Kafka Komedy

Hellscapers! [PRETTY MUCH ALWAYS ACCEPTING EXCEPT WHEN WE HAVE TEN PEOPLE (WE DON'T)!]

@sassy1085 While I appreciate your efforts, there are still many issues.

I'm looking for more general quality in writing and character depth. Please keep to a past tense, limited third person point of view while writing the Biography. You occasionally change tenses it seems. Maybe have another major life event? Or, possibly, write some more of her life in hell. That could also benefit her in a different area:

"Gameplay" related reason. Simply hacking and "Dataslabs" (do you mean manufacturer? Software production? Coding?) isn't really that much. If you need a niche to fill, maybe make her a spell caster? Adventures in hell could give her some cybernetics to make her a bit more useful. Also, she can have more than 3 skills.

Overall, I suggest a fresh start for a clear head, but you could certainly remake Gwen (though retyping her Bio would be heavily suggested either way simply because of the grammar.)

Hellscapers! [PRETTY MUCH ALWAYS ACCEPTING EXCEPT WHEN WE HAVE TEN PEOPLE (WE DON'T)!]

And with that, Hellscapers has officially begun! Feel free to discuss your plan a bit more, we still have a small amount of "social time" before the main event.

Hellscapers! [PRETTY MUCH ALWAYS ACCEPTING EXCEPT WHEN WE HAVE TEN PEOPLE (WE DON'T)!]

Alright gentlemen and ladies, it's almost time to begin. I'll be writing the intro post up very soon, maybe even today, so you guys ought to set a battle plan for Betty's jailbreak. I've set up a pad Here for you all to discuss things, even if you aren't in the Skype chat.

The layout of the building is pretty much just a guard station to the right of the entrance, Nefas's office to the left of the entrance, and a sprawling maze of halls connected to rooms and cells.

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One last time, I'll remind everyone that we have a Skype group. Message me your Skype username and I'll add you to it.

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@Oraculum Looking good! Seems the group will require less supplies once they get on the road, considering Old N could build some sort of greenhouse for vegetables.

Anywho, move him on over to the Characters tab.

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@sassy1085 Well, useful skills in a non-office environment. Salvaging, maybe. Spells. Physical skills like marksmanship, stamina, or running. Knowledge in useful areas like engineering, gunsmithing, technology like the dataslabs. Hacking, maybe.

Gear is also something you could add to. A weapon like a gun, a dataslab, tools for a profession. I suggest reading through the other's CSes. Could give you some ideas.

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@Turbowraith Sorry for not getting to you sooner, but Grog looks good, move him on over.

@sassy1085 I'm sorry but I just don't think this roleplay is what you think it is, or is for you. This team will be trekking through hell, combating demons and Cambion, making deals with fortune tellers and probably even stuff beyond that. Someone who can talk fast and knows Morse code just wouldn't be able to keep up. Your grammar is also a bit of an issue, though less of one since it's obvious you're trying.

With that, we have enough people to officially start. I will give @Oraculum a little time to create his character, and @sassy1085 some time to remake Gwen, should she want to.

The Three Realms War [A DMC, Bayonetta and Darksiders RP]

Once Mary was firmly in front of the gate, admittedly wanting to face palm after forgetting fallen could phase through walls, she knew what she had to do. Reeling her arm back, and forcing it to vibrate, Mary shot the Entertainer forward, spiderweb cracks appearing throughout the demonic gate. Before it even shattered, Mary turned back to her assailants. The Fallen were still their, reparing another strike, as were the mounds of lesser demons encroaching. As much as she wanted to get rid of these things so the people of Fortuna could get back to their lives, she had a much more important objective.

Stretching out a tad bit, she decided her previous maneuver was a good idea, but could use some improvement. As soon as a weaker demon lunged at her, she dodged above it easily, stepping on it's head and pushing a bit forward. She replicated the motion again, now essentially walking on top of the crowd of demons, careful to not step on any outstretched claws and keeping an eye on the Fallen, who were surely eager to strike.

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@BCTheEntity Deprave looks good. Big backstory, interesting and fun character. Overall, approved.

With this, I urge some of you to look at your Gear. Make sure it fits, and make sure it's good. It doesn't have to be all combat, since there's more to this story than violence, but some of you have less than I would expect. Both guns and the important "Dataslab" are fairly common for humans in Hell, and some demons have Dataslabs as well.

EDIT: Didn't ever describe the "Dataslabs" in thread. Basically, it's a tablet. It can be set up with various functions like communications, tracking, hacking, games, art, whatever. If you give your character a Dataslab, give a list of basic functions, since the things are so modular.

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@Turbowraith I love him! Aggressive and inventive drunkards are a great addition to any team. The only thing is I would like a genuine backstory. Doesn't have to be much, you can summarize a lot with either his life or his time in hell, I'd just like something that gives me an idea of how he got where he is.

Also, wanna extend this offer again in case anyone missed it: We have a Skype chat. Feel free to PM me so I can get you in there if you want.