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Current Pirates, monsters, magic, islands and no civilization to steal from. Hmm.
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Now, what happens when you have a bunch of monsters that were living in a forest and they get transmigrated into a futuristic urban setting?
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I know that few, if any, people on this site would be interested in it... but... I just got an idea for a SAO/GGO/XCOM/UFO crossover... fun tingles...
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Life has never given mankind sufficient time... nor sleep... nor comprehension. If it had, we would have stopped trying.
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@Sho Minazuki

How's this? I reworked the battle portion of his backstory.

@Sho Minazuki So, to clarify, you want me to be more explicit about his level of skill with the lance. Or perhaps you're thinking of having him start with a great lance? I was heavily implying his expertise with the training references but I can tweak the ambush scene to showcase his abilities a little more obviously if you wish.
@Sho Minazuki

The backstory is complete. What do you think?


@Sho Minazuki

Yeah, that was the feel I had as well. I was thinking that it could function like a martial art and take a point off the weapon every time it triggered but that would still be too overpowered.

I'm still working on the character, of course, and there are far more important aspects to finish. Still, there's an aspect to him that I was hoping to explore through an ability of some sort. Here's what I have so far. If you have any advice or input to offer, I will be quite pleased to receive it.


What is your opinion of this concept for a unique ability.

[%50 chance of countering any ranged or magical attack with instinctive chaotic magic that strikes with ½ MAG. Ignores range. Inflicts “Disruption” for 2 rounds causing any spell cast by the target to cause %50 reduced damage and any projectile attack to suffer %50 reduced accuracy.]
Also interested. Currently working on a couple character concepts... I have a couple ideas that I will probably PM you about later. Need sleep for work.
@Stabby @Zeroth

Your MP is Full.
System:Femus


Femus had refilled his mana far faster than he expected and he did seem to have had some success in altering the mana levels around him. However, at that point, he was interrupted by what was almost certainly a wild pixie. This… was not good. Those creatures were the living embodiment of distraction. One of getting interested was bad enough but they liked to play in groups too. It would be reckless to assume that that one would not want to have more fun with other pixies.

He thought briefly of warning Nira but remembered that she had not stayed close and instead gone elsewhere to practice her meditation. He didn't dare rush out at present. He had to deal with the issue at hand first.

There was little time to waste. He had to prepare to defend this place… or provide the pixie with enough of a distraction to forget him and this place. But, first… It reminded him of something. Pixies could shield themselves. He decided to try and replicate that spell, surrounding himself with mana and trying to infuse it into either his body or the glow that surrounded him.

He had seen that the spell didn’t create a barrier. It seemed to be more like a resistance spell, something to provide additional toughness. So, he kept that in mind and sought to shape the nature of his mana so that it would linger in his body as a kind of hindering force, pushing back against anything that approached and diminishing its force. He would practice this until he achieved success, was interrupted, or felt that he only had enough mana for one mana orb left. At that point, he would meditate back to full mana, still trying to enrich his surroundings with mana. He would repeat this in cycles, barring interruption.

Hopefully, he could encourage some of the local blue flowers to form seeds before he had to abandon this tree. That would be a treasure beyond measure for a developing magic user… and he didn’t want to let his efforts in adjusting the environment here go to waste. The enhanced mana density in the hollow should have some effect on the flowers growing on the outside of the hollow tree.

Then again, maybe it was the enhanced density of mana that attracted the pixie. They relied on mana to live as well. Maybe he hadn’t been cautious enough. While he had been trying to develop a strong foundation patiently and safely, it wouldn’t help him at all if he couldn’t survive the whims of pixies. He would need to enhance his lethality.

As soon as he was able to shield himself, unless he was interrupted, he would begin a similar cycle of training attempting to condense a mana orb into a smaller, faster, and more penetrating form. In effect, he wasn’t looking for a piercing tip but rather a more focused shaped charge. If all the orb’s power was released in the direction of the surface it impacted then the damage it did should increase as well. Yet, as he focused his mind on that aspect, he found himself repeatedly thinking of flames and lightning.

Both would burn through objects and he remembered everything about them that he had ever experienced or learned. He remembered the times he burned himself when he was trying to help in the kitchen, times he was shown pictures of lightning strikes, explosions in action movies that seemed to fill the target and reduce it to rubble and ash from within, being shocked by static, overheating a knife accidentally by leaving it on the stove too close to the flame, seeing jumper cables melt as sparks and arcing electricity overwhelmed it.

Burning from within, arcing instantly over vast distances and piercing any defense. These were the thoughts that came to mind as he sought to compress and focus his mana orbs.
@Stabby@Zeroth

Femus bobbed briefly in acknowledgement. Nira had practical goals entwined with some fairly normal dreams. There was nothing shocking or profound, but that was interesting in itself. Even in this strange and difficult to define situation she was able to stay grounded and ultimately seek something like a normal life. Femus wasn't entirely sure that he could do that. He had a feeling that the level of power that he desired would force him to take a more extraordinary path in the end.

