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As Casey sat crouched behind the shelf, awaiting the girl's response, he kept one eye always on the hole he just entered through. Something was happening outside, he could tell by the sounds, but he couldn't tell what. It sounded like someone was going mad. Though, he couldn't afford too much attention to the outside as someone on the inside was talking and it wasn't the pipsqueak that he followed in here. As he listened to this new person talk he couldn't help but grin. Another woman. When you're in the business of keeping others around for entertainment until they need to be fodder, woman were the best.

He could hear the pipsqueak respond first. Casey peered past the shelve that hid him and spied the girl as she made her way to the back of the store toward the voice that commanded them. Keeping low, he followed suit and moved to the back of the store. There he found the unknown voice that had ushered him back there. Another young woman, though this one Asian. As Casey came closer to the storage room he equipped his most charming smile. Raising his hands he spoke.

"Ladies! Its good to see such lovelies as yourself still alive!"

Entering the storage room he quickly examined the pair. The pipsqueak he followed into the store was leaning against the rear wall with her arms drawn up across her chest. She might as well have been curled up in the fetal position on the floor. Casey doubted how useful she'd be as entertainment. The other girl, on the other hand, looked to be much more promising. She held herself up straight, appeared to be in good shape, and was apparently ready to give orders when she needed. Most importantly, she was the type who would help you if you were in need.

"Nice place ya got here," Casey said looking about the tiny room. "Though, I have a feeling you don't expect to stay long."
IVIasterJay said
My mistake there. I'll go back and edit it to him having shot the infected after it ran towards the speaker.


It ran toward a scream somewhere down the road.
Problem is that both you and myself had already said the infected that was attacking you had taken off down the road... its the only way I got into the store. The departure of that particular infected was instrumental in me getting across the street. It would not have happened as such if I saw the infected's head blow up...

Should I just ignore it??
I kindaaaa need to know before I can post. ><
Work_U_Dumb: Accepted.

Stitches: Both characters accepted. Your request for the head of the Foxglove House Head shall be granted.

Memories of Conquest: Love the app. Accepted!

betelgeuse: Class subject matter often overlap. DatDA is a required, broad subject while Ghoul Studies is a specific, elective class. I think both are fine and you can teach both if you'd like.

In reference to Quodpot: It seems like more work than necessary and some people might want their characters to be Quidditch players. Id like to see how the others feel about this.
@Stitches? What do you mean about grimdark? Isnt Daemyn's character an optimistic/happy character? Also, the last part is asking what class you teach. Your character is the Charms teacher, correct? So put that in that category. Also, pick a time of day you want to teach that class. Otherwise, everything looks perfect.

@Daemyn: It looks good. Accepted, though Id ask you to clean up your Skills section. It seems as though you've muddled up a bunch of unneeded personality traits in there. For example 'doesnt give up easily' and 'attention seeking and overbearing' are things that aren't really needed in that section. I understand that some personality traits can be a real advantage/disadvantage but I guess Im looking for more tangible things like being clumsy, bad at following procedures, poor memory, etc. Though, if youre lazy, you really dont neeeed to do this. :)
Work_U_Dumb: The bio is better. Also, please fix your classes. Fifth year classes consist of Potions, Herbology, Defence Against the Dark Arts, Transfiguration, History of Magic, Astronomy, Charms, and two or more electives. Also, I will be adding a new section on the CS for your House.

Stitches: Alls I did was copy and paste the Hogwarts wiki. :P

Daemyn Sterk: Looks good but can you please add a bit more about weaknesses. Then you're in. Also, keep in mind Im adding a new section in the CS for House. :)
Rultaos said
Excellent posts so far everyone =)Though the only criticism I have to give is that the numbers and "zerg-rushing" are FAR too exaggerated for what I intended XD. These infected don't group together and swarm as often as zombies do. They often just appear together in packs (mostly 4-8 infected together). Though the sound of the speakers will probably draw different packs together (besides, infected only come from people who survive their wounds after being cannibalized, so there will be a lot more dead people than infected people). So having numbers amounting to a "crowd" or "swarm" in one place is a rarity for infected.But considering the city-wide speakers activating and Mr Smiley's dinner-bell tingling, I could see a swarm like that forming . I'm just saying this so it doesn't happen too often in your posts. They are hunters after all, who don't just randomly wander, gather, and chase. They can easily stay silent and hidden when they are not alerted, waiting for any unlucky prey who sets off their senses.


Ill keep this in mind.

@ IVIasterJay: Are you attacking the same infected that attacked Mach? The ones outside the convenience store that Chenzor is holed up in? The ones that ran away so I could get across the street and into said convenience store?
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Username: Work_U_DumbCharacter Name: Jacob JaymisonAge: 16Gender: MaleAppearance: Blonde Hair, Blue eyes, 5 foot 7, Scar on his arm. Personality: Intelligent, Smart Alec, Kinda Crazy, Opportunistic, Asshole, But he loves animalsBio: Born and Raised in Boston Jacob is a wizard. His parents moved there after there schooling at this fine school as they liked the big city live. Jacob has always been a great wizard bot not a great person. In elementary school he got all A+. The reason why he is crazy is because he was kidnapped by some dark wizards for about 3 months when he was 5.Skills: Good at Transfiguration, Care of Magical Creatures, and History of Magic. Bad at Flying, Defense against the dark arts, Art, and musicClasses: Transfiguration, Care of Magical Creatures, History of Magic, Muggle Studies, Art, Magical TheoryExtra: Has a pet Owl named Apollo


Could you please expand on some of this. I dont think being captured by dark wizards should be a slight foot note in your application.
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