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Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Durnehviir said
I mean, it wouldn't have bothered me as much if you hadn't like...Onelined with them. I mean, if you are going to have some exception and have all 4 characters you should at least be making the extra effort of using them. Having that many characters means that you should be going the extra mile to bring out their personalities, their thoughts, and describing their actions in detail. Should be able to post with the same level of descriptive detail with one character for each of those characters, it's a lot more work. That was like your moment to demonstrate that you could handle 4 characters and it wasn't even a post that equated to a single paragraph collectively. If anything, that post shows that 4 characters is probably too much for you at the get-go. Multiple characters isn't for everyone. Especially if you can't post at least at a casual level of 2-3 sentences per character.

That's true to an extent, it could also be lack of inspiration or low on time to post.

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Alright Yozora, if you insist. And Okani has officially started a game of hide and seek, your move.

Edit: Okani has fun ways to teach her students to be bad ass, Hide and Seek is just one of them.

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Okani was stunned by her gropings and narrowed her eyes at her student, with a shake of her head and a grin she brushed the girl off. "Hey Nagi, I'm going to call you Nagi because it like it better than your actual name! My name is not Oppai! It's Okani! Get it right punk! Ria is a bad influence on you, I see it already" Okani said with a sigh. It was raining again, it didn't bother her as she did the hand signs for her Jutsu. "Water Style: Water Clone Jutsu!" Okani said as a clone of herself appeared from the water.

"Alright, we're going to play a game and tomorrow, at this exact spot, the hard work will begin. We're playing hide and seek, don't ask questions! Here are my rules, don't leave the village and don't go into shops or any where that people are in. If I find you or if she finds you then you have five seconds to run away before I or she tags you" Okani said sternly.

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Wow, Masaki. Just wow, are you obsessed with boobs? XD!

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Okani has issues with the whole red eye thing with Ria, even though she has red eyes naturally. Praise be for the smoke bombs that Okani keeps at ready.

Yeah, equals. It's one thing that it was friendly but when it's not friendly, watch out world.

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Score one for my red head! Lol

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Okani

Okani was thrilled that she won, however she was not expecting it to end so because of Ria's kekkei genkai, seriously freaked her out when it was used. Of course, her own illusions were very hard to break out of, even a trained Genjutsu user would have a hard time with her Genjutsu. It was mostly because of her clan, which were gifted in Genjutsu, deciding that she should let Ria go spank her punks and leave back for Amekagure to see who her kid was, she found herself over joyed when she saw that she had a student. Finally, it was time to take her teachings to someone. "Kazomi Style: King of Birds!" Okani said as she did the hand signs and the huge eagle appeared, which was big enough for two people to ride on.

Flying through the air at a steady pace, she reached the Hidden Rain village soon enough and dropped from the sky, landing in front of the girl. "You must be? Nadi? Nasi? Angina? Oh wait! Nagisa! That's your name right?" Okani asked with a smile. Finally taking out the scroll the hawk had gave her, she read it and laughed out loud. "Hey look, it says everything right here!" Okani said and continued to laugh. "So Nagisa, tell me about yourself" she said with a smile.

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

How long was the time skip? Where is everyone?

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Okani grinned as she appeared behind Ria, already doing the hand signs for her Genjutsu and before Ria could stop her with that pesky Sharingan had already finished it. "Kazomi Style: Rose Tornado" Okani said as she trapped her in the a Genjutsu. Since the last time this was used on Ria it was minute compared to how it had gotten stronger, the white Rose petals fell like snow in a blizzard and formed a huge white blinding tornado. While trapped in the Genjutsu, she appeared and said "watcha going to do now?"

Dispelling the Genjutsu as she did the hand signs for next technique, Wind Cutters, once done she said "Wind Style: Wind Cutters" Okani said but purposely ended the attack as this was a friendly spar. Using her water clone for water, she was already on the next technique which was how she was planning on getting closer to victory. "Water Style: Water Prison Jutsu!" Okani said as the water trapped Ria.

Seranai

Listening as Maiko apologized to her, she just nodded and watched as they talked about each other's tailed beast, they could talk to them? But how? "You can talk to them?" Seranai asked nervously, she didn't know you could do that, there were times where she felt like she wasn't alone but to be able to talk to them, sounded interesting. As Kai asked about how she became a Jinchūriki, she looked at him blankly and frowned.

"I don't know... Found out yesterday... Didn't tell me.." Seranai said as she fidgeted, these two were obviously much stronger than she was, she hoped that she didn't drag them back too much. So many people had told her that she could never be a ninja, that she was too weak and a failure even as she trained.

Naruto - Legend of the Bijuu's - Part I - OOC

Hehe, let the games begin!