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Crying howl pierced through the air. It was the sound of a wolf in distress. Something was after him.

The wolf knew the town was near, and even though he had learnt it was best to avoid the places full of humans, he didn't have much choice. The beast, twice as big as the wolf in trouble, was getting closer, hammering the grounds beneath them as they ran. No creature could out-run them, not when their burning eyes were firmly set on their target. The wolf was almost there. Another three leaps and he was gone, vanishing into thin air. The flaming Hound-beast looked baffled. It could still sense the wolf, it could still smell his fear. But there was nothing before them. Just the road, which seemed to continue into distance.

The wolf turned around, and stared at his chaser. They seemed not to see him, even though they were barely few meters apart. It was as if one-way mirror was set between them, allowing only those inside the town to see the evil that was lurking in front of the gates. Then, the wolf gave ear to the voices comming from the nearby street. There were some humans, three or four, one of them having quite familiar sound. Fearless, the wolf silently walked towards them, eyeing them with warying inspection. He only recognized the woman, who spent the last few days in the company of his human mistress, the sorceress. When Alexis spotted his stare, the wolf slightly bowed his head, as if he was confirming something. Before the other could get the chance to get startled by him, the wolf dashed ahead down the street in the search for his human companion.

Shi'larra who was still standing by the window spotted the wolf waiting by the doors. She stepped to open them, so the wolf could enter in. The smell of sulphur reeking from where wolf's fur got in contact with beast's blazing body soon reached her nostrils. Shi'larra frowned disguisted by the stench, and kneed in order to lower herself to her four-legged friend. She quickly examined him for some possible wounds, but found nothing too serious apart from some parts of his fur being burnt.

''I hope you didn't do anything stupid, Ansel,'' she scolded him like a child, even though she knew he couldn't quite understand her. Or did he? She wasn't intirely sure, since the wolf proved to be much smarter than majority of humans she encountered in her life. ''We must go now. The knights should be here already. But if not...'' she paused, afraid to continue her own flow of thought. She knew it was a long shot expecting everyone to be there on time, but she hoped. After all, the hope was all there was truly left for them.

Shi'larra grabbed her leather bag, where she stored various supplies she usually needed to perform her spells and rituals. Since it was the Traveller's den, it wasn't as hard to get hands on some magical herbs and objects as it was in other parts of Obrethon. Therefore, she made sure, she got everything she needed for the road at Kirin Taq. Shi'larra looked around the house already feeling an unease of leaving the place that offered so much protection. Although she was used to living in constant fear of being discovered, hiding from her own kind was much harder than hiding from common people, who could not her own magic against her. After she made sure, she took all of her belongings, she stepped onto the street closing the door behind her. She continued around the corner where her black stallion named Lomion, which meant moonlight prince in the language of the Travellers. Although he was still a bit wild, Shi'larra valued him for his great stamina.

The horse was saddled and ready as if she knew beforehand their stay won't be as long as she had planned for. She mounted him with ease, and guided him to slowly walk in the direction where she last witnessed Alexis disappearing into the shadows. They didn't stride long before Shi'larra caught sight of four human figures waiting on the side of the street. The stamp of horse's hooves draw attention to her presence as she slowly approached them. She greeted the Prince with a silent nod, then gazed at Alexis with a pinch of a worry in her emerald eyes. Beside these two familiar faces, there were two other knights she never had a chance to meet before. ''Knights,'' she greeted them. ''I'm afraid we can't stay here much longer. Where are the others?'' she demanded to know without caring for her apparent lack of interested in properly introducing herself. After all, there was a long road awaiting them, and plenty of time to chat about the things she never liked to chat about.

Meanwhile, Ansel the wolf strode a few houses further, and peeped around the corner to see if the Hellhound creature was still lingering before the magical barrier. His fur instantly bristled. The Hound was waiting for them.
@RPforthatPR Well, once you get involved in more than just one RP, or when you get to GM one (or more) - plus your real life starts to get in your way - you'll probably begin to appreciate the slow paced ones :D
And for the @KnightofTempest. Although, I'm not sure what to do about him. I really like his character, but he hasn't been online for 4 days. I totally get that life gets in the way sometimes, but it still seems a bit unresponsible. I'll probably just give him another two days or so, and if I don't hear from him by then I'll just free up his spot.

