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Re-made and hopefully it's improved :)
Name: Basoth Geiunt Alias: Dissipo Age: 16 Personality: Basoth is an adventurous Teenager, He is new to the earth and doesn't understand the 'rituals' and events that go on in a human life. Although quite confused about humans he still wants to learn as much as he can about them. He finds himself as funny person, but his jokes are not amusing to those not from his world. He is a cheerful person when in and out of combat, He thinks that if a battle is not joyful than there is no point battling Powers: Dissipo has the ability to deconstruct him self into small blocks and then resemble himself into any object, For example he could use this power to reconstruct himself into a larger form to give himself more strength, or change into a Remote control helicopter to move from place to place faster, He could also Change his lower arm into a melee weapon, or he could deconstruct himself into the blocks to fit through a very small space. He can't create anything that he hasn't seen before, neither can he recreate animals. Weakness: The fact that he is able to change form is due to the electrical charge that the Corrian species is given from birth, So when he becomes soaked in water he will be unable to reassemble or deconstruct himself. When he is changing a large portion of his body it takes a lot of energy, For example if he was to try and make a car he would pass out. He is mainly a Close quarters combatant so vulnerable to long range attacks Bio: Dissipo was born on a planet named Avalon in the Arthurian System, An Earth-like planet that his species, the Corrians, had inhabited. The Corrians are raised quickly when in childhood, as soon as they are old enough they are sent out to colonize a designated world, if they are not chosen for colonization they are selected as workers, using their abilities to build, create, and if needed fight. Dissipo had been chosen as a Worker but did not find his work was satisfying he could only do commbat training a limited amount of times. He stole a small freighter and inputted random co-ordinates he went into stasis for 4 years until he arrived at his destination Earth. Once he reached orbit his engine failed. and he was sent plummeting towards the earth. When he crash landed he discovered the human race and ever since has been learning about them. At first he was a little shocked, but the more he learnt about this race the more he wanted stay, eventually he made his decision to destroy his ship and stay on earth. Arc Ideas: Other: Titans forever
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...Sorry, I'm pretty blunt but how does being able to go through dimensions allow a spiritual form to phase through shadows and shoot beams of energy? I may just be super stupid, but it doesn't make much sense. Then again, I'm not the GM or the Co-GM. So I may be stretching my limits. Edit: As a sidenote, I'm going to keep a lot of Embry's old character, but I'm just gonna change Her powers.
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...Sorry, I'm pretty blunt but how does being able to go through dimensions allow a spiritual form to phase through shadows and shoot beams of energy? I may just be super stupid, but it doesn't make much sense. Then again, I'm not the GM or the Co-GM. So I may be stretching my limits. Edit: As a sidenote, I'm going to keep a lot of Embry's old character, but I'm just gonna change Her powers.
No, you raise a good point I'll edit it to make sense, it was one of those things it which made sense when i read it, i sometimes need a second opinion. [EDIT:] I've now made a bit more sense of it, it isn't spiritual anymore, please tell me what you think.
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Name: River Corner Alias: Snow Star Age: 16 Personality: River is a fun loving person. She loves to mess around. She tends to go with the flow and does not care what someone does as long as it isn’t dangerous. She is extremely loyal to whoever her leader is and tends to be more of a follower than a leader. She is not afraid to speak her mind. She is very patient when it comes to anger but during a fight, her fuse is about the size of a fingernail. She hates being called “Girl” or being called “girly”. She also hates it when people just call her “Star” without the “Snow” (You’ll see why when you read her powers). Powers: River is what most would call a “water bender”. She can manipulate water to her will, freeze it and heat it up as well. She can turn rain to snow with just a touch of her finger to a raindrop. She can also speak underwater and is able to breath under water for a limited amount of time and move underwater better than most people. She can create air bubbles for those on her team who can’t. She cannot talk to fish and there is a limit to how much water that she can hold at a time. She also has a naturally cold body, so she doesn't feel heat unless it's burning heat. Weakness: As it would seem, her weakness is fire, but not for the reason that most people would think. (the explanation is in her bio). She is also weak when it comes to people hurting those that she cares about. Appearance:
Bio: River grew up in a small little cottage just outside of Jump City. Her parents mostly lived off the forest that they lived in while her and her four older brothers would run around and play. She loved to go down to the lake and swim in it or play water games with her brothers. They would help their parents by carrying water back up from the lake and watering the plants that they always kept. River’s powers developed earlier and it mostly started out as her being able to move water and manipulate it, like turning it into a ball. She kept it a secret from her family and everything was fine. Until she turned thirteen. On the night of her thirteenth birthday, it was a very cold night. Her mother had turned the heater way up and it was toasty in the house. River woke up, coughing on smoke and ash and she realized that the house was on fire. She grabbed her small dog and woke up as many of her brothers as she could, which happened to be only two. The brothers took her outside and then went back in for her parents and her other brothers. They never came back out. She had to use her powers to soak the fire and get it out before she ran back inside, looking for her parents. In the lower level of the cottage, she found her mother and father, dead from carbon monoxide. She then walked into the kitchen and saw her youngest brother and second oldest trapped under a fallen, burning log. The log had broken both their backs. She then heard noise and whipped around to see her oldest brother carrying her second youngest brother in his arms. The second youngest was dead from carbon monoxide. After that fateful night, her brother found out about her powers, but he didn’t care. Both of them moved into Jump City, and her brother wound up taking two jobs. He raised her as she practiced her powers more and more. One night, though, he never came home from his second job. It turns out, though, that he was shot point blank in the back of the head from a robbery at the bank where he worked. This was only two months ago. She now fights crime as a way to avenge her brother’s death and she poses as something the opposite of fire, as a way of remembering her family as they once were. Arc Ideas: I feel like you need to have a solid, stationary (either NPC or PC) villain that is against what is going with us. Other: Titans Forever!! :)
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Fixed my character sheet there. So any characters accepted so far? though Rin, my character is made in such a way that he cna fill villian or hero roles.
