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STATUS: Kind of going through a breakdown. Some personal stuff is getting mess.. Thanks to some idiots who not only left the fan on but threw shit right at it! 4 yrs ago
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Kind of going through a breakdown. Some personal stuff is getting mess.. Thanks to some idiots who not only left the fan on but threw shit right at it!
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@Insert Alias
Yeah, those work for me. Go ahead and update the CS so I can look it over and Okay it.
@jynmi88
Alright, I have taken this all into consideration and I think it would be interesting to be the cabin boy, I would say musician but they typically have a power related to music.
As for the crew, I think it would be best if they sold him to pay off a debt to a Pirate warlord (Buggy the clown). BonBon forgives his crew but holds a grudge against the Warlord. It doesn't matter too much who the Warlord is. Or it could be better that BonBon turns himself in to settle his crews debts and says goodbye to his friends to save their lives. Yeah I like the last one.
Yeah, those work for me. Go ahead and update the CS so I can look it over and Okay it.
I'm interested!
@Insert Alias
Well as for your character's place on the ship there's always the cabin boy/ maintenance guy, which I"ve always thought of as the position for either a stoic, trained warrior or a goof. Our crew also needs a musician too, which I can see a fun loving guy such as your character doing. Mmmmm. There's all the main ones I can think up at the moment but I'm sure there's more.
You don't have to kill the crew off if you don't want to. Maybe they could've just been captured and sent to Impel down or some other marine prison(he won't know which) and its your character's goal to free them? Another idea is to have his crew get into some kind of situation, where they thought your character was killed (similar to the Martian with Mat Daemon) and your character is on a quest to reunite with them?
Where would my character fit in, He has no actual skills. I kinda like the Bio the way it is for the most part but I can add that they all died when captured and that only he was left alive. But then again that would change his personality as he wouldnt be as happy and care free.. Give me a bit of time to think of something different.
Well as for your character's place on the ship there's always the cabin boy/ maintenance guy, which I"ve always thought of as the position for either a stoic, trained warrior or a goof. Our crew also needs a musician too, which I can see a fun loving guy such as your character doing. Mmmmm. There's all the main ones I can think up at the moment but I'm sure there's more.
You don't have to kill the crew off if you don't want to. Maybe they could've just been captured and sent to Impel down or some other marine prison(he won't know which) and its your character's goal to free them? Another idea is to have his crew get into some kind of situation, where they thought your character was killed (similar to the Martian with Mat Daemon) and your character is on a quest to reunite with them?
@grandia20@Shiyonichi
"Hey, stop her!" One of the Legion pirates shouted as Abbygail rushed towards a group. "Don't let her... Ack!" A spray of blood erupted from his neck like a magma from a volcano that was well over do. Several of the men that were following him began to turn but paused when they noticed the quick feud that was going on between the woman with two swords and the man with the red hair. They couldn't exactly tell if it was something serious, that was supposed to end in one of them dead, but Red-Eyes looked like she was pretty close, nearly driving a blade into the spearman's face.
"Shit!" One of them mumbled. "That was close."
"No kidding. She almost did some of the work for us."
"We came so close" a third Legion pirate replied.
"Well, we better get to it." One at the far back said, gently pushing the one in front of him forward. "Or we'll be here all day, or at least until the ship hits rock bottom."
At that, everyone turned with fury. "Will you" they snapped in the kind of unison that would make a world class choir wet with envy. "Shut up!" There was a moment of stillness when the large group realized there was no way they could still be unnoticed. So slowly, they all turned on their heels, raised their weapons over their heads, mostly swords with the occasional knife or blunt piece of wood, before charging full on at the angry lovers.
***
"Damn it!" The purple haired woman cursed as she rushed down the long halls of the Legion pirates ship. Her sense of direction wasn't the best, but she was certain that she had to be on the right track to wherever it was the redhead with the spears had gone down. She could hear water, sloshing around somewhere nearby. The sound had gotten so bad she was throwing open random doors. In a few there was a Legion pirate who tried to jump out at her, but those were quickly enough dealt with. The only room that gave her pause was one with the lights out, candles by the bed lamp and some soft moaning that continued on a few seconds after she opened the door. Neither of the three people inside, as well as herself said anything. She just apologized, stepped back and closed the door before rushing on, telling herself that really it wasn't any more odd than regular forms of self pleasing.
