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Internet is back up, so no worries! Problems with the router it seemed.

Oh yes, I think that'll really help round out these NPCs in the end, from both of our contributions! So carry on, fortuitous soldier!

I'm working on a response now as we speak.
Just letting you all know about a small change: Before I said that the coronation will be included in this round of posts. However I have changed my mind and decided it would be better structured if it started off the next round of posts instead. That way both fox and echo can do their own points of view about the coronation (considering they are both invited) and Andrew and Klomster can post up their battle collab afterwards (or before depending on who finishes first).

Also apologies on the Alicja Mazeltof delay, you can expect it up by the end of this week at the latest. @MacabreFox @Sundered Echo out if curiousity how is your Collab coming along?


In progress, but we've hit a lull in responses.
And post deux!


Dervs!!!! The feels!!! D': why do you do this to me?!

Also, great use of the characters (; I like how you portrayed Sam and even used Eli. I don't mind at all if you do that btw, that's what these NPCs are there for!

My internet is down, so I'm on my phone atm, I'll try and get a post up here soon, if not by tomorrow guaranteed!
Alright so, I'll just wait up on the private conservation between Grace and Cillian.


Yes we're in the process of working on that.
I AIN'T DISREGARDING SHIT PLAYA


U WOT M8?

There we are, the first post of this RP ^.^
The Beginning of the End






Opening Scene

Midnight ~ January 23rd, 1920 – Southwark, London, Mr. Harrison’s Trinkets & Charms

Rain had seeped into every crack and crevice in the south-end of London, filling the morning with heavy fog, mingling with the smoke from the factory stacks, an unnerving ether hung over Southwark as the day continued with its dreary down-pour, turning from a torrent of rain, to a light drizzle. A mix of snow flurries created for an icy condition, as snow from the previous week still lingered on the streets. The skies were thick with grey clouds, and even at night now, an omniscient orange glow from street-lamps gave an indication that night had not yet come. Pacing the floor in her attic room, a woman dressed in a white-button down blouse with a neatly pleated brown plaid skirt, her gaze returned frequently to outside realm that loomed beyond the glass panes. A dimly lit lamp cast sleepy brown hues upon the faded flower wallpaper, agitating her mood further; she felt confined, like a caged animal, one that could no longer tolerate the frequent pacing. Checking the tiny gold clock-face on her wrist one more time, something she had done since the stroke of 11, she sighed in appreciation at the clock hands as they reached 11:35p.m. Lifting a plum-wine all-wool coat off a coat hook affixed to her bedroom door, the young woman slipped into the warm coat, and buttoned the solitary button on the front. She reached for a black knitted scarf, looping it twice around her neck, before she reached for a black cloche, a bell-shaped hat popular with all women. As she studied her reflection in the mirror, slipping the cloche of the crown of her dark brown tresses, a pair of weary, light blue eyes gazed forlornly back at her. This was a process she had done on several occasions. Sleep was hard to find, especially without the aid of her beloved opium. Now, she would not wait a second longer, as she knew the longer she remained behind, the higher the risk of being discovered. Without a second thought, she opened the door to her room, and descended the flight of stairs that led to the outside world.

