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    1. KriticalKrab 10 yrs ago

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I'm okay with it, personality seems a bit iffy. Is it because she can make snow she wants everyone to call her Snow Star? Anyways accepted, I may have comments about it in the future, but move your character over when you feel like it.
The Snow Star thing is more or less a pet name that her older brother gave her after he found out about her powers. Once she developed them more, she accidentally began turning rain into snow and that's how he started calling her that. And what's wrong with the personality? I can change it if you would like... I was thinking that she was going to be kind of like a Beast Boy personality. I can change and make her more serious if you would like, like more of a Robin or Raven personality. --EDIT-- Would you prefer this personality?
I do actually prefer the first one better, but this is an OC so her personality can be anything, it's you and you alone that controls her. I don't have a real problem with her personality, I probably only thought it was iffy at the time because I was busy. Sorry if I've caused some trouble.
Well I can't really get behind the personality and I want to deny him because i'm sort of feeling worn down. But I'll give him a chance, looking at his weakness it would seem he would get weaker if he keeps using his form. "built up dimensional energy that is created when he does not use his form". I'd also appreciate it if you re read your app to make sure everything sounds right, some of it feels like you forgot to delete something or maybe you left off a part on accident, it could be that i'm just tired.
I'm okay with it, personality seems a bit iffy. Is it because she can make snow she wants everyone to call her Snow Star? Anyways accepted, I may have comments about it in the future, but move your character over when you feel like it.
WHAT??? We can't have TWO mechanical geniuses around here!
Rin is right, I thought it might be cool to eventually have you two fight/collaborate against each other.
Well I appreciate finally being accepted, I'll move my guy over as soon as I figure out exactly how I'm going to do this. I have a feeling my intro arc won't be as cool you everyone elses though.
Well I actually have no problems with it. In my opinion you've done a good job balancing your powers with your weakness. Just fix your pictures, add what you need to complete it, and you have a fine application. I will accept it when it is done. As for the previous two applications I will look at them soon, but I decided to work my way up from the bottom this time and address a long waiting app. Hopefully I'm keeping things consistant. Expect answers sometime today.
A very odd character, he's insane but he just wants to have fun? Sure. But I am slightly confused by his powers, on whether they are balanced perfectly or if he's to weak. I'm not to sure how this will work out, maybe i'm just needlessly confused, but for now I will accept.
We haven't even started yet lol, post your CS at your leisure.
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Well superheroes are usually sci-fi because of the aliens and such. Example: Superman was rocketed to earth from a space ship, that's kinda sci-fi. I plan on more aliens coming around messing with Earth, so if this isn't your fancy i'm sorry. Regardless, It looks like you've made a good attempt at balancing your character, I just wanted to make sure you knew your characters limits.
As another superhuman arrived on scene Daniel began to wonder if he had jumped in to quickly. Perhaps they were just busy. Observing the drone he had just taken down with an explosive, he noticed that it stayed down. The robot who had it's head taken down however was still moving, the obvious idea hit him at light speed. "Who ever you are, take out the body! The head doesn't matter, obviously the important parts are all inside the torso!" Daniel shouted to GA through his mask, he noticed that she was blocking their hands so they couldn't attack. But he couldn't be sure that would hold them. He took the time to examine the other meta human, who was currently holding a shield and rifle. She isn't a hero is she?
What Scarifar said does hold some weight, Storm is an experienced hero with training and multiple years of combat under her belt. Our group however has just started our careers, or we haven't been very good at it for long. So I feel very hesitant about the weather power, but I want you to keep in mind your environment in order to regulate your character's powers. If we're in the middle of a street brawling with villains I don't think your character will summon hurricane force winds while civilians and your allies are still around. If we're in an enclosed space obviously there isn't much atmosphere to work with so your powers will be lowered. I hope I'm not being stingy in the wrong places. As for her plant powers, I'm not quite sure how to feel about this. However since we are in a sci-fi rp, what with the aliens and what not, expect your defensive walls or even some of your plants to burn away quickly in battles. Basically keep your powers in check with your environment, adjust your bio slightly as there isn't a Teen Titans mascot running around recruiting, and I accept you. Finally, I've made some changes to the first post in order to help establish more of an environment. If anyone who has any suggestions go ahead and throw them to me. After all the best man made things are made by teamwork.
@MamaSushi Just going to give you a little advice I've learned over the years, but precognition is generally not a very good power for RPs for various reasons. ^^; Since most of the plot isn't set in stone, and usually in the best case scenario it ends up being an utterly useless power because of this. ...Also I find it a little weird that the "weakness" is that she can only see a few years into the future, when pretty much every time I've seen futuresight be used in stuff the nerf is that it's only able to see a few minutes into the future at best. ^^; Honestly, the invisibility and the psychometry (which is pretty cool though, and it's always fun to see that show up in stuff) are the less problematic of her powers. @Archmage MC ...Is it okay if I suggest just calling him "Archmage"? Otherwise things might get a bit confusing in the OOC. XD Other than that, he looks like a pretty fun Mr. Mxyzptlk kind of villain. XD ...Um, hope my suggestions are okay. Krab did mention the possibility of me co-GMing, after all, although I'm a little worried I'm jumping the gun a bit here. ^^;
I agree, invisibility I may allow since we are super heroes. I've been trying to keep an open mind but also a tight limit on certain powers. I realize MamaSushi that you were trying to balance her foresight with headaches it still seems somewhat, unbalanced. Perhaps we could make it a latent power, something you can't reliable call upon, but something I could use perhaps for story. As for co-gm I'm still thinking about it since a few people have offered but it's still in the air.
I would like for you to remove any mention of the TT in your bio. In our RP they don't exist at all...yet, only the Justice league and a few of their companions are known to the world.
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