"Okay!" She shouted as she took hold of a doorknob, that was a bit more well kept than the others. "This has to be the captain's room." Which was as good as she was going to get outside of finding the other girl. At least if she had the captain she could possibly get everyone to calm down long enough for her and the rest to get on a life boat and get out before the ship went down.
"Now listen here you!" The door flew open and the Abbygail paused to admire the giant room she was standing in. It had to have been at least fifty feet tall, and three times as wide. There was a massive pile of straw covering most of the room's floor. "The hell is this?" She muttered, rubbing her chin.
@KillBox
"Crap! It's another one." Several of the Legion Pirates shouted in unison.
"He's trying to stop us from taking the other two out." A third pirated responded.
"Stop narrating everything and get him!"
Eight men, a combination of those who'd managed to take a shot at the ones in the water and those whose guns were taken by the bald men, turned their attention towards the attacker. Five of them had swords, two had knives and one decided his bare hands were enough. AS for the remaining seven, three moved into position to continue their assault on the swordsman and boom girl while the last two kept switching their attention between the bald man and the easy targets.
@Crimson Lion@Noodles
Several more shots rained down on the two pirates, struggling to hold on for dear life. "Oh my god!" One of the the masked men shouted. "Terrible aim. Forget shooting." He thrust spears into the arms of the several pirates who took a shot. "Stop wasting the ammo. Bullets are expensive. Go down there and jab them with this till they die!" Without waiting for the men to respond, the leader threw three ropes over the railings and shoved the men towards them.
Grumbling, the men slowly starting making their way down the side of the boat until they got in range, at which points, they carefully aimed their spears to start jabbing at the woman and man.
"Hey, stop her!" One of the Legion pirates shouted as Abbygail rushed towards a group. "Don't let her... Ack!" A spray of blood erupted from his neck like a magma from a volcano that was well over do. Several of the men that were following him began to turn but paused when they noticed the quick feud that was going on between the woman with two swords and the man with the red hair. They couldn't exactly tell if it was something serious, that was supposed to end in one of them dead, but Red-Eyes looked like she was pretty close, nearly driving a blade into the spearman's face.
"Shit!" One of them mumbled. "That was close."
"No kidding. She almost did some of the work for us."
"We came so close" a third Legion pirate replied.
"Well, we better get to it." One at the far back said, gently pushing the one in front of him forward. "Or we'll be here all day, or at least until the ship hits rock bottom."
At that, everyone turned with fury. "Will you" they snapped in the kind of unison that would make a world class choir wet with envy. "Shut up!" There was a moment of stillness when the large group realized there was no way they could still be unnoticed. So slowly, they all turned on their heels, raised their weapons over their heads, mostly swords with the occasional knife or blunt piece of wood, before charging full on at the angry lovers.
***
"Damn it!" The purple haired woman cursed as she rushed down the long halls of the Legion pirates ship. Her sense of direction wasn't the best, but she was certain that she had to be on the right track to wherever it was the redhead with the spears had gone down. She could hear water, sloshing around somewhere nearby. The sound had gotten so bad she was throwing open random doors. In a few there was a Legion pirate who tried to jump out at her, but those were quickly enough dealt with. The only room that gave her pause was one with the lights out, candles by the bed lamp and some soft moaning that continued on a few seconds after she opened the door. Neither of the three people inside, as well as herself said anything. She just apologized, stepped back and closed the door before rushing on, telling herself that really it wasn't any more odd than regular forms of self pleasing.
"Okay!" She shouted as she took hold of a doorknob, that was a bit more well kept than the others. "This has to be the captain's room." Which was as good as she was going to get outside of finding the other girl. At least if she had the captain she could possibly get everyone to calm down long enough for her and the rest to get on a life boat and get out before the ship went down.
"Now listen here you!" The door flew open and the Abbygail paused to admire the giant room she was standing in. It had to have been at least fifty feet tall, and three times as wide. There was a massive pile of straw covering most of the room's floor. "The hell is this?" She muttered, rubbing her chin.