The click of her heels against the damp pavement were muted from the pooling water, the rain had halted in its downpour, where a light mist now permeated the atmosphere. She kept her chin tucked low into her scarf, the breath from her nose creating a dampness into which she breathed, her hands deeply planted inside the brocade-lined pockets, her fingers curled around the handle of a Smith & Wesson Revolver, the metal felt cold to the touch; if she needed to use the weapon she would. The street-lamps passed by, providing safety from the relative darkness that loomed in the alleyways, as she turned off the main road into a side-street, she could see a man shrouded in mist, leaning against a lamp-post, a cigarette in his mouth as she could see the faint orange light glowing with each inhale. This was Nicholas, the man that provided her what she desired. Last year, in late September, a man attacked her on her way home from work late at night. He held a gun to her temple as he forced himself upon, the smell of rum heavy on his breath. She withheld tears of fright as he fumbled with the garter belt that held up her stockings. The touch of his calloused hands caressing the inner parts of her thigh as he groped in the dark repulsed her. He was too drunk to restrain her arms, assuming that the barrel of the gun pressed to her temple would silence her. Due to his ignorant nature, she could reach for the revolver in the pocket of her summer coat, he never saw it coming. She had tried to dispel his forceful attempt with quiet pleas of mercy, these were cast aside as he insulted her purity, and belched out slurs that would make any sensible man blush were he in the right state of mind. When the man would not yield, she withdrew her own gun, the same one she carried in her pocket now, and pressed the barrel of the gun to where his heart lie beating behind his button-down shirt, pulling the trigger. Blood-splattered and terrified that those living nearby would hear and discover her, she fled into the night, returning to the attic room above her daytime employment. She buried her face into her pillow and cried herself to sleep, astonished she had had enough courage to end a man’s life, she justified the pulling of the trigger for her own safety. For nights to come, still to this day, she woke from fits of haunting dreams, walking down dark alley ways as mysterious shadow hands groped her in the most secretive of places, pulling at her, trying to drag her into the shadows. It wasn’t until she discovered a young man peddling opium on the street corner from her walk home late at night, did she find sleep with ease. However, because of this new-found habit, she went to great lengths to keep the secret from her brother, Samuel. Surely he would be disappointed if he ever discovered her dirty habit. To feed her addiction, she ventured out only at night, revolver in pocket, to retrieve her weekly purchase.

“G’evenin’.” The youth spoke, drawing the cigarette away from his mouth, as his hand reached into his own coat pocket.

“Hello Nicholas, how do you fare this evening?” She asked, her voice barely higher than a whisper, she kept her hands buried in the depths of her pocket to retain warmth.

“Quite well, ma’am. The usual for ye?” He inquired, his eyes flicking from one side to the next, as if searching the misty shadows for coppers, or people that would do them ill.

“Yes.” Her answer was short, without explanation.

“3 pounds then.” He stretched out his hand to receive the paper money, she responded without a word, pressing the money into the palm of his hand, and opening her own palm in return to receive her purchase. Withdrawing a small brown paper sack, he passed it into her palm, she claimed it, stuffing it deep inside her own pocket.

“I’ll be seeing you then.” She said, and turned around on her heel. A heavy click forced her to whirl around and draw out her revolver, her thumb cocking the gun. There, from the alley emerged from the misty shadows, several men in derby hats.

“Not so fast, Miss Addley.” One man said, he started in with his weapon drawn on her, the metal of the barrel glinting in the light of the lamp-post.

“What do you want with me?” She demanded.

“You’re sister to Samuel Addley, he owes a debt to us. You see, two weeks ago, he killed my brother. Do you know who we are?” He took a tentative step towards her, pointing the gun at her chest, she dared not lower her own gun.

“No, so I presume you’re going to tell me before you kill me.” She said daringly, if she were pressed, she wouldn’t hesitate to pull the trigger and empty her 5-rounds into this man. Of course, those were her only bullets.

“We’re the Thorny Adders, and your brother is a Jolly Rougher, he killed my brother Charlie Jepson, and I’m his brother, Rory.” Just as the man lowered his forefinger to squeeze the trigger, a shot from somewhere up high rang out through the air, splattering the man’s brains on the pavement, he toppled to the ground without another sound. The other men that were with him, pointed their weapons up, searching for where the shot came from, they fired blindly, hoping to hit their hidden assailant. This was a bad place to be, this much she knew, someone in the nearby town-houses would have called the coppers by now. Suddenly another shot rang out, dropping another man to the ground, while this wasn’t a kill shot, the man grabbed his arm in anguish, his screams of agony filling the night air. Two more men were struck, while the bullets weren't kill shots like the first, Vera wondered if it was someone from the Roughers that had been tipped off by the movement of the Adders into their territory; the following shots were meant to maim, not kill, as the men took bullets to their outer appendages. Nicholas, her dealer, fled from the scene, leaving the men of the Adders to gather their wounded. In the far off distance, sirens of police cars echoed, approaching nearer as they sped through the empty streets. Not wanting to be caught for having drugs on her, she bolted from the scene of the crime, her heart pounding like a drummer boy on the fields of battle. The thick clouds above opened up and let loose a torrent of cold rain mixed with snow. She made it half way down the block before police cars flew around the corner, blocking the road. Doors flung open, as the coppers spilled out like ants with weapons drawn.