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though Rin, my character is made in such a way that he cna fill villian or hero roles.
I kind of just got a zany, Mr. Mxyzptlk-like villain vibe from him, honestly. ^^; ...Anyways, busy right now so will look over the new stuff in a bit unless Krab gets to it first I guess.
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Well I actually have no problems with it. In my opinion you've done a good job balancing your powers with your weakness. Just fix your pictures, add what you need to complete it, and you have a fine application. I will accept it when it is done. As for the previous two applications I will look at them soon, but I decided to work my way up from the bottom this time and address a long waiting app. Hopefully I'm keeping things consistant. Expect answers sometime today.
A very odd character, he's insane but he just wants to have fun? Sure. But I am slightly confused by his powers, on whether they are balanced perfectly or if he's to weak. I'm not to sure how this will work out, maybe i'm just needlessly confused, but for now I will accept.
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WHAT??? We can't have TWO mechanical geniuses around here!
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Arc Ideas: I feel like you need to have a solid, stationary (either NPC or PC) villain that is against what is going with us.
Oh right, should at least address this... Had an idea that we start off a bit episodic and "villain of the week", but after a while someone begins gathering together all of these villains into a group to face the Titans, since they'd figure it'd be easier to fight a team of heroes with a team of their own (amongst other reasons but yeah). Still needs a bit of work, but yeah. ^^; ...I guess that's my initial arc idea, actually. And speaking of villains, still working on ideas for mine, although Ostarion's character actually helps whittle down my list a little (since one of the ideas was a technology-based robot master, but that's already covered so I can move onto other ideas).
WHAT??? We can't have TWO mechanical geniuses around here!
Evil counterparts are a long standing tradition amongst superheroes! :D
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Well, MC has access to free form portals that he can just conjure into existance. And thinking with portals can be very powerful if you know how to use it.
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Well I can't really get behind the personality and I want to deny him because i'm sort of feeling worn down. But I'll give him a chance, looking at his weakness it would seem he would get weaker if he keeps using his form. "built up dimensional energy that is created when he does not use his form". I'd also appreciate it if you re read your app to make sure everything sounds right, some of it feels like you forgot to delete something or maybe you left off a part on accident, it could be that i'm just tired.
I'm okay with it, personality seems a bit iffy. Is it because she can make snow she wants everyone to call her Snow Star? Anyways accepted, I may have comments about it in the future, but move your character over when you feel like it.
WHAT??? We can't have TWO mechanical geniuses around here!
Rin is right, I thought it might be cool to eventually have you two fight/collaborate against each other.
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I'm not really against it, though I do wonder where this will lead.
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I'm okay with it, personality seems a bit iffy. Is it because she can make snow she wants everyone to call her Snow Star? Anyways accepted, I may have comments about it in the future, but move your character over when you feel like it.
The Snow Star thing is more or less a pet name that her older brother gave her after he found out about her powers. Once she developed them more, she accidentally began turning rain into snow and that's how he started calling her that. And what's wrong with the personality? I can change it if you would like... I was thinking that she was going to be kind of like a Beast Boy personality. I can change and make her more serious if you would like, like more of a Robin or Raven personality. --EDIT-- Would you prefer this personality?
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I'm okay with it, personality seems a bit iffy. Is it because she can make snow she wants everyone to call her Snow Star? Anyways accepted, I may have comments about it in the future, but move your character over when you feel like it.
The Snow Star thing is more or less a pet name that her older brother gave her after he found out about her powers. Once she developed them more, she accidentally began turning rain into snow and that's how he started calling her that. And what's wrong with the personality? I can change it if you would like... I was thinking that she was going to be kind of like a Beast Boy personality. I can change and make her more serious if you would like, like more of a Robin or Raven personality. --EDIT-- Would you prefer this personality?
