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@Lionhearted@Alfhedil@HushedWhispers
I went back and reread everything and edited it so hopefully it is better now. Please let me know if there is anything else I missed! Thank you!
@Kitty You got a few disconnects here and there where it looks like you went back and added or edited things. Namely in the middle of the Appearance section there's a paragraph that starts with talking about her height, then a couple sentences afterwards breaks up between one topic and discussing her height again before breaking back into another topic. You also reference Katalina's sister by two different names later in the background section lol.

Other than that, it looks alright enough to me.


Sorry about that, there were a few things i realized I forgot that I tried to add once I had finished. I will definitely read through it again and make it flow better in the morning. Also the names were probably due to lovely autocorrect by my browsers grammar add on, it really didn't like the names I had lol. Thank you for catching the ones I failed to catch and fix myself.
@Lionhearted@Alfhedil@HushedWhispers

Took me a bit longer than I meant for it to, but I finally finished my character! This is definitely the most detailed character I have ever written, hopefully it turned out well. Please do let me know if there is anything I can improve on!

@Lionhearted

My character will be up either later tonight or tomorrow, sorry that I couldn't get it up today. I was driving the whole day for my move, but it gave me all the time to write the character in my head. Which brings me to a question about part of my character's history/ current life. Is it possible for me to have my character have a sibling below the 16 year age limit? The sibling might be used as a npc, don't know if that is the right term to use for it, for me during the roleplay as they are important to what makes my character who they are.
@HushedWhispers@Lionhearted

My character is in progress currently but now I have a question about the abilities of werewolves. Mainly now I'm just confused a bit by their shifting capabilities, which very well could be from my own misreading of everything so far(or the fact that right now I should probably go to sleep ) , but hopefully you can help clarify things for me.

Can non-alpha werewolves also fully shift and partially shift, just not to the extent their alpha can or are the pack members limited to just partially shifting or a slow full shift?
I am also going to show my interest and get started on a werewolf if I can have one of the werewolf spots?

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@Heckno12




Dan was speechless when the winged girl defended him. If anything she was the victim here, and standing up to the fire girl was something he didn't really have the courage or deathwish to do. Before he knew it, the scary one had already gotten up and left with the bell.

"Um, thanks. I'm so sorry I got you involved in that, but I really appreciate you getting involved." Dan said trying to convey his grattitude. He realized that in all the chaos neither of them had shared names. "I'm Dan by the way, it's nice to meet you."




Raven watched as the girl with flaming hair got up and left, watching as she walked out before focusing back on the boy who thanked her before apologizing to her. She shook her head at his apology.

"Don't apologize. She had no reason to be so harsh." Raven informed him as she grabbed her bag with her swords while listening to him introduce himself. She stood up and glanced down at him. "Raven." She replied simply, "We should probably get back to class."




"Right, so..." Dan turned to Blink back to class before stopping. Dan's face reddened slightly. "Umm, if you want I could...teleport us both back now."

It wasn't exactly normal for him to offer, but at this point he wanted the company. Raven had already left an impression on him, and he wasn't just going to pretend she didn't.




Raven had begun to walk before he offered to teleport them both back. This caused her to stop in her tracks and think about it. She weighed the pros and cons, the only cons being that it stopped her from being anti-social in all honesty.

"I mean, if you don't mind also teleporting me back..." Raven trailed off as she turned around and looked at him for a short moment before looking away towards the windows again.




Dan blushed quite a bit as he extended his hand to barely touch Raven's arm. With just a moment of focus the two were back in the classroom no worse for wear. Dan quickly retracted his hand while offering Raven a genuine smile. Clearly he hadn't really looked at Raven before this, but the horns and wings actually added quite a bit of...regality? Dan didn't know what it was, but he blushed a bit more before gathering his voice to the best of his ability.

"Right, so...So...don't be a stranger!" He said.




Raven blinked a few times and steadied herself after they teleported before looking to Dan and noticing him smiling at her before he spoke. She also noticed a tinge of pink in his cheeks, or was that just her imagination. It didn't matter though, Raven offered him a small smile.

"Thank you." Raven softly said before turning and heading to her seat, her smile dropping so no one else would notice it as she set her bag down and then sat down, looking to the teacher.



Raven listened to the boy until her attention was brought to the girl they now sat across from. She turned her head and looked at the girl with an equally cold stare. She listened as the girl counted down as the boy tried explaining. The girl's attitude and all over just rude demeanor annoyed Raven, especially since it wasn't really the boy's fault. He couldn't fully control his quirk, none of them really could, that's partly why they were there... to get better at controlling their quirks.

Raven narrowed her eyes at the flaming girl across from her and brought her bag with her swords up onto the table, setting it down hard to draw the attention away from the boy. "So his quirk had a slight malfunction. What's your problem? No one can control their quirk perfectly yet." She said her voice cool and emotionless as she stared at the girl with fire hair with a darkness joining her cold eyes. In the background Raven heard the bell ring but her focus was on the current situation, they still had five minutes until class so she would leave in a minute.

@Heckno12@OrizaSaucer
I will have my character posted later today seeing as it is now 4 in the morning. I don't want my writing and character to suffer from the need for sleep.
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