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Ok, I'm done! Feel free to look it over. :)

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Ok!~ I'll start working on Adley's version. ^.^ I really like how this is shaping out... also I don't remember the last time I spent so much energy on a CS, haha.

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It's fine, I was just curious if you meant it to be only two weeks vs four. ^.^

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That's actually really good and very cute! Though the way it's written makes it seem like they've only know each other for like a week or two. Was that intended?

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In a sweet and short summary, that sounds about right. ^.-

I'll let you write Aphrodite's version of that month and I'll use that to write Adley's version. ^.^

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I think starting around where Aphrodite has finally realized her feelings for Adley, but still might be struggling with being okay with them... or just not having told Adley, would be fun. Honestly that is something the two have in common, because Adley would feel a bit guarded too, but she's probably already got a bit of a crush on Aphrodite - she just refuses to admit it right now. xD

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Well, I do want some sort of tension to be there... but yeah, with Adley being her first woman, revealing that she fancies women wouldn't really ruin that much. After all, Aphrodite would still have to admit to herself that she likes Adley. Maybe that's why she ends up asking her over to her home? Because she's finally accepted it and wants to spend more time with her?

Though, how often would Aphrodite flirt with Adley? Or would it not be much at all, since she just discovered she likes Adley? And yeah, some rumors of them being lovers would be funny and cute - it would probably cause Adley to blush, but overall dismiss the idea since most women don't like other women. ;P

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Adley being her first woman? That would definitely be interesting! Though do note that Adley (and most my characters by extension of persona) is definitely a submissive woman and... not terribly great at being forward, however she does have the confidence for it, if she feels she's put into a position where she has to be forward. Of course - since this is her first woman, maybe Aphrodite isn't even aware of her dominant side? ^.^

But yeah, meeting every day at the same hour... and even it's raining or whatever, maybe they end up at the inn's mini-tavern instead? Are they some scenarios or situations you want to include into that month? Like... maybe a man hitting on either of them and their reactions, or being back talked or someone being rude.. or maybe even someone hinting at them being lovers- anything?

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I think you had the idea of Aphrodite approaching Adley because there was something that caught her interest. At the moment, her cover is that she's a for-hire consultant/adviser and scholar... so writing things in a notebook isn't that unusual. She's also staying at a Harper-friendly inn (though no one knows that, obviously, lol) and simply waiting for some kind of missive or message to arrive, telling her what she needs to do next - which I'm assuming has to do with the mage somehow, gathering intel most likely.

Adley is a tad bit of a loner, but wouldn't turn someone away for simply sitting down and talking to her. ^.^

A Knight's Scholar

'Naive?' she thought to herself, but it was instantly interrupted by the point of the blade in her face, causing her to yelp slightly in surprise. When he flipped it over however, she gave him a slight glare, sure that he was enjoying this - toying with her. Taking a deep breath, she slipped both of her hands around the hilt and prepared her body for the weight of the sword. She knew well enough that she probably couldn't swing the thing in real combat, so when she took it, she mustered all her balance just to let the tip slowly fall to the wooden floor. Again, she caught his eye before looking at the blade and focusing all of her attention into it.

It took a few moments for the magic to slide down her arms into the blade, swirling around before crawling back up to her mind and instantly the woman relaxed, offering the blade back to the captain. However, even though it seemed it worked, Gianna did not reply right away. Finally, "I may not be one for violence.. but I'm glad you stopped him. He.. had at least a dozen children before you caught him." She sounded genuinely concerned before sighing. "I just hope they're all right. It's a little fuzzy after a thirty days though and most of that was..." She rolled her eyes in the pause. "The children or he was waving it around as if he was actually worth something.. eh, but..."

Gianna became more focused, furrowing her brows slightly, as if trying to remember something that was a long time ago. "Before.. it was.. on a plaque? Above a... fireplace? A lot of happenings.. it seems like almost a farm house of sorts? Lots of farm hands, a couple birthdays, children playing, good food, a harsh time during the cold times..." She shook her head for a moment and sighed. "Then that disgusting man came by.. and there was some blood, mostly fear.. and he took it. I can't really see much else. I can only guess it was some sort of heirloom to that family. The sword traveled maybe a day back this way? It's too foggy to tell much else." Gianna looked at the blade with a new meaning to her expression, as if the trip down memory lane now brought some importance to the random piece of metal, and truly - how could it not?