SAKI AMOU
“Bang”
NAME
Saki Amou
AGE
17
GENDER
Female
APPEARANCE
Saki Amou is pretty short in most cases standing at a 5’2” She has long snow white hair that reaches her knees. She often keeps her hair neatly combed into twintails of sorts where it’s out of her way for most cases. Her bright purple eyes are often a subject of debate as depending on the lighting can appear as pink or blue as some people say. Though one aspect of her body that is often the center of attention is her well developed chest which seems to be what people see most. Though she has no preference in what she wear more often than not it will contain the color red.
ORIGIN
Amou Yakuza Clan
A large Yakuza clan ran by Ryou Amou despite their less than pleasant nature and appearance they are largely not what many would think of overall when picturing yakuza. While yes their business is semi illegal at best. Overall their main focus of profits revolve around selling of goods off the black market and running of multiple underground betting rings. Though not widely known they are also owners of a highly successful fast food chain Big Bang Burgers. They are often able to back up their strength with their large size and funding from their “businesses”. Often than not they only use their strength when provoked when they are attacked first. Preferring to remain peaceful in most things they often leave others uncontested till it starts to involve them. With that said they are often peaceful in most parts till it comes to defending or taking back what is theirs. Hm. I can live with this.
PSYCHOLOGY
Personality W
Saki is drawn to challenges for the sheer thrill it can give. She can be flamboyant in the long run going for the largest bang possible to finish things off. She is often cheerful to the point of being annoying to others but when push comes to shove she is serious when it counts. Despite this she is a kind person willing to help her friends and other should they need it. Though she is perfectly willing to attack people who talk about things she doesn't like or act perverted. She knows that what her family does and is in full support of it and despite everything does what she can to help. This has endeared her to clan making her even more treasured than just being the boss's daughter. Saki is also a bit of glutton knowing for eating a lot and often though often than not it is said it goes to her chest by others.
Goals H
Saki doesn’t see it as a goal so much as a promise which is she wants to do her “family” proud no matter the costs. At first it was mainly to her clan but over the past three months she had a revelation of sorts rather she wants to protect her friends and family including the vongola familia. These are really short for having subheaders.
Doubts Y
Though Saki can be called confident in her pursuit of her goals she does have her own fears. Failure is something that can be called a big factor she tries to succeed no matter what however she fears failure and what disasters can come from it. Ditto
HISTORY
Saki was born as the sole heiress to the Amou family a large and influential Yakuza clan. Though in the public she was heiress to a mass multi million fast food company. Growing up for most of her life was a bit rough on Saki she never knew her mother due to her dying upon childbirth. While her father was often busy for various reasons such as managing the company that was the front for them to the actual dealings that was going on. Though she rarely had friends when growing up her bodyguards meaning well and the like scared off possible friends and others was just in it to use her money.
Things changed when she was ten years of age. A opposing family seeking fame or perhaps a method to make themselves known kidnapped her one day after knocking out her guard for the day. She was placed and gagged as they started to demand ransom for her safe return. Though the Amou family refused to falter and rather sent out multiple search parties in the mean trying to locate her. It got the point where the Vongola family offered their aid in the search in return for a possible alliance with them. It was through this newly united front that the Amou with aid from the Vongola managed to located Saki. It was upon her safe return that her father Ryou with a heavy heart told her everything about his business and why she was targeted in the first place. It was than that Saki made a promise with her father. Together they would work together to make sure that she would be able to defend herself. While both had different mindsets for why a deal was struck.
It was through a bit of hardship and trial but as the years passed Saki took to her training like a sponge to water. It was also discovered that she had a very keen aptitude towards firearms. It didn’t matter what kind of firearm was placed in front of her she was able to use each with skill that often spoke of training for familiarity of the weapon at hand. As the years passed the effects of her training started to show in startling ways she blossomed into a young beauty a deadly rose. It was around when she was 15 years of age that she started to take an active hand in the family’s business at first it was nothing more than managing the underground betting rings. Though she quickly proved through skill and willpower that she knew what she was doing which eventually attracted the Vongola’s attention to her once more though in a different way than last. Hm. I can work with this.
