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7 yrs ago
Current You did good, McGregor. Made us proud.
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7 yrs ago
No offense intended. But there's a sweet spot on the sliding scale of realism, and most of the interest checks I usually see skew too far to the realism end for me.
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7 yrs ago
Can't describe how quickly I go from excited to sad when a mecha premise turns out to be realism wankery.

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In her youth a wooden practice sword, unfortunately precise in its approach, fractured the Marchesa's forearm. Arabella didn't much remember precisely which bone, or how it had felt to have it set; general anesthetic ensured the memory never lodged in her mind, if she had really noticed the sensation at all. But she did remember how the splint had felt. The way it had restricted the movement of her arm, the consistent pressure it had applied. It was a lot like how the braces her gunner clasped about her person felt. The series on her left arm were secured last, and she pushed gently against them; only until she felt resistance. She didn't push past it. That would have made the machine around her move, and inside Thunderchild's belly that would be... An issue. But the resistance proved that the intricate series of buckles and loops about her person were doing their job. A strap about her middle secured her in place and provided her anchor; down both legs and her left arm were a series of braces that locked her limbs into position relative to the cords and anchors attached near each of her major joints. Not very comfortable, and even on standby inside the hangar her enclosure was steadily getting hotter. A thick layer of ballistic glass gave her a view into the hangar beyond, the other machines being prepared, and she wondered if they were feeling the same things.

Maybe not to the same extent. While the machines were all unique, all arguably prototypes, she had questions about the very interface she controlled. Arabella had championed it herself. She believed it was perfect for her Damocles, and she knew she could control it. The trouble, and why she knew her Kingdom was planning to do away with it in future colossi, was how much work it was. Simply operating it was taxing, let alone the weeks of practice to learn to control it as fluidly as it was capable of. And she had never actually performed the drop they were about to undertake. The concept worked, of course, but that little niggling doubt remained. It was all technology that was so new. Had it all been tested properly? Would it work properly for her unique colossi, every one of them must wonder? So on, and so on, and so on.

"Tutto pronto, Marchesa?"

"Si," The Marchesa answered simply, forcing confidence into the simple answer. It would work or it wouldn't. If it got her to the ground successfully she would handle the rest. "Al tuo post ora."

Her gunner nodded and gave the modified version of the bow she was due. To require such formalities all the time was impractical, to say the least of its ridiculousness. So the compromise had been struck to allow them their formality without interfering with their duties. The young man hurried to one of the two hatches behind her and she heard the door slam and ratchet shut. Whatever problems she might face, she knew, were mild compared to theirs. The descent for them would be fairly cold. And those reinforced doors were meant for her safety, not theirs. A risk, and all too likely sacrifice, that they accepted without reservation. She trusted them to do their jobs, and they her to be worthy of their efforts. Trust that had taken time and training to build.

And now it was time to put it to work.

She closed her eyes and breathed deeply, herself following the last few checks that she needed to perform. Her right arm was relatively unencumbered to enable her to access the emergency release she now felt for before returning her hand to hilt-shaped grip that served in place of a right wrist brace. At the one minute warning she softly began to pray.

Sancte Míchael Archángele, defénde nos in próelio...

At ten seconds she opened her eyes.

And at one the Damocles dropped.

Despite the way the system pulled at her limbs she kept the machine's own limbs straight, avoiding the possibility of interfering with another, larger falling colossus. Moments after the drop began the gaseous envelopes inflated, the sudden resistance driving the brace into her midsection. But relief washed over her at the mere fact that they worked. The rest, as she had thought, was up to her. Damocles struck earth like a mighty comet and as its legs bent so too did hers; giving ground, rather than keeping rigid, absorbed much of the impact though the force was still enough to make her feet ache. The cratered ground became visible as it smoothly rose in sync with her, the mighty avatar of her will stretching piston and valve to do as she bid. Her left arm rose, bringing with it Damocles' machine gun aimed at the fog ahead preemptively.

Lasciali venire. A flick of her right wrist triggered the pneumatically deployed sword to swing out and lock into place, ready and lethal. La mia lama ha sete.






"Privet, dorogiye!"

