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First of all, great characters! Impressed you got two of them done so quickly. They're both great, but you may want to add or change some things in the skills section. For both Engel and Renart, they don't have many skills - I've mentioned on the OP how many you can have in each section, so feel free to add some. For Renart particularly, I think Speechcraft would come in handy, as it's often learnt hand in hand with mercantile. Also, what with the mention of tools for fletching in his equipment, I'd make that a skill as well. Then he'd be able to make bolts on the road.

For Engel, again, you may want to add some more skills in. It's optional, of course, but it may come in handy. Ah, also I'm wondering if it's realistic for him to be an expert in one-handed without any training, at just the age of 30. Of course, if Renart has given him some tips as they've travelled, that'll sort that problem out easily.

For the both of them, there skills of 1H/2H and Blade/Blunt will be together as one skill, so that opens up another slot for you. When one learns how to wield a one-handed blade for instance, they learn the one-handed technique and the blade technique simultaneously. Therefore, we've made it the same skill. For Renart, it'll be One-Handed Blunt as one skill, and for Engel it'll be One-Handed Blunt and Two-Handed Blunt as separate skills. It's explained more in the first OOC post, take a look if you haven't already.

Anyhoo, once you've looked all that over, you can stick them both in the characters tab! Welcome aboard, Schaft.



@macabrefox
Brona looks awesome! Likewise with schafty, her skills will be paired together - One-Handed Blades. Other than that, I can find no faults with her. Into the character tab she goes!



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I made the changes you recommended! I shall post her shortly to the Characters Tab (:
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Roswell, right? Take some alien pics for me.


D: how did you know?? Wait... @Dervish...

Lol I'll do my best! I've seen plenty of aliens already, but I haven't had the chance to take many pictures. I do have one though, so that counts for something.
@MacabreFox@Peik, intro post is in.


I am going out of town today for business, but I can have a post up Sunday, Monday by the latest.

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YOU KNOW WHAT KINDS OF PEOPLE BREATH HEAVILY?

HERETICS


Just wait till you all meet Brona ;)

@MiddleEarthRoze I'm putting the finishing touches on my CS now, just tidying up her back story.
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Assuming she wants to pose as a Brit, something close to what she actually is works. For example, her disguise can be the representative of a women's volunteer nursing group. Alternatively, Evelyn can say she's the daughter of a rich family, and ended up talking for the family business because her brothers are busy soldiering. You can also combine these and/or some the suggestions below.

-Promoter for female factory workers
-Wealthy socialite
-Performer; she will be singing God Save the Queen at the beginning of the party
-Journalist of a small newspaper/magazine


Perfect, I like these ideas a lot.

So then, Evelyn's alias, and cover story, will be Emily Roberts, the Performer.
Stephan Burkhart will star as "Kasper Denz", a pro-Entente Swiss investor who has high school mates in England.


Any suggestions as to what Evelyn could cover as for her "occupation"?
As the Peugeot rumbled around to the front of the manor, Sam hopped out to open the rear passenger door for them, Vera took one look at Shay upon hearing his words, and decided to keep quiet until they were safe within the car, that way, she knew for certain that no one from the manor could hear them. “We’re doing this because of the money, Shay.” Vera said coldly, it would do them best if they didn’t develop any feelings of empathy towards the von Goethe’s, no matter how nice their manners were to them, even if they were lying straight to their faces.

“We’re poor, and they’re not. 200 pounds is still a lot of money. Besides, I thought you hated Jerrys like them? Imagine if they knew who we were, and we weren’t in this situation Shay. Would they stop and say hello, or would they keep walking as if we were the scum of the earth? They only like us because of our lies, not who we really are.” She turned her face from the window as the vehicle turned onto the snow covered lane, passing through the gate of the manor, and onto the main road that brought them there in the first place.

“It’s a job, Mick. I don’t quite enjoy all of the things I do with the Roughers, mate, but I do them anyways, because the money is good, and it keeps other rotten folk from doing what we have to.” Sam butted in, fumbling in his coat pocket for a carton of smokes, where he stuck one in the corner of his mouth, and then retrieved a lighter. With a swipe of his thumb, a flame leapt up, and an orange glow at the end of his cigarette could be seen in the rear view mirror.

“Where shall I take you both?” Sam offered, trying to change the subject.
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