting her sympathetic, worried gaze. “No. No, it’s okay. You should go back to sleep.”

“No, come on,” she patted me on the chest, “I’ll go make some hot cocoa.”



Tuesday, 22nd March, 2005
12:00pm


That’s when it started.

When time froze. When people stood motionless, as unmoving as statues; when sound, loud and quiet, failed to reach my ears; when every insect, every bird, every animal failed to move; when light seemed to stop in its tracks; when the Earth itself stood still. I could see every particle, every speck, every grain. I could see everything, and everyone. All because Digger Harkness threw a boomerang at my wife.

The Rogues’ token Australian, Digger quit the group a few months back over a disagreement with their captain, Cold. Before he joined up with them, he worked as a mercenary. Anyone that needed a job done, they hired him, because as stupid as Captain Boomerang sounds, he was efficient-- lethally so. And when he left the Rogues, he did just what his boomerangs did. He came back. A mercenary once more.

He was back in town for a job. Whoever hired him wanted him to rob a man called Francis Flashman, known to his associates as Funky, and beat the hell out him while he did it. In another world, I wouldn’t have minded. Flashman was a scumbag, known for being a con man from Hell, scamming all who dared to be his clients. Being a public relations officer, that could only spell bad things for his customers, for both their finances and reputations. But I was the Flash, and as far as I was concerned, Harkness was my responsibility. No matter who he was hired to hurt.

I found him at Flashman’s building, a small office on lease in downtown Central. It was an ugly thing, all faded paint and cracked plaster, its entrance a disgusting, vomit-yellow door, as if I needed any more reasons to dislike the guy. I heard a scream-- Flashman-- before the door, with a satisfying crash, flew off its hinges, Francis right behind it.

“Get away from me-- get away-- ” A boomerang skimmed past his face, turning in midair before flying back into Captain Boomerang’s hand. Blood trickled from two symmetrical cuts on Flashman’s greedy little cheeks.

“‘Fraid I can’t do that, mate,” said Harkness, a toothpick wedged between his teeth. “A job is a job, and this one just so happens to be one where you get the everlivin’ crap hit outta you. Lucky for you, it won’t make much of a difference. Face looks like a kicked-in shitcan, anyway.”

With a flick of his wrist, he threw the boomerang again, sending it spinning through the air at Flashman, cowering on the ground as he steeled himself for contact--

--that never came. Having intercepted the projectile, I turned on my heels, running back to take Flashman to safety. With him out of the way, I ran back to Harkness, who, in the predictable fashion of a Rogue, threw a boomerang in my direction; one that I ducked without difficulty. An audible “Oof,” escaped his lips as I barged into him, arm outstretched in a haymaker. He hung like a coat for a brief second, my momentum not allowing him movement, and I pushed him off, sending him rolling along the road before he came to a stop.

Then, a laugh. But not Digger’s. Not mine. Someone else’s. A disembodied voice, coming from every direction, all at once. “Ha. Ha. Ha.

And all of a sudden, faster than even I could register, we weren’t in downtown Central. We were at the park. Green grass, tall trees, picnic tables… and people. People like Iris. Iris… and her nephew.

Wally.

He’s a great kid. At sixteen years old, he was the mirror image of Iris’ dad, Joe. If they were seen together (if Joe was still alive), I don’t doubt that people would’ve thought that he was Iris’ younger brother. Red hair, green eyes, a smile almost always on his face-- yeah. He was a West. No doubt about it.

Iris hadn’t told me that he was in town. I’d met him before; whenever he had a disagreement with his dad, Rudy, his parents would send him down to stay with us. I liked him, and I like to think that he liked me. We never had a dull moment when he was around.

But someone he liked more was the Flash. Every visit, he asked the same questions: Did you see him? Were you there when he stopped the Rogues? Can he really do all the things they say he can?

So when he said, “Is that… the Flash?” It wasn't much of a shock. Not as much as it was arriving at the park with Harkness in tow, faster than my eye could see. And as I stood there, disbelieving and disoriented, he decided to take advantage of the situation. He threw a boomerang. An explosive boomerang.

Right at my family.

And just like that, time stopped moving. And everything changed.

“Hello, Barry. Long time no see.”
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