Well considering there are still a lot of Sazkarjhit hunter-killer fleets out after Sylve that may just be found out and Sazkarjhia may want to have something to do with it.

jello_pudding said
Ok. I updated the app, if it's not "at standard" just tell me what I could do better. Thanks!

Should I just repost my app? It seems like no one has seen the edits. Maybe I just can't read.

Its still bad
History is to short, theres no development beyond "they might have come from human colonization attempts" there nothing about meeting the Daytin or how the current government developed, and in the grammar and spelling department its still pretty bad.

duck55223 said
Its still badHistory is to short, theres no development beyond "they might have come from human colonization attempts" there nothing about meeting the Daytin or how the current government developed, and in the grammar and spelling department its still pretty bad.

Ok thanks, I'll work on the history some more (in hindsight the whole "amnesia" thing was lazy weighting on my part)

I recommend you also discuss a government type. Every empire/nation/faction has some type of government system to lead their people with. For example, the Equestrian Empire is a Theocratic Monarchy, or my race, Sazkarjhia is a Theocratic Dictatorship (The difference between a monarch and a dictator is that a monarch usually inherits the role, while a dictator is appointed to the position), but also has a democratic Parliament.

I actually have an interesting idea for a more personal RP relating to VotS.

What if we created a personal RP in the Casual section that's about someone in that military, or a mercenary, or a pirate or anything along that lines and also use VotS as a dynamic setting for it.

What I mean by that is that major events in this RP can affect relations or the story of someone's character in the more in-depth personal RP? You guys think it would work?

It would be cool but things would have to love very quickly in that rp considering how fast we do things in Vots.

Not to mention there is seemingly a lack of inter species interactions. One faction is in its leaders own words "paranoid ponies", another is authoritarian and keeps watch on its citizens in manners that would make the Party blush, another worships chaos gods and a fourth is under the control of what is essentially a Delphan hive mind, a fifth are religious zealot warriors, etc etc etc

It would be cool, but VotS is not just dynamic, its bloody ping pong. Wars are declared and ended within hours, lives are thrown away like nothing, yet people cry for one death (A million is a statistic? Puh lease, a billion is a statistic!) nations jump all over the spectrum of relations, people literally disappear at random (Mostly ducks people, when he changes his mind about something and doesn't try to wrap it up in any manner, instead just stopping the arc, leaving some very weird plot lines lying around) and there are weapons which make Star Wars look like nothing, which tend to pop up out of no where.

So yeah, it would be cool but keeping up with the insane changes could be a little jarring (Friends one day could be trying to murder each other the next...)

Also, how would one ensure the characters ever met? Its pretty massive out there...

That's true, as I suppose that the way NRP goes is that events happen relatively quickly.

Uh TehAlpha
I dont see how you could already find Albedo's fleet.
He literally just left.
Edit: Also on that matter, how the hell have you detected one of Equestria's most advanced stealth ships?

TehAlphaGamer said
I actually have an interesting idea for a more personal RP relating to VotS.What if we created a personal RP in the Casual section that's about someone in that military, or a mercenary, or a pirate or anything along that lines and also use VotS as a dynamic setting for it.What I mean by that is that major events in this RP can affect relations or the story of someone's character in the more in-depth personal RP? You guys think it would work?

I really love the idea of a VotS personal level RP. Of course, we can;t have it be dynamic due to everything that's happened so far. We can, however, use it to flesh out the history of the universe. Stuff like the Reaper Invasion, Multiversal Downfall, Common Sense War, we could base a personal RP off of any one of these. In fact, we should. Anyone got an opinion?

I'd be up for something like that so long as I can have a Chaos character. 1 lone chaos follower wouldn't be lore breaking in any galactic war.

My only issue is that we know the ultimate outcome.

So instead why don't we flip it. The personal rp affects Vots but not vice versa. For instance ducks idea for a mission to kill that President guy in another universe. We can't affect is because we are in our universe thus the time frame of things won't matter.

The Commonsense war has very little external interaction, only two other nations interferred properly, one of which is gone now. It's be like making a rp based on the Equiis Collective war, lol, its a constraint which pretty much means you are either humans, ponies or Orcs...

darkwolf687 said
The Commonsense war has very little external interaction, only two other nations interferred properly, one of which is gone now. It's be like making a rp based on the Equiis Collective war, lol, its a constraint which pretty much means you are either humans, ponies or Orcs...

True, a Common Sense War RP would be pretty independent.

As for knowing the outcome, that can still be fun. In fact, we could even set it in an alternate universe, so we wouldn't know the outcome.

duck55223 said
Uh TehAlphaI dont see how you could already find Albedo's fleet.He literally just left.Edit: Also on that matter, how the hell have you detected one of Equestria's most advanced stealth ships?

Well, time seems to advance fast in the RP, I figured this could be justified by either that or the possibility that Marzon are nearby Sazkarjhit space. Also Sazkarjhit scanning equipment can still be able to pick up obscure stealth ships.

TehAlphaGamer said
Well, time seems to advance fast in the RP, I figured this could be justified by either that or the possibility that Marzon are nearby Sazkarjhit space. Also Sazkarjhit scanning equipment can still be able to pick up obscure stealth ships.

The Stealth ships of a nation who is far more advanced then Sazkarjhia and when the ship is tiny and wouldn't have a big signature in the first place?

Hang on, didn't the Sazkarjhit survive the universal war? There doesn't appear to be any change in their state and everything appears to be the same, implying they never fell. Even if they were advancing relatively slowly, Sazkarjhit probably have the lead or at the very least be around the same level...

Yeah, but TehAlpha said it himself, they haven't made any major advancements.
He also said that there was a massive civil war that lasted for a while, and with Sazkarjhia's policies its likely research and science growth is stunted.

Yeah, but TehAlpha said it himself, they haven't made any major advancements.
He also said that there was a massive civil war that lasted for a while, and with Sazkarjhia's policies its likely research and science growth is stunted.