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Ok here's the "prototype" CS. I think it's fair to say the three of us can all kinda take some level of charge in this rp, so let me get some feedback from you guys.







I thought going with a three part CS could help prevent the redundancy of some information, and show that the player really is making two characters. I would think that dialogue or even conflict later on between the actual gods could arise.
Sorry for the seemingly low activity on my part. I've been unforeseeably swamped with work this week, and my character isn't the most active and expressive. So it's a bit tough to have him "do anything" when it would be more in character to not do things. Which opens up the problem of do I not post or do I write one line/paragraph of Geno doing nothing.

Hell, even when I DID have him do a thing, nobody noticed. Which I suppose is good since he's the team's "ninja."

Kellam status up in this bitch.
Suit yourselves. I'm at classes right now though, and I have work right after. I will have time this evening to work on it.
Daglobster said
If I may insert my opinion, I don't think stat-based is a good idea. That's just me and my personal dislike of systems, though. I think going stat-less allows for more freedom.


Ive made stat and statless rps work well. It really comes down to personal preference.
notdeadyet said
Well, im a terrible Gm, so how about one of you two be the Gm, and I happily know that i helped bring up the idea. ^_^ than we all win! Yaaaay!


Haha if you insist! I'll make a CS template tonight or tomorrow after school and work. Do you want this to be stat based?
I've a good deal of experience GM'ing, so I can certainly help in that. I could also help make the CS format if needed.
Ey Helsing if it's not too much trouble, could you log all the CS's in the OOC OP?
Geno silently sipped from his glass as the new members entered, introduced themselves, and then proceeded to bicker. Well, some of them anyway. He was surprised that none of them looked to him for an introduction. Even in a well-lit room with now only six people in it, he had managed to not garner any attention from the recruits.

Lee.
"Nessie."
Nora.
Eden.

Lee seemed alright. As for the sparks that flew between the ladies, well, Geno expected as much.

He finished his rum right around the ending of Neisha's rebuttal, and rose from his seat. As he crossed between Brooker and the new members, he notices their eyes on him, as if expecting word from him. He stopped mid pace at this, raised an eyebrow at them, and then turned to Brooker, who was busy with the projector. Geno returned the gaze of Lee and the women, and remained for a long moment. With a shrug, he broke sight with them to deposit his glass into the sink near the far wall, and returned to his original seat. He knew that Brooker would take care of Geno's "introduction."
Caits said
Can I just say this without sounded like an argumentative person? They're . Of course there is going to be some unconventional ways here. That being said my post will probably be the only one I write that is like what it is.!Besides, Nessie has toys, you have to expect she would try them out on the base when she first arrived.


Nah I didn't want to start an argument or piss people off, just wanted to get a point across because continuity errors have been second only to lack of interest when it comes to killing a rp.
I just want to take the time to say this now before it gets out-of-hand.

Continuity.

Good continuity is probably the most important part of any roleplay, and I'm already seeing minor conflicts in continuity. We have characters already being there when it was clear that Brooker and Geno were the only two people there (and thus skipping the characters meeting eachother). We have people entering in ways where it was clear those methods aren't possible.

Guys, PLEASE really read every word of the posts before yours to make sure you're not doing things or having other character do things in a way such that it creates conflict with what other people wrote those characters to have already done or gone to. And when you finish your post, copy it, refresh the page and check for new posts that happened while you were writing.

Sorry if I seem like a dick, but this kind of stuff really bothers people like me who play High Casual and Advanced.
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