“Halt where you are miss!” The first copper said, his tall rounded hat displaying a row of stars, he must be a captain of sorts, or so she presumed. She held up her hands in defense, high above her head to show she held no weapon. The rest of the coppers descended on the Adders, and rounded up those that had not fled the scene, wounded and able-bodied alike.

He searched her by patting her down, and when he discovered the revolver, and the brown paper sack, her heart sank into the pit of her stomach. She knew there was no way out of this now. “What’s this?” He asked, though he needed no answer as he opened the sack. He pulled out a dark brown brick, the half the size of his palm, wrapped in sack-cloth. Clucking his tongue, he slapped a pair of handcuffs on her wrists without further hesitation, and guided her into the paddy wagon, where the others from the Adders were being boarded.

“You’re being arrested for the possession of an illegal narcotic.”




16:00 Hours January 27th
Holloway Prison, London




Ending Scene

After her arrest, Samuel paid her a visit the following morning once he caught wind of the gunfire and the death of one of the Adders from Matthew. While she briefly explained to him what happened, she left out the part that she was arrested for purchasing opium, of course he knew, but he wouldn’t hear it from her, no, she couldn’t bring herself to admit it. He promised her that he would have her out in a few days. Fortunately for her, being at Holloway, she didn’t have to deal with the problems of having to deal with disgusting men locked away for far more voracious crimes. Holloway Prison was the only prison for women in all of London, there were others on the outside, to be certain, but none within the locality. Her hands shielded the sunlight that spilled down onto her face from the barred window. From down the hallway, she could hear a set of footsteps, the soft soles of leather shoes slapping against the cold stone floor. Disregarding the sound of footsteps believing them not meant for her, she remained reclined upon her cot, her entirety felt numb, numb with shame and disbelief, how she found herself in this situation bewildered her. Had she truly become an addict to the extent that the Adders targeted her through Nicholas for a fault her brother made? Astonishingly, the footsteps came to a stop outside the cell. She bolted upright, and through the iron bars, she could see Sam standing alongside one of the jailers. His face was void of all emotion, as was normal nowadays, ever since the war, Sam had changed to be a different man, one that seemed harder, devoid of happiness or joy. Even now, the look on her brother’s face spelled indifference.

“Miss Addley, you are free to go. Your brother has paid for your bail. On your feet now.” The jailer said as the door slid open. She didn’t need to be told twice to get on her feet, she leapt up, and hurried to Sam, embracing him tightly.
“Sam…” She whispered, overjoyed to see him again. “I’m so sorry. I’m sorry…” She murmured, pressing her nose into the fabric of his shirt, he smelled strongly of cigarettes.

“C’mon, let’s get out of here.” He said, returning the hug, though with not as much warmth. When he released her, he guided her down the hallway to the exit.

Daylight.

Standing on the stairs leading out of the prison, Sam plucked out a cigarette, and with a swipe of a strike-match, he lit the rolled cigarette, inhaling deeply, before casting his sister a long, sideways look. As she stood basking in the sunlight, she reveled in the sensation of the wind tousling her long hair off her shoulders. With wandering eyes, she discovered a car located at bottom of the stairs, parked on the side of the street. She recognized two men leaning against the car as members of the Roughers, Shay Alden, an Irish man, and Eli Lindsey, one of the representatives. They both puffed away on their own cigarettes, watching them with languid gazes.