FLAME
Storm
ASPECTS
Multiple Flames - Saki is able to use two flames Being Storm and Cloud Flames. While her strongest flame is Storm, she has enough Cloud Flames to use as a supplement when in battle. This is fine.
Magic Gunner - Saki is able to use any and all types of firearms with skill even upon first use. While she is unsure on where this came from or that Saki is able to use firearms with skill no matter what type they are even upon her first use. Feel like you could expand on this a bit more since it's just two sentences that say the same thing.
SPECIALIZATION
Sharpshooting - Through specialized training from when she was young, she is able to hit the bullseye or key spot on most targets with ease. Even though I'm not asking for much, this isn't enough. You need to expand more on this.
Gun-Fu - A style of fighting unique probably not to Saki in which she mixes the basics of chinese kempo with her guns to create something that is all her own. Though she prefers to keep things to at a range she does fall back to her “gun-fu” as it was later called by some people when people manage to come close up. Where did she learn Kempo? Why'd she try to mix them? etc. etc.
EQUIPMENT
C-Rank Storm Ring - Although not the highest or greatest of rings Saki carries a issued storm ring given to her by the Vongola.
Vongola Storage Boxes - A series of storage boxes containing a series of customized firearms for Saki’s use. In appearance they are often white and red carrying the Vongola crest on the side. They contain rifles, grenade launchers, shotguns, and two large gatling guns. Beyond that there is a few extra boxes designated for Ammo for all her guns even the S&W M36. Your ammo won't be Dying Will Bullets FYI. Also I feel like, based on what's in the sheet, the use of gatling guns seems out of place since she's more of a marksman than a heavy gunner based on build. I can buy grenade launchers since they require a degree of judgement, but the precise shot aspect is absent from gatling weapons. Maybe an AR instead?
S&W M36 Revolver - A specialized “Chief Special” given to Saki on her 16th birthday from her father. It is a lightweight 5 shot .38 shot with a customized 2 inch barrel. Inscribed upon the right side of the gun is the phrase “Hana yori dango”: Or rather Dumplings over flowers. A saying her father always told her. Meaning substance over form. Saki keeps it on her person at all times often hiding it in odd places. I like it.
Codibugnolo Di Tempesta - A small bird box animal taking the form of a long tailed tit. Storm flames coat the wings of this bird leaving behind a trail of embers from its wings with each flap often similar to most depictions of a phoenix. While it may look useless for combat situations due to its cute and often fluffy appearance. The fact remains that it is the exact opposite despite its small size it often uses that to its advantage using its wings to cause damage that way. So it's good for body blows, gotcha.
RELATIONSHIPS
Family
Ryou Amou (Father) - Saki loves her father dearly as he was always there for her and gave her what she needed. While he was tough on her at times he always meant the best for her making sure she was able to take care of herself. Her father is avid fan of martial arts and cheesey movies. Often dragging her into marathons of it though they always end up having fun with them.
Senna Amou (Mother) - Saki never knew her mother much due to her dying upon childbirth. She has heard a lot of things on her mother but is overall unsure on how she actually feels about her. Love is something that is a given but without really knowing her she is unable to truly say much on her.
Close friends
Saaya Dojima (Caretaker) - Saaya was Saki’s caretaker for most of her childhood being more of a childhood nanny than anything else. Due to how busy her father was Saki was often left in Saaya’s care. Saki looks up to Saaya in a way a child often looks up to a hero or guardian.
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Your subheaders in the personality section are unnecessary and stand out. You could just as easily condense them into one or two paragraphs and be no worse for wear. You could also stand to expand more on certain aspects of your sheet. Beyond that it's just the usual capitalization and grammatical stuff, but I can probably let that pass knowing your IC is better.
But yeah, you need to refine it a bit more before I can clear you. Sorry.