@KillBox
"Crap! It's another one." Several of the Legion Pirates shouted in unison.
"He's trying to stop us from taking the other two out." A third pirated responded.
"Stop narrating everything and get him!"
Eight men, a combination of those who'd managed to take a shot at the ones in the water and those whose guns were taken by the bald men, turned their attention towards the attacker. Five of them had swords, two had knives and one decided his bare hands were enough. AS for the remaining seven, three moved into position to continue their assault on the swordsman and boom girl while the last two kept switching their attention between the bald man and the easy targets.
@Crimson Lion@Noodles
Several more shots rained down on the two pirates, struggling to hold on for dear life. "Oh my god!" One of the the masked men shouted. "Terrible aim. Forget shooting." He thrust spears into the arms of the several pirates who took a shot. "Stop wasting the ammo. Bullets are expensive. Go down there and jab them with this till they die!" Without waiting for the men to respond, the leader threw three ropes over the railings and shoved the men towards them.
Grumbling, the men slowly starting making their way down the side of the boat until they got in range, at which points, they carefully aimed their spears to start jabbing at the woman and man.
@Insert Alias
For the most part I like the character, but the big problem is his captain position. I can't really see him, having his own crew, working within the established format of the Rp. So I'm going to have to say no to him having a captain position.
Name: Bonamire Matthers
Alias: BonBon
Age: 22
Position: Captain (In an alliance with your crew, hopefully)
Bounty: 20 mil berri
Appearance:
Personality: Hardly ever serious, BonBon is really easy going and because of this he is easy to get along with. He is however very mischevious and finds his way into trouble, very big trouble at that. He loves treasure and like any other capable pirate he seeks the One Piece. Despite his love of treasure he will put his friends before his greed.
Background: BonBon raised himself as he was an orphan, the only knowledge he had of his parents was that they were successful pirates. Successful pirates who left their only child with nothing but a name and some nasty fruit. Despite the neglect he suffered as a child he still admired his parents, he wanted to surpass them to prove he could be better than them without leaving anyone behind. He started gathering followers, others recognized his name and easily joined. With the strength of numbers and his devil fruit the BonBon Pirates made a name for themselves in the east blue. BonBon pillaged marine ships and raided forts, and earned himself quite the bounty.
Abilities: BonBon ate the Yoro Yoro fruit and gained the power to create a barrier based armor around him, he can exert himself to create weapons from the barrier material but it would further drain his stamina.
Weapons: Unless BonBon creates a weapon he will use bare hands to fight
Techniques: BonBon will change the shape and density of his armor based on the stance he chooses. In his offense stance he will likely have created a weapon where most of his barrier would be channeled to his weapon instead of his body making the weapon larger but his armor smaller and lighter, his defense stance will be without a weapon and all of his barrier would surround him, and his last stance (for now) would be a balanced stance where he would have a one handed weapon or fist based weapons and his barrier would be balanced throughout his body and weapon.
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For the most part I like the character, but the big problem is his captain position. I can't really see him, having his own crew, working within the established format of the Rp. So I'm going to have to say no to him having a captain position.
@grandia20@Shiyonichi
"Where do you think you're going in such a hurry?" The Legion pirate at the front of the pack quipped. In one hand he held a knife and in the other a club. "There's no place to go but down, you know?" He laughed, and sounded like he would've continued laughing for some time, but a man in red rushed forwards, apparently from nowhere, cutting up several of the legion pirates who didn't have a chance.
"What the?!" The man growled, taking a step back when he saw the female swordsman come up on the purple haired woman's left. "How many attackers are there?" Without waiting for a reply, he crouched down and rushed towards Red-Eyes. "It doesn't matter how many of you there are." The men behind him yelled as they followed quickly behind, each with weapons raised. "We've got numbers to spare." As he closed in on the woman, he brought his blade and club up at the same time, both aiming for a side of her chest. "Just watch and see" He yelled.
Clicking sounds echoed from directly above Abbygail's group. Hidden doors in the ceiling slid open, revealing Legion pirates who were held in place with straps. Before a blinking eye could return to its starting position the belts holding them in place vanished, and the foes fell towards the three, each with knives in their hands, ready to start stabbing once they made contact with their targets.
