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9 yrs ago
Current On vacation in the tropics, sorry for inactivity
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9 yrs ago
"Oh my Ron, do you see that homosapien boy over there with his little pink shirt"- Actually something I heard today.
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9 yrs ago
Exams are making me inactive
9 yrs ago
I'm basically a God of balancing school and work and role playing at this point
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I already have 3,000 words for you, OH GLORIOUS LEADER




I DEMAND TO SEE OUR MAJESTY IN HIS GLORIOUS TRUE FORM
@Glorious Herald WHY IS YOUR NAME HERALD AND NOT LEADER!? FRAUD!!!

THE REBELLION HAS IMPERSONATED OUR GRACEFUL OVERLORD!!!!!!

THIS HERALD SPREADS THE LIES OF THE REBELLION
ALL HAIL THE GLORIOUS LEADER! MAY HIS VISAGE BE PAINTED A THOUSAND TIMES WITH THE BLOOD OF OUR ENEMIES!!


@Terminal
Thank you very much for the review. This was a first time for me, and I appreciate the thoroughness of your review. I will definitely be joining the next contest here with everything you said in mind.
Most of the errors in my story probably resulted from the fact that I wrote the story the day before the deadline (I found out about contests the day before), and I didn't even read over it before sending it in. I hope that next time I can weave a tale that is pleasing in both its structure and its story. Thanks again!
Sol listened to all the plans, trying to make sense of them all. He had never played any kind of game like this before. He tried to make sense of the distance that the dungeon was, but had never been the best in math class. All he knew was he was fast, and he knew how to fence, somewhat. He thought back to childhood, long before she made the rash decision to play this death game.

Karen watched her big brother fencing. It was like a dance, or a song. Either way, the fight interested her. Her brother was winning, obviously, and she had been jumpin up and down like a little maniac.
"Calm down, Karen." Her mother commanded, and she stopped immediately, sitting very still for the rest of the match. Afterwards, her brother came over to her. "Hey, K! I didn't know you were here!" He laughed, swooping Karen up into his arms.

Sol felt a tear beginning to well up in his eye, and wiped it away quickly. Arthur tossed out the badges, and Sol reached for it, fumbled it, and then reached down to pick it up off the ground from where it had fallen. He needed some practice, that was for sure. It had been forever since Karen had seen her older brother fence, and even longer since she had fenced herself. He kept up with the group, running through everything he knew about MMOs in his head.
Yeeeea
Exam One: Slain.
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