“You have a lot of explaining to do. Get in the car.” He started down the steps with her following close behind. The air was chilled, as snow still covered the grass, and above in the sky, massive grey clouds lingered on the western horizon, inching closer, hinting that more snow was on the way.

Sam opened the rear passenger door of the car, one that she was vaguely familiar with, a Peugeot. As she slipped inside, Sam closed her door, and came round the other side to join her in the back seat, while Shay hopped into the driver’s seat, with Eli sitting next to him.

“Shay, take us to the Tawdry, eh? Vera deserves a drink, and I certainly need one after this.” The engine kicked over and the car started off down the street. “So… shall we start from the beginning?"

Vera knew it was inevitable, Sam would want to know the exact details of what happened that night, four days ago. With a heavy, forlorn sigh, Vera turned her gaze out the window. “I suppose it’s now or never.” Yet she would have to be careful choosing her words, after all, she didn't feel too comfortable telling her brother with the other two Roughers present.

“I went out for a walk that night. I couldn’t sleep Sam; you know how I am as of late.” She began, unsure of how to proceed, but she ventured on anways, it was best to get it over with in the long run. “I ran into a man that stopped me for a conversation, and before I know, I’m surrounded by men of the Adders. A man by the name of Rory Jepson approached me with his pistol trained on, said that you killed his brother Charlie. Before he had the chance to pull the trigger, someone, I don’t know who, pulled the trigger and shot the man dead. The rest of the Adders were scared shitless, and they turned their weapons up to the windows. I think one of the Roughers had staked out the area, how they knew the Adders were there, I wouldn’t know. Shots rang out as the Adders tried to kill the man that just shot Rory dead. Before I knew it, the coppers were on scene, and that’s how I ended up at Holloway.” She explained rather briefly.

“Vera…” Sam started with an irritated sigh, he knew she was withholding information. “Don’t lie to me. You were arrested for possession of an illegal narcotic.” The two men in the front of the car were quiet as it rumbled along the streets.

Casting her blue eyes on her brother, Vera studied him for a long period of time. Her pride was too strong at this point in time to have the courage to tell him openly about her secret vice. How could he possibly understand? She shrugged without a word, and offered up a weak explanation, “I didn’t have anything on me, Sam. They likely had me arrested knowing my ties to the Roughers.”

“Vera, I said don’t fucking lie to me!” Sam roared, he turned his burst of anger onto the car door, slamming his fist into the panel. Cringing in fear, Vera recoiled from her brother, her eyes wide with terror at his outburst. “They found bloody opium on you! You want to tell me how that happened? Or are you going to tell me another lie?"

“Sam…” She whispered, her hands trembling, limbs shaking in fear. “I… will you let me tell you in private?” His gaze locked onto hers, and while he dearly wanted her to tell him now, he knew that she would tell him in private, that much he knew.

“Fine.” He grunted, annoyed that she had attempted to lie to him. He knew his sister too well, by the tone of her voice, or choice of words. She couldn’t hide anything from him, not even if she wanted too. It was then that Eli piped up, he was a swarthy man, she overheard him talking one night in the Tawdry about his ancestry; apparently the Lindsey brothers were English-Italian descent.

"Shay can you tell how those Adders were taken out, but Tommy is going to want to hear what happened from you in person, so once you and Sam are done with your sibling bonding time, you'll need to talk to Jonny."
<Snipped quote by beyond visions>

I think this is a good decision.


I'll write up a PM right quick then.

I have removed my latest IC post as @beyond visions has pointed out to me that Emmett's next post, that was halfway done, contains actions that would be in unsolveable conflict with the ones described in my post.

