LordDeadpool

Create-A-Hero: A Superhero RPG Season 2- New Horizons (Closed)

Hey there, Lord Deadpool hear, quick little question: Can a character have more then one power if they are powered?

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Scaly McFuck

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

-.- GOD DAME IT!!! I WASTED TWO WEEKS TRYING TO GET IN TO THIS DAME RP!!!! >:(

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

Guys I'm certain the RP died anyway.

@FrozenEcstasy

When pigs fly Frozen. If I am let in to this RP I am not letting ANY of you guys miss posting at least ones a week. I'm not called the BUG MASTER OF ROLEPLAY for nothing you know, neo and crull can attest to that >:)

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

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I see no evident problem with Tartarus. I admit that I wish his magic was a bit more unique, I have this fancy magic system specifically so that people can blend things and come up with interesting new takes on magic but I won't fault Tartarus for sticking with the classics.
That said, I would ask you refrain from being rude to Myr, as he was just giving you information. Never be rude to someone who is trying to help you, frankly refrain from such things in general, but especially refrain from being rude to those who gift you with knowledge.

Anyways, I am not very good at examining and judging things, especially characters so while Tartarus does have the okay in my book I would hear from my three Co-GMs their thoughts on the matter.

@neogreggory

First off, I was not being rude to Myr,he just pointed out something I did not ask for and return I pointed out that he pointed out something I did not ask for. As for the magic stuff, if you where to read between the lines, you would have noted that he can manipulate the lightning in to spirit entity's, that can be anything going from small sprite-like things to large lighting beasts. A for the mental magic's, what I stated is just the tip of what I had in mind for them

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

I asked for an opinion and/or verdict, not who else is a GM Myr. Regardless, give me your input on my new guy Myr, and if Rune shows up as well, hers too
@Myr @Rune_Alchemist @neogreggory

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

As crull has given me his, some what, verdict ( even though he really did not say whether or not he would approve it), and a bit of help as well, I would like to get a statement from the other two game overlords, @Myr and @neogreggory (with out pointing out the spelling as crull has already did that)

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

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1: You have edited the parts that I've mentioned, but not actually everything. Thought I'd point that out.

2: Or you could probably also type it into a word processor that tells you when words are spelled incorrectly...but it seems that is certainly a problem for you, isn't it?

3: I'd say I'd be happy to, but I don't have anywhere near that kind of time. And also wouldn't.

@Cruallassar

Other then what you pointed out that needed spellchecking, I ran everything else throw google translate to be absolutely sure that it was correct, and regarding you not wanting to help me proof-read this app, I guess I will have to ask some one else then

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Blondejob

Arkangrad Academy for Arcane Aspirants [Always Accepting]

Before we actually get to the character concept itself, you have reached 10 errors on the mispelled words "though" (Which you spell tho) and "due" (which you spell do, which is incorrect in this usage) alone. I am willing to grant you as many retries on the application as you like, or you may edit it to fit, but I thought you should know where you stand there.

By the way, those are just the most prolific of errors, you make more than just those. I recommend having a native English speaker proof-read your work, if one is available.

@Cruallassar

1. To avoid the you-are-not-in-cos-of-spelling thing, I have edited the parts that needed to be editied

2. The only way I can have some one proof-read what I have set down is if I have some one online thats a native english speaker help me, as I have NO ONE thats a native english speaker liveing any were near me

3. Would you be willing to help me then Crull?

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