"Crap. There's just no end to how dirty they'll play." Abbygail shouted, as she deflected an oncoming sword slash with her scythe while throwing the waited end of her weapon behind her. It didn't quiet burrow into the man's head like she had hoped, but it hit him with enough force to snap his neck back and render him completely still when he fell on top of her. "Damn it!" She muttered. The man wasn't heavy enough to bring her down, but he was dead weight she didn't need, especially when several men were rushing towards her with swords. There was no time to dodge. Thinking fast she turned to the side and trusted the man forwards, catching the blades with his surprisingly firm flesh.
"I thought we had this one!" One of them said. The others would've responded but couldn't before Abbygail got one in the gut with her scythe and sent the other flying with a kick hard enough to rattle his brain. "Think again." The purple haired woman snapped as she spun around and brought her knee up into the man's chin.
A massive tremor went through the boat. "Crap!" She took a deep breath, but noted there didn't seem to be any extra smoke. Which meant it wasn't gunpowder that started the explosion. "Did she use that power inside the ship!" Roaring with frustration she sent swung her arms, sending out two blades of wind towards advancing enemies that quickly cut them down. Without waiting to see who else wanted some, she rushed forwards, heading deeper into the ship.
@KillBox@Crimson Lion@Noodles
"Hey!" One of the Legion pirates shouted as he scampered up to the stop of the ship. "What was that? Were the explosives supposed to start already? I thought they had to get them to below deck?"
Another Legion Pirate, followed quickly by several more appeared quickly after him. "That was the plan but who knows. You can't make plans with people like them around."
"Enough talking!" The final legion pirate shouted as he brought up the rear. "Just take your positions." Each of the Legion Pirates who appeared on deck were carrying a rifle. They made a line on the ship, facing the island and took their shooting stance. "Alright, men, remember the plan. If you see any of them scampering off for safety, pick them off while they're in the water."
"Sir!" The men shouted.
"Hey!" One of the Legionaires on the side of the ship called, looking down towards the side. "I think there's a few of them down there. Weird how their not moving from that spot." Several pirates hurried over and nodded.
"Well don't just stare at them!" The leading Legion pirate shouted. "Pick them off."
"Sir!" The pirates shouted, bring up their rifles and firing down at the man and woman in the water.
@AcetheKidd
Yeah, that's what I thought you were referring to, but I had to make sure in the off chance it was actually a DF.
Edit. Please go ahead and put that in the CS.
Also, if you're having trouble with the background let me know and I'll see if I can help.
electro is the ability that all minks have. You know, that electric ability?
I suppose he does, just whatever abilities cats have. Climbing, enhance sight and hearing, etc
Yeah, that's what I thought you were referring to, but I had to make sure in the off chance it was actually a DF.
Edit. Please go ahead and put that in the CS.
Also, if you're having trouble with the background let me know and I'll see if I can help.
@Insert Alias
okay. put up a cs.
As of now and until further notice this rp will no longer be accepting.
Edit
so I can review it
okay. put up a cs.
As of now and until further notice this rp will no longer be accepting.
Edit
so I can review it
@AcetheKidd
Could you please elaborate on what you mean by the ability "electro"?
Also, as a mink, does your character have any innate physical abilities associated with the animal he is?
Name: Mikko Harmaru
Alias: -
Age: 17
Position: Scholar/ archaeologist
Bounty:20,000
Appearance:
Personality: Mikko is a cool, calm and collected Mink who tries to mind his own business unless he dragged into something. He hates it when people underestimate him, calling him small or cute actually makes him happy. However, he's able to hide his feelings most of the time. Although Mikko is small in size, he's one cat you don't want to mess with on a bad day. He's good fighter , very strong will and mature. Mikko also haves a big knack for adventure and the very thought of new discoveries gets him so excited. Although he has a clam personality, there are times where Mikko will get frustrated and irritated
Background: Will get to it
Abilities: Electro
Weapons: A steel staff
Techniques: will get to it
Could you please elaborate on what you mean by the ability "electro"?
Also, as a mink, does your character have any innate physical abilities associated with the animal he is?
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