These machines sought with their own senses, and in their thermals a single point glowed vibrant red. Some of their spotlights settled upon it, light piercing the gloom to illuminate the threat to their searching sensors. The threat wasn't hiding; the harsh lights refracted on the steam issuing forth every time a drop of rain struck her skin, reflected off of the lenses over her eyes and the opalescent inlay on her spinning Gladius. Where they started dull by the end of its twirl they again glowed crimson, sharing Rivka's changing definition of 'reloading'. After all, there were no bullets. It was her power harnessed into a form she understood in and out; it was not an instrument itself but a conductor's baton. She was herself the symphony.

The Baeterran laughed, clear and musical, and bowed deeply to her robotic foes.

"An encore, then? Akh, tol'ko dlya vas." Her baton snapped up, sight flipped open and aligned with her eye. The spotlights impeded her own vision, even through her shades, but they also gave her unmistakable locations for her targets. She drew a breath, in slow and steady, and watched the bob of the loose formation of lights. As fast as their brains were they were simple, without creativity or genius. A tune generated by algorithm in the face of her artistry. Which was why she saw the shot they didn't account for, the moment that two targets overlapped and became one.

Her Gladius answered with both barrels, spewing white hot bursts of her Elementum at the same instant. If one of lesser power was enough to pierce one, then what these miniature suns would do scarcely bore thinking on. If it weren't fun. Who knows, they might have clustered closely enough that she could get some collateral damage out of those darling little novas. She'd need a moment to 'recharge', though, and the axes of threat were multiplying quickly. She jerked the bayonet off of her rifle with her other hand and held it loosely. A quick pivot and a few steps back put most of the enemies within her sight— if peripherally— and a wall at her back.

"How are we looking, girls?"






Selma had— she admitted perhaps reluctantly— a point.

Here she was upon a stage, with an expecting audience and a performance to give. Did she revel in the chance? No. She had been pouting beneath the rain. It was Godless and unpleasant, that went without saying; but she was wrong to simply accept it. More than that she was wrong to wish her own performance over quickly, however much she might prefer the warmth and dry.

Then again, she could make her own.

The devushka's scarf barely qualified for the term so large it was, but it had been draped around her neck for warmth. She gathered the ends and drew them taut about her throat to keep it safe. Much of her team— of Kheper— was already in motion, but they had things easily in hand thus far. One was down for the count, its disgraceful flailing indicative of an artificial mind that knew not when it was beaten. If there was a single quality for which she praised them— since it certainly wasn't aesthetics— it was drive. Single minded, unthinking, unquestioning drive. They would act in pursuit of their directive so long as there was power to their circuits. Such determination would have been laudable in a living being. In a machine, an imitation of human imperfection, it was simply... Sad. A facsimile of true will that it could never begin to understand, let alone truly emulate. It had no choice, no agency in its actions beyond that granted to it by a few lines of code. It strove without knowing for something that not only lay beyond its reach but beyond even the scope of its comprehension.

Enough was enough.

Her Parma appeared about her, garnished in addition by a single white scarf, and in an instant she was as warm and dry as she had been in her own bed. The ground for a few feet around her was dry, the water upon it lifting off in a cloud of steam as the artisan brandished her Gladius.

"Bang."

The four missiles streaking towards Selma had been launched from the same box, and though capable of seeking were locked upon the same target. They were clustered, a fact that increased their capacity of simultaneous destruction as much as their potential for unintended fratricide. If one went up, so too likely would the others. For example, if a brilliant flame detonated in their midst and took the magically charged warheads with it. That would clear Selma for the moment, next up was the importance of helping her pinned comrade.

With a melodic war cry, announcement as much as challenge, she sent a blast straight at the second drone's sensitive looking 'head' seeking to draw its attention.





Water was, under the right circumstances, peaceful and serene. Graceful and artistic. Endlessly kind and endlessly gentle and just as implacable, as merciless as Poseidon's wounded pride if its tides were not respected. But most of all, and most relevant at this moment, water was wet.

Haaa-choo.

In Baeterra water was valued, prized even. And it was respected. Without it the land would have been unlivable, its use as carefully considered and measured as any other critical resource. It had never been, in Rivka's life, something so carefree as she had heard in other cities. It wasn't scarce, so large a city could never be supported if it was, but a downpour so torrential was a rare occurrence and one that any sensible Baeterran was inside for. Not standing outside, pitting little more than a thin layer of hydrophobic garment against God's tears. And it was cold. And she had to use fire in the rain.

