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duck55223 said
Its still badHistory is to short, theres no development beyond "they might have come from human colonization attempts" there nothing about meeting the Daytin or how the current government developed, and in the grammar and spelling department its still pretty bad.


Ok thanks, I'll work on the history some more (in hindsight the whole "amnesia" thing was lazy weighting on my part)
jello_pudding said
Ok. I updated the app, if it's not "at standard" just tell me what I could do better. Thanks!


Should I just repost my app? It seems like no one has seen the edits. Maybe I just can't read.
Ok. I updated the app, if it's not "at standard" just tell me what I could do better. Thanks!
darkwolf687 said
Well, for a start there has been no Russia, No Soviet Union and No Cold War, unless your people have been in space for somewhere around 52 thousand years. These latest "Humans" who have come up from the stone age didn't come up from Earth. Secondly, its just too short and has a couple of grammar and spelling errorsThree, there isn't really a "galactic pace" to be keeping up with, everyone is at different points.


thanks, I love when people actually give good criticisms, Ill work on my app and post when i update it, and as I'm looking at other peoples work I now see some spots where my quality writing outright died, hopefully I can hit the spot. and again, thanks for the feedback.
duck55223 said
This app is just really low quality, with spelling and grammar mistakes everywhere.Denied


Ok, ill see what I can do if you have any specific points you want fixed or changed I'd be glad to hear about it. thanks for your feedback! (in hindsight I should have someone proof read other than me)
Hey guys, it's jello_pudding from the original RP, and I'm back from the internet-dead to RP some more. I think I should start on a clean slate because 1. Probably no one remembers and 2. RoS was going nowhere. So here it is, my new app: *note: this app will change for better (or worse) offen.*

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