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OK I'M BACK.
Had to deal with hurricane stuff.
I leave for two days and someone molotovs the bus. Jeez.
AND THERE WAS MUCH REJOICING. The crowd inside the bus cheered as a group of mostly battle-priests excised the demons assaulting them, and the injured mother was carried forward, offering her thanks to Grigori. "You saved my baby!" she repeated. "My baby!"
A shaky bus driver exited the bus, and greeted the demon hunters. "Thank you! Is there any chance you can help us get out of the city? The front tires are slashed, and a scythe was lodged in the engine; I think it cut the gas line."

A short distance away, the helicopter pilot picked himself up from the snowbank, taking a deep breath. "Thanks for the save, kid. The name's Lieutenant Left. I don't know what the hell those things are, but they're more your expertise than the army's, huh?"
He reloaded his handgun, and nodded. "I think I can make it back to base, but listen. There's an attache case a grenadier team left on the roof of an apartment building two blocks north. You might like what's inside."

ELSEWHERE

Harold Robinson was a portly, balding gentleman in an ill-fitting and tacky suit, sitting on a bench on Lukewarm Avenue. He was entirely unaware of the city-wide evacuation, as he had spent the morning watching reruns of Friends. He was also entirely intent on suing Baal and a local business owner after the pair had torn his Cadillac in half during a particularly nasty battle.
"Late again, Cane?" he sighed to himself, wiping his sweaty brow with a hanky. "I swear, we make a killing every time that white haired freak smashes my car. Who the Hell passes up easy money like this?"

ALSO ELSEWHERE

A low rider cruised up by Alonzo's ship, blasting what could only be called an obscene mix of heavy metal and Slavic folk music. An Imp poked its head out the window, staring up at the ghostly Spaniard while it puffed on a cigarello.
"Ey mang, you 'ere for the 'thing'? Jus' say the word, mane, I'll 'ave you goin' in an hour, tops."
Yeah it's cool.
@Scrapula
Yeah, you're good. Sorry I forgot to say earlier.
@Grec
I'm pretty biased against insta-kills in general, Grec. Judgement Cut itself only targets one enemy; it's not an AoE. And Devil Gauge isn't really a defense unless I made this an actual dice system, which I really can't do on an online forum.
@Grec
Almost good. I realized your "Demensene" attack can apparently life-drain and insta-kill everyone in an unknown radius. Why is that?


There, I changed his powers, gearset and what happened to him after he was bitten.


It seems like one of your abilities is defined as "Can do anything", and for another you put "Can get more powers when convenient"
The city was in ruins, a darkened messed of burnt buildings and stray rubble under a reddened, smoky sky. Cars were tossed aside and strewn about like candy wrappers. Light poles, recently used as baseball bats, now lay on the ground, bent and useless for their previous task of lighting the night. In the distance, you could still hear distant howls and roars where the demons dwell.

A lone woman lay on the ground, sobbing, her face covered by black ash and her own tangled brown hair. She tugged uselessly where her leg was caught under a girder. Tears welled in her eyes as she looked in the distance, at a blanket-wrapped bundle. The ground shook, and she felt true fear.
"MY BABY!" she cried. Something had started tipping over a nearby apartment building, and it began to teeter downward, like a massive hammer towards the defenseless infant.
"MY BAAAABBYYYYY!"

A short distance down the street, yet more carnage ensued. An entire bus of people who failed to evacuate, now stood like sardines in a can as it was surrounded by merciless Hell Prides. The lesser demons slowly made way for a Wrath to march forward, carrying a heavy bomb on its shoulders. The humans inside screamed.

Above the city itself, a military helicopter was engaged in combat against a swarm of large, batlike demons. Its autocannon made short work of the ones it could hit, but it quickly grew useless as sheer numbers began to pry at the armor playing. The pilot inside drew his pistol, shouting and aiming at a gaping maw on the cracking windshield.
@David Gorgon
If you're set on nixing the AoE vaporize, then yeah it's good. I'm US Central, but don't get home from work until later in the evening.
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