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Made a few edits based on the suggestions! I've changed her powers so she cannot shape the energy just use it as a burst or shot but i can't see how else to change it without not giving her energy powers

Are you still accepting characters. I have a character that would be great for this :)
Sorry for the delay! I have had a crazy past week with meetings, trips, lectures and a heatwave! I'll have a character up tonight.
On a side note : I haven't quite decided yet but is any Jedi looking for a padawan?
So sorry I've been racing around like a mad man in meetings and lectures. I'll tinker with the form after my lecture this morning!

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I do have a question: did you read the other characters' that have been accepted bios?


Yes I did. I have just had this character for a couple of years from an old mutants and masterminds campaign. I altered her for this form and then read the others. That's why it was pretty much done when I found out the similarities

You guys still accepting characters? I need me some KOTOR roleplay!
Only just saw this now: as I'm not a GM, I can't really dictate to you what should be changed, but hopefully we can come to an agreement.
I love the character, but yes, I do think she is far too similar to Nightingale. Both in terms of skills and powers. Again, I can't force you to change her things, but perhaps a bit of tweaking may be necrssary to find more significant differences beteren the two.


Do you have any ideas because I can't see a way of changing it without just changing her powers?

Also - these are just a few discrepancies I picked up on while reading - you've stated at one point that her mother was Russian, and at another that she was English.


Thanks for pointing it out, I changed a little of the back story late on and I was a little out of it yesterday

I'm also confused as to how she's picked up that many languages so fluently - not just because of her age, but the fact she's been in a mental hospital for so long. Crazy houses don't give language lessons, from what I know.


My belief is due to the fact that she was in contact with a large number of people from different nationalities during her childhood. Children that are raised learning more than one language have a much higher affinity to learn more especially if they pick these up while they are young but I can tone it down



Side Note: Just after righting the majority of this noticed that Nightingale is also an Energy Manipulator but I personally believe that they are significantly different. But it is up to you if you think they are too similar
Are you guys still taking characters? This looks really cool ;)
If you are still accepting characters I'll bang one out in the morning :)
I'm still here despite refreshers flu hitting me like a freight train!
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