That they were 'Team 5' and not something much more graceful, a name like that which Crystal had labored upon for so long with such devotion, would normally be an affront but in the face of this misery she could manage little more than a sullen look on the subject. Her own magical affinity, at least, was enough to keep her warm; much of her team, too, if she stood closely enough. But it wasn't making her much happier.

"I want to scrap these quickly." The musician stated, quiet, subdued, and unhappy. "I want something hot to drink. With caffeine. Or marshmallows."





The night, all told, had been perfectly acceptable.

That was the conclusion of her own internal after action report. She sang her way through the thought process, every detail of the evening from front to back— but quietly. Ish. Crystal had asked very diplomatically if she could keep it down and in light of such a reasonable request Rivka was doing her best. 'Quiet' was something of a foreign concept; with so many musicians under one roof she was accustomed to the air being filled with sound, whether she added to it or not. But it was a simple request on the face of it.

If only obliging it was proving so easy.

Nevertheless she gave the evening due consideration as she removed from herself the uniform that she had come, with some reluctance, to at least accept. It needed a wash, then an iron, but more importantly she needed a shower. It would help to muffle her singing, too. Dancing with the cadet— Amalee— had been nice. To chat, to discuss her feelings on music, perhaps to encourage someone to pick their instrument up anew— worthwhile indeed. Ahhhh and the tsarina.

A smile that a lesser mortal might have called smug rather than satisfied crossed her lips and unbidden her tune climbed a few decibels while the Baeterran washed her hair under the water. That had been a victory, a coup-de-grace even. She was allowed to be smug about that. Progress was progress, a few steps further towards her proper success. Ah, but that seemed— more sensed than heard— to be a grumble from Crystal. She was getting a little loud. Think on that more quietly, at least for now.

Who knew what new triumph the morning would bring?

"Crystal?" She asked, turning off the water and swaddling herself in a towel. "Did you want the shower before bed?"

All in all, things were shaping up well.





"A perfectly laudable goal." The musician said with an easy smile. "I think those with the potential to better the world have an obligation to do so, in whatever form that is. Not all that different from why I elected to become an Ars Magi."

"Have you kept in practice?"
Rivka tilted her head inquiringly. "With the piano. To do a simple thing well is better than a difficult thing poorly, and it's always a shame if a skill is allowed to rust. Perhaps you can let me know how it has gone if you go to another show. I intend to perform at the same venue as often as they'll let me, schedule permitting."





“Music is its own magic I think.” A part of her initially bristled at the question— the suggestion that it might not be her own skill— but she understood and let no trace color her words. To witness such a performance was to question every other, to wonder what precisely was the unknown element, that secret variable, that elevated it so highly. To think of the supernatural was a compliment, an admission that her performance seemed to deny reality itself. The cadet— Amalee she said— knew the steps to Rivka's tremendous relief. She might not much enjoy the waltz but she would certainly do it justice and Amalee's own skill would be a significant help. The lazy smile that crossed her face spoke of a pleasant surprise. “But no it doesn't involve my magic.”

“I learned a long time before I came here. My parents taught me some, my babushka more. It was our preeminent occupation before the Void.”
The Ars Magi shrugged, a motion that sent ripples through her long purple hair that she had studiously ignored (had any occurred, she hadn't heard them now had she?) any hints that perhaps her usual style was not proper for her uniform. She kept track of the timing without seeming to pay any true attention, matching any changes to the tempo within a beat or two and leaving her mind free to pay attention to the finer points of her conversation. “We still practice it all but it isn't our means of income anymore. Not really. A little money on the side but the true purpose is artistry itself. Art is the most human thing of all, Amalee Kraus, for nothing save life itself encompasses the breadth of human experience so vividly. Words can be twisted, speakers can fail to convey with true fidelity the feelings of their heart. Art can never fail to make you feel exactly what it is meant to if you are willing to learn to express it.”

“Magic is its own art that way. There has never been, nor can there ever be, an Ars Magi the same as myself. Even with the same Elementum they will never have my Armagus, my Gladius, my Parma, none of the vital essence that makes me my own self. An imitator could, perhaps, come close. Could learn to echo the things that I have learned to do. But never be precisely the same.”
As if to illustrate her point a small, blue-hot will o' wisp of flame appeared stark against one red eye and moved to the other between blinks before disappearing entirely when Rivka winked. “Not that they could hope to match me, anyway.”

“What brings you to Palmyra, Amalee Kraus? The devushka— Miss Rosemarie, over there— is from Hasta too. Why become a cadet?”
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