I won't post anymore on that scene as it's apparently already planned for it to come to an end and I don't know the post for Emmett that is pending so I can't come up with anything that is not in conflict. Perhaps there will be a retrospective in my next post so there is at least any description of Othen's reactions to what was said to him etc..



You could have Othen simply return to camp? Just a suggestion.
Post for Leif is up, I'll wait to make a post for Sevine, after someone else has posted.
From the shores, to The Courtesan



Leif had little time to recover the thrown axe that he had tossed to Orakh, foolishly forgetting that the poor Orc had received a rather painful bite from the vile ice wraiths that swarmed around the grouped mercenaries. While Orakh dodged an attack from a wraith, he rolled away, and left Dumhuvud as its next victim, he cursed vehemently Orakh, yet Leif had no time to recount his insult, while did he have to be so foul a man? His eyes remained locked upon the ice wraith in front of him, his sword readied for an assault just like the one the others had received. Chilled white vapors rose into the air around the wraith as its serpentine body writhed in the air, its fangs bared. Were it not for the hail, and the evident oncoming of rain mixed with hail, Leif could feel the drop in temperature, in just a few minutes, it could be snowing, making it near impossible to discern the wraiths among snowflakes. Even now, with the rain and hail, he forced his eyes to remain locked on the wriggling wraith.

The wraith sprang forward, uttering a menacing hiss as it lurched towards Leif, had he not been intently focused on his target, he would have suffered a fate similar to Orakh, or that of Dumhuvud. Instead, Leif prepared beforehand, with his fingers curled tightly around the hilt of his broadsword, he swung the blade in an arc, and brought the blade down in a straight movement, striking the wraith dead. It burst with a shower of frost shards and white vapor as it collected on the ground like an ash pile. As he took a step back to assess their situation, Leif found that either the remaining wraiths had retreated, knowing that a group of foes would prove their demise, or were successfully removed. Dropping to one knee, Leif sifted through the pile of ice, and discovered what he sought, two fangs of the ice wraith. While he knew that they held an alchemical quality, Leif didn’t know the recipe, nonetheless, when they returned to Dawnstar, perhaps he could sell them to the alchemist there for a pretty coin.

In his busied search for the fangs, he hadn’t noticed the departure of the Dunmer, yet when he dusted off the knee of his trousers, he saw the elf return with a Khajiit woman, the poor thing appeared frozen, and in desperate need of warmth. He hadn’t bothered bringing a cloak as he knew what falling into icy waters with too many articles of clothing would do. The Dunmer confirmed that the wraiths had disappeared, and pleaded in earnest for them to take the Khajiiti woman aboard immediately, Leif would have provided his consent, however, Dumhuvud sidled up in front of them and denied passage by demanding an explanation of how they found themselves in such a circumstance. Returning his sword to the strappings on his back, Leif stepped out from behind the Cat-Kicker to gain a better view of the two he addressed. The Dunmer wasted no time in revealing who they were, Kattun, a priest of the New Temple at the Shrine of Azura, and R’ihanna, a traveling bard. He explained hastily how her bloat had blown away in the gales, and R’ihanna, proclaimed that a ship off the coast channeled magic into the sea, producing the effects of the storm. Leif quietly contemplated their words, unsure of how to digest their situation. Dumhuvud was the first to voice his opinion of doubt, and suspected that they themselves might be the ones to have caused the disaster encompassing Winterhold. He found that doubtful, as the state they presented themselves appeared one that would not be acquainted with those, if it were people as the Khajiit suggested, would find themselves in a circumstance such as this.

