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Full Name: Maxwell V Ravencroft

Age: 28

Species: Human

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Straight

Appearance: Maxwell stand at 6'2" with long black hair, pale skin, sky blue eyes, slim but muscular figure and anti-possession tattoo over the center of his chest. He wears a black t-shirt, black cargo jeans, black military boots, a long, black duster coat made of light fabrics and a black hat resembling Van Helsing's from the movies.

Personality: He's cool, calm, collected, but at times can be brash and hotheaded. He hates to admit it but he loves the hunt, just like his father. He tends to over analyzes things, causing him to have a weird, almost dark, sense of humor.

History: Maxwell was brought up in a family of Hunters who took pride in what they built and killed. When he was 8, he witnessed his entire family killed by a group of monsters including a vampire, a skinwalker, a shifter, an arachne, a leprechaun and a kitsune all lead by a Djinn. The Djinn had been the child of a family of Djinn that the Ravencroft family had killed some years back and was returning with team of monsters who had been similarly hurt for vengeance. Young Maxwell hid, only coming out days after the monsters had left to check on his family and eat. He packed and left, soon being joined by a dog. With the help of the dog, the boy survived for a year before she revealed herself to him as a skinwalker.

With a long explanation, she told him how she had worked as an informant for Maxwell's older brother, Ryan, and had once shared a kiss with his sister, Nicole. She had not met his mother, Delilah, who had been ex-military, or his father, Edward, who had been a great weapon smith, but had heard good things about them. She had heard his mother was an experienced sniper, his father was better with any blade than anyone else Nicole had seen and his brother was the most experienced tracker. She then told him she had seen the monsters leaving the Ravencroft household with a number of weapons. When asked what they were, she gave a general explanation, which was enough to let the boy know those were his family's prized weapons.

More years passed and the pair became close. Their partnership grew with another member. He joined on a couple hunts but spent quite a bit of time away from the group. With more years came more talents for the boy to expand into, allowing for better hunts. He has already collected his brother's Falconeer 11mm pistol and his mother's Bloodrunner 45mm pistol, leaving his father's twin pistols, Claw and Fang, his mother's sniper rifle, From Mother With Love, his brother's triple-barrel shotgun, Cerberus, and his sister's twin pistols, the Sarcastic Bastards.

Extra:
Weapons: Falconeer and Bloodrunner (both above) along with a silver dagger, an iron rod and a normal sawed-off shotgun.

He also drives a black 2007 Ford Mustang with a modified engine.
Draxus would continue straight, following the path towards the half long dwelling. Upon seeing the small, fat beings, he would smile with a small chuckle before decapitating the nearest one. While many of them ran, some would turn to attack, most of them being killed swiftly by either him or his minions.
I'll jump in on this.
Let's breath some life into this party. I'll join. I'll tell Rokku to jump in too.
Draxus eyed each of the items they passed with a frown. One was blocked by water, the other by wood. With Oya and Soulless grabbing the spell stone, Draxus continued on. He had figured where there was wheat growing, there had to be a farm nearby. From over the trees, he could see smoke. He continued down the path past the wheat field, using his Dark Flare spell to set the wheat field aflame.
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Possibly age and factors that affect age, but I think if there is a timeskip; then it will be one that stays within the lifetime of active characters.


Siegfried is practically immortal. Age doesn't affect him because of the dragon blood.
Draxus scanned the area with a frown. He lifted his left hand, summoning his 5 Browns. Upon seeing the wall, which one of his siblings had already knocked over, he sighed. With that path open, he glanced of his shoulder, "If anyone wishes to follow, you're free to do so." He stomped down the path with his sword drawn, unsure of what lay ahead.
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Even without the tombs, every Overlord has their base power.


I think Bel would be fine with that.
Name: Draxus

Age: 25

Gender: Male

Mother: Fay

Preferred Minions: None

Compatibility: If towards the same goal, well.

Weapon: Sword

Spells: Dark Flare (short burst explosion of black flames) Dark Wall (bubble of darkness) Dark Enchantment (bends target to his will) Dark Heart (increases strength and speed as well as special abilities)

Worshipers: Elves
@KazeXDZ

Few things. First, and biggest problem, him being the princess's personal guard won't work for both story reasons and logical reasons. Story-wise, there is not princess and the current king is not of the hyrule line. Logically, the personal guard of royalty would not join up with a group of rouges and go wandering all over the country.

Next, the three weaknessess. Three is a repeat of one, and I would like you to explain number two a little better.

Being able to cook, hunt, gather and fish, and be 'excellent' at all of them is a bit...much. Pick one of those things.

Next, we have a sheikah and there are some special circumstances around them. I beveive some of the details are in a character sheet. Plus, equality and discrimination contradict the sheikah, in general. They are secrative and don't care much what people think about them. With that, no sheikai would not join the
guard because they are their own sect, with a similar, but bigger job then the soldiers.

Sorry, but there is way too much that doesn't work with your character. I suggest re-thinking him completely. (Although, you don't have to)


I'll edit him later. I didn't know much about the history. Sorry.
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