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"My dad. He used to be a captain back during the war, and the doc was in the peace corps. After a few of my dad's friends got their limbs blown off, she helped them... Well not get back to the fighting, but not die. They kept in touch since then. After the war she continued to study and went from army surgeon to an orthotist. Admittedly, she did leave the peace corps after hearing that many of the old vets from the war were wasting away in civilian life, mostly due to their mutilations severely limiting their career options. Not everyone can afford proper replacement limbs after all, but she tried anyways. So yeah, she's a professional. An affordable, low budget professional who typically caters to veterans and victims of war."

Of course this was also leaving out the fact she left the peace corps because she went to join the White Fang.


Some of this stuff sort of bothers me. I was wondering if you could clarify. It sort of impacts how Sapphire'll take this information.

From my limited research (Hari might know more) a Peace Corps seems to be a type of relief unit that works in war torn areas to help the country recover. From what I can tell they wouldn't be active in countries they're homeland was currently at war with (sort of counter productive). Assuming this is the Faunus Civil Rights Wars we're talking about I'm not sure how to reconcile that cause the Faunus were at war with all four kingdoms. If the Doc was a faunus then shouldn't she just have been part of the war effort and (as I'm pretty sure is the case) if she's human then why were resources being wasted to help faunus recover? Even after the war the heads of administration wouldn't have had any particular caring for wounded faunus and during the war it seems to me that letting enemy combatants die would be preferable to using your own utilities to save their lives.

Regarding her involvement in the White Fang, up until five years ago they were a non violent protest group. You've stated she got out before that happened so presumably she worked with them before they radicalized. This would have been a time when everyone was still pretty discriminator so why would a faunus protest group welcome a human doctor. More importantly what exactly would a doctor's purpose in a protest group be?
@Prince of Seraphs Oi, no post on Sundays or...


None shall not post on the lord's holy day you heretic.


Not that it's super important but it's generally considered polite to put the CS in the character tab after it's been accepted. Not really a big thing though.

As far as the CS goes, interesting character but I think it could benefit from some more details in the Weapon, Specialty and Semblance sections. They're good ideas but some of them are a little vague. Specifically the semblance how does that differ from general natural aura? Also what are the limits to it as there is nothing to suggest that he couldn't maintain something indefinitely.

Also I should mention something. The section History is not included in the CS template. The idea was that histories would be kept confidential so that they could naturally come out in the IC rather than giving everyone all the relevant information. It got a bit out of hand when people started putting crazy things in their histories that they didn't have to run by anyone cause it was all kept to themselves until it splashed into the IC where it was too late. We had one character that was cannibalistic at one point which had to be retconned away. Because of that while the History Section isn't included in the CS one has to be made up and PMed to the GM and if you want more than one view on it, the CoGMs as well (though sending it to me and Hari in addition is optional).
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Something is seriously wrong with this picture... and just as soon as I figure out what it is someone's gonna die.
Korea is really good at making waifus.


Crazy machine gun, chainsaw toting waifus?
So anyways, I like that picture. She looks cute, but I can't help but feel that I know her from somewhere.

She looks familiar....


She killed you in a previous life. Guess Who's warning's fell on deaf hears. Poor poor past life Hari.
Yoink.


@Lucius Cypher You've created a monster.
@Prince of Seraphs no, i got what episode yku were referring to, but no co text as to why... If it was something someone said, then I am afraid I gave up on keeping up with OOC long time ago, I got shit to do xD


No it was literally out of the blue.
He says, except I just woke up and have no clue xD


You have failed me my friend.
My sister gave me "The Complete Works of William Shakespeare" for my birthday. I am so happy right now.
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