@Letter BeeI'm glad to hear it! Any critique at all, though? Just because he's good doesn't mean he's perfect. I'd love to hear critique anybody has actually.
Y'know, is he coming off as too much of a snob? He's intended to be a bit of a 'noble bigot' in TV tropes lexicon.
tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/No..Or, more simply, he definitely has his downsides of being prejudiced (in this case, against 'FILTHY PLEBIANS' and 'FILTHY NONHUMANS') but he does have good qualities which generally win out.
At least, that's what I mean for him to be. Am I accomplishing that so far, too much, too little?