I do actually prefer the first one better, but this is an OC so her personality can be anything, it's you and you alone that controls her. I don't have a real problem with her personality, I probably only thought it was iffy at the time because I was busy. Sorry if I've caused some trouble.
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I'm okay with it, personality seems a bit iffy. Is it because she can make snow she wants everyone to call her Snow Star? Anyways accepted, I may have comments about it in the future, but move your character over when you feel like it.
The Snow Star thing is more or less a pet name that her older brother gave her after he found out about her powers. Once she developed them more, she accidentally began turning rain into snow and that's how he started calling her that. And what's wrong with the personality? I can change it if you would like... I was thinking that she was going to be kind of like a Beast Boy personality. I can change and make her more serious if you would like, like more of a Robin or Raven personality. --EDIT-- Would you prefer this personality?
I do actually prefer the first one better, but this is an OC so her personality can be anything, it's you and you alone that controls her. I don't have a real problem with her personality, I probably only thought it was iffy at the time because I was busy. Sorry if I've caused some trouble.
No it's total fine! I'm adaptable. :)
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Just got finished reading the applications. This should be fun. I think good robot guy; Scarifar's character, and the dimensional guy; Philip's character, will be the two that Jason honestly wouldn't mind at first glance. The others will probably annoy the Hell outta him. Idk though, it depends on the situation.
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I can't remember much about the show, but I'm willing to re-brief myself if you think it's necessary. Name: Masa Hayashida Alias: Black #2 (pronounced: Black Number Two) Age: 19 Personality: Masa is a temperamental young man with a short fuse who has little patience for authority. Though this is just his outer shell, those who win Masa over will find that he can be a very loyal and endearing friend. Powers: Masa's powers channel through a guardian figure that follows him wherever he goes. This ghost appears at Masa's command, though Masa does not need to speak to summon it, and can be dismissed just as easily. This guardian has been dubbed "Locomotive Breath" by Masa, who stole the name an artist he likes. Locomotive Breath wields enormous strength and superhuman speed, making Masa a challenging foe in one on one combat, particularly against normal human beings. On top of his daunting skill in combat, Masa's guardian possesses the ability to amplify the damage of his punches with small explosions similar to those inside an engine. Weakness: Masa isn't very smart, and can be baited into attacking at an inopportune time very easily. On top of this, he has no ranged potential, meaning that anyone faster than him can quickly escape in the time it takes Masa to get on his motorcycle. Appearance: Masa and Locomotive Breath Bio: Masa has always been a violent child, constantly picking fights with other kids, neighbours, strangers, grandparents, you name it, there was no challenge too daunting for the young hooligan. However as the old saying goes, crime doesn't pay, and Masa was transferred to one of Japan's largest juvenile detention centres. Here Masa became immersed in a culture that finally accepted him. While the guar- err, teachers would often bully Masa for his dumb haircut, he found community among his classmates who shared his ideals and style. Though living in a small restricted area with thousands of hooligans and delinquents does have its dangers, and it wasn't long before he pissed off the wrong crowd. During one lunch break, Masa was tripped by a couple of kids belonging to the Black-Tiger-Leopard-Dragon-Fire Club, a relatively small gang who were dangerous all the same. Responding with a flare of anger, Masa charged the entire table of hooligans, pinning one to the floor before being pulled of and ganged up upon. Masa's tenuous relationship with the staff gave them little reason to help, and so the entire cafeteria turned a blind eye to his beating, every last one of them left the poor boy to his fate. Though as a final blow was about to be struck against his head, all went white. When Masa's vision returned, the crowd had dispersed, the floor was charred, and one kid was on fire. The staff finally rushed to break up the ruckus, but left Masa to ponder on what had happened. According to some, Masa's final punch had "exploded", a rumour he needed to investigate himself. That night, in his small dorm, Masa saddled up to his punching bag and threw a quick hook. Another flash of light, but when his vision returned this time, before him stood a metallic humanoid who floated just inches above the floor. The being mimicked Masa's movements, and seemed entirely in his control. In a test of his new "magical" skill, he commanded the being to unload a quick string of punches against the wall of his dorm. Sure enough, explosions ensued, and after half a minute the wall ceased to exist, Masa was free. That was two years ago. Today Masa roams the US on a motorcycle, destined to use his power to prove his badassness to anyone he meets. Arc Ideas: Masa learns the power of love. Other: "Titans Forever", don't know why I forgot that initially.
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Seems very Jojos Bizarre Adventure, which is pretty awesome really. XD I like the look of him at least.
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Seems very Jojos Bizarre Adventure, which is pretty awesome really. XD I like the look of him at least.
JoJo is love, JoJo is life. But yeah, it's very much based on Stands and JJBA.
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