Kattun protested angrily at the Cat-Kicker’s words, explaining how the bard had narrowly escaped from her abusive fiancé, what that had to do with the situation, Leif could not fathom, yet the Dunmer priest revealed that they had practically frozen to death in a cave until the ships were sighted. Orakh stepped between the Cat-Kicker and Kattun, preventing from any casualties occurring, he revealed even more that they had spotted ships of iron-clad hulls, and mistook them for aid until the ship released a volley of ice-shards upon them. Dumhuvud tensed, Leif could see the corded muscles in his neck bulging as the man gritted his teeth. Important to the matter, both Kattun and R’ihanna did not know that those upon the iron-clad ship were actually Kamals, the same ones that had assaulted Windhelm. The wind picked up, sucking the warmth out of Leif’s body, his fingers were numb from the cold, and his body shivered with each increased wind gust. Finally, Dumhuvud seemed satisified that at least the Khajiit woman had nothing to do with the collapse of Winterhold, but he ordered Orakh and Leif to keep an eye on the priest before ushering everyone back on board the ship.

Leif was the first to cross the rickety planks back to the safety of the ship, he rushed off, calling for Bjorn and Halvar to fetch blankets, mead and food. The men had kept an eye on the shore while the fighting endured, they wanted answers about the newcomers, but Leif waved him off with his hands. He whirled about, forgetting about one of the most important matters, he approached Orakh, and with a sheepish raise of his brows, ran a hand through his sandy-brown hair.

“Ah, Orakh, is it? Look, I’m sorry about tossing you that torch there… I forgot you were bitten, I feel like a fool, that I almost set you aflame there… but uh? No hard feelings eh?” He found himself being called away from the orc, when Orvar approached the two.

“Oi. Leif, I heard that ye have some folks that are injured?” Orvar inquired, his eyes went to Orakh, and he cocked a brow, he could see how the orc held the frozen arm close to his body to prevent further injury. The man was older than Leif, in his late forties, for his brown hair was riddled with grey strands, as well as the lengthy beard that reached his chest. While Orvar looked every bit of a traditional Nord, with his square cleft chin, gnarled nose (clearly broken on several occasions from brawls) and thick brow, he had a quiet demeanor about him, one that did not exude the atypical cockiness of Nords. Truth be told, it was the fact that when it came to those in need of his services, such as Restoration, he cast aside all differences to be of help, something that he passed onto Leif.

“Yes, Orakh here was bitten by an ice wraith, do you think you can help him?” Leif asked, patting Orakh on the arm. Orvar whistled with a shake of his head as he grabbed the orc’s injured hand, examining it with one eye closed.

“Aye, that’s a nasty bite there but ye’ll be fine. Come down below deck, outta o’ this wind, and I’ll get ye taken care of.” Said the older man before heading below deck.

Bjorn returned topside, bearing two thick woolen blankets in his arm, while Halvar had remained below deck. Leif spotted the older man, his blond-white hair easy to discern from the greyed wood of The Courtesan. He put his hand in the air and waved at his companion, who made a bee-line for Leif. “Thank you, Bjorn. Does Halvar have ale and food ready below deck?”

“Aye, he said to send them down when their ready, he managed to coax ol’ Jormar to cook something fresh for them, ‘course it don’t take much to convince him.” He said with a wink as he stood alongside Leif with the blankets. He waited for Kattun and R’ihanna to board shortly after, and as soon as they stepped foot on deck, Leif and Bjorn handed them the blankets.

“Rhasha’dar can take a look at you, make sure you’re all right. Orvar is below deck as well, in case you need more help. If they can’t help you, I’ll come take a look. There’s food and ale waiting for you in the galley if you’re hungry.” Leif said pointing to the stairwell that led below deck. In truth, Leif felt responsible for the newcomers to the ship, as he had volunteered The Courtesan for this mission, the least he could do was present the ship and its crew in a good, hospitable light.
Optional.

I'm of the opinion that colored text makes posts look ugly as sin and heavily out of place. Aside from that I think it's merely a crutch that people use when they fail to properly make it known who is saying what. But I understand that some people think making posts colorful adds...something to them. I don't know what, but whatever, I wouldn't mind people being free to format their posts using colored text for dialogue if they want.


I'm with the Friz on this one. I've never really liked using colors to specify which character is talking.

So optional it is.
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