But, for now...

"Alright. Let's get going." He said decisively as he levitated higher and led the way to his tree hole.

He lingered outside the hole for a moment, checking for unfamiliar scents or signs that a slime or some other creature might have slipped in during his absence. If he found none then he proceeded inside, inadvertently lighting the dark space with his glow. There wasn't anything of note inside but the hole was deep enough to mostly hide them from the outside. Even Femus's glow was difficult to see after he went around the small bend in the hole.

Here was a fairly safe nook where they could recover and meditate. It wouldn't do to linger here too long, but it might do until they were ready to make a move toward escaping the goblins. It wouldn't be easy to get out of this encirclement, even if they grew more powerful. From what Femus had noticed about his power, it was likely that he couldn't be confident of his odds of breaking out alone before he made level 15. And, even then, he would need the right set of skills. With Nira beside him, the two of them might be able to do it by level 10. Still, the two of them were both dependent on magic. They lacked the physical ability to simply keep fighting.

"We need to increase the amount of time that we can stay in combat. We can't bet everything on a single high power skill or lucky blow. I have no intention of throwing this life away for nothing, either yours or mine." He said seriously as he settled onto a ridge where a long rotted knot deformed the side of the hollow space. "I need to be able to attack repeatedly, beyond the expectations of any opponent. I've been training to increase my maximum magic capacity to achieve this. The results have been notable but limited. I managed to increase my maximum capacity by 50%, allowing me to cast three mana orbs before being exhausted. The training that I used was based on meditation but with certain changes."

Femus paused for a moment, giving Nira time to consider the implications of what he was going to teach her. Even if she didn't decide to use this particular modified form of meditation, he was still teaching her one of his secrets. It was a potent gesture of trust. He hoped it was the right move.

"Meditation is simple." He continued. "Block out the world around you, sensation, planning, worry, everything. Then regulate your breathing and focus inward and intensify your awareness of your body and the flow of magic that moves through you, using that flow to draw in the magic from the environment around you and replenish your supply." He paused again, though only for a moment. "However, to increase your capacity the way I did, you must intensify the flow. Make it faster and denser. Think of the pathways it follows as being like your veins and encourage those veins to grow larger and stronger, to hold more and more. Also, do not stop meditating when you have reached your maximum magic capacity. Stretch those mana veins by overfilling them and giving them time to adjust to being overfull. But, do not push too hard or you may invite unpleasant side effects." He paused again. This time he remained silent for nearly a full minute before he spoke again.

"Do you have any questions before we begin meditating?"

If Nira had no questions then he would simply begin meditating, following the very method that he had just described. However, he did add one element to his own meditation that he did not tell Nira to attempt. He sought to extend his aura and draw more mana into the surrounding area than he could absorb with his body. He was seeking to saturate the area around the two of them with ambient mana to speed their recovery. He was also hoping to be able to create a space where those lovely blue flowers would grow easily. He still hadn't given up hope of cultivating them but he knew that for the plant to give mana, it would need to gather it from the environment. Thus, he had to develop a way of increasing the environmental mana in an area. Even if the effect wasn't enough to cultivate the flowers, it could still be of use helping any allies he had recover their mana faster. It might even help their meditation skills improve to a point where it could be used while on the move.

@Stabby@Zeroth

Femus's previous small grin was nothing in comparison to the... relatively wide smile that he developed after seeing Nira's expression. He had a feeling that if she had been younger she would have stomped her foot and glared at him for catching her. It was an adorable thought. But, the moment was brief and Nira's response brought them back to business immediately. It seemed the verbal games were indeed over.

Besides, she had just let slip that she spent her previous life in a hospital. That... wasn't funny.

The smile vanished.

Femus's new body had little when it came to expression so the brief feeling of pity that flowed through his consciousness didn't show. Still, it took a few moments for him to quiet that down and clear his thinking. It was highly unlikely that the person in front of him would appreciate something as useless as pity. It was likely better to take her words seriously and be as genuine as possible, especially if this green wisp wanted to maintain a lasting partnership with her.

It took a little effort to ensure that his voice wouldn't betray his earlier feelings, though his brief time of silence could be interpreted in several ways. "It's a bit cliche, I guess. I want power, power sufficient to protect what I want to protect from anything. If the Demon King will help me get there... I'll work with him. If his enemies will help me get there, I'll work with them. For right now, I just need to survive and get stronger. With how little I know of this world, making long range plans just doesn't seem practical to me."

He didn't mind the fact that Nira hadn't responded to his urging. It seemed that she wanted to understand his motives before following him anywhere. That was understandable. Still, the longer they spent out here in the open the more likely it became that they would attract unwanted attention from the goblins or other local predators. They were having a chat right next to a half-eaten rat on the forest floor after all.

"Is there anything else you would like to know about me before we move? I'd rather not be ambushed before I recover my mana."
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