@RPforthatPR There will be quite a lot of waiting in this RP, it seems :) But better to move slowly, than not at all. I hope you didn't expect this to be a speed posting kind of RP? 'Cause I'm afraid it's not :)

By the way, I draw another map for our RP. It's a sort of zoom-in of the area our characters are about to travel in the first few chapters. From Kirin Taq to the Myrruan forest. Let me now what you think :) I hope you recognize the cliffs XD I was having a hard time drawing them.


@Incanus Actually, it is now even more minor than I initially thought. It's the notion of Alexis having a small blue gem in the hilt of the longsword. But since @Jinxer didn't edit that, I'm not sure whether he just forgot to, or could the gem be explained in some other way (like it's just an ordinary gem, an accessory, a symbol of their kingdom), I suggest you wait with the editing for now. Sorry for the inconvenience :)
@RPforthatPR We will definitely do that sometime later in the story. I have some hard challenges in store for our characters, so they will be sort of forced to collaborate in such way. For now, the idea is to start easy, and then develop new abilities, figuring out how to combine the two stones to work together, and so on.
Oh, Edgar wouldn't dare to take all five of them. If he was smart enough not to do that when he first got them, I'm sure he'll restrain from doing that now :D
@Brimmlocke Wow you really did an amazing job! Totally worth the wait :D I have no doubt you'll be excellent at playing the prince.

There's just a few things I ask you to edit in your CS:

Firstly, In the part you speak about Edgar having a nightmare about his father's deal with the witch - it wasn't Shi'larra, whom he made a deal with, it was Moriana, also known as the evil Witch of Eddor'had. Shi'larra is my Sorceress, and the one who sent Prince the message of his father's deal in a form of dreams, and who is now patiently waiting for all of you to appear at Kiring Taq (see IC).

Secondly, although I adore what you did with the gemstone related powers (there is a lot of them, and I don't even know what some of them mean :D), I want you to restrict their usage on the person in front of you (only one at the time!). In other words, I don't want Edgar to be cabaple of long distance mind control and stuff. At least not yet, because if it were that easy, he could intrude Evil Witch's mind, and sent her over the cliff, making our problem easily solved :) Also, you don't have to list any more specific powers. You have more than enough of them, actually too many. I would remove the following ones: Cosmic Awareness, Precognition, Psionic Equilibrium Distortion, Psionic Inundation, Psionic Shield, Psychic Constructs, Psychic Navigation, Psychic Shadow, Psychometry, Pushing. Some they seem just too powerfull to start with, and some would need further explanation, because I don't know what exactly they mean. You don't have to delete them, just cross them, and leave them for further reference. Thanks!

Anyway, can't wait to see Prince in the action, though!

Now, you're welcome to post in the IC, and join the party ;)
@clericbeast@Brimmlocke Yeah, how are those CSs going? I'm getting impatiently excited to read them ;)
Anthar twisted softly, not expecting the bottle to be closed so tight. It was. Failing to open it the first time, he tried a second time with more force, finally getting it opened. Stupid, stupid, stupid! Now she will think I'm weak.
Trying to hide his embarrassment, Anthar smiled at Mori. "I think we're missing some cups." He turned around searching the shelves around him for cups. He spotted a few glasses sitting next to some utensils on one of the shelves. He took two and set them down on the billiard table, then he poured from the mysterious drink into both glasses. He put down the bottle and handed one glass to Mori and the other he took for himself.
"Cheers!"

He raised his glass high, then put the glass to his lips and took a sip.
"Wow, that is some strong shit!" He exclaimed, scrunching up his face. It was stronger than that vodka Randal gave him when he turned 21. "Anyway, what is a beautiful woman like you doing alone at a bar in the middle of nowhere?" he asked. He could already feel the alcohol starting to take effect.


Oh, for God's sake, you don't have to pretend. I know you hunters aren't as strong. She thought while observing him struggle with opening that bottle. While he was searching for the cups, Mori listened to the sounds coming from the bar, trying to distinguish what was going on in there. Since there was no sound of screaming, yelling or breaking things, she concluded that everything was alright.

With hidden disgust she took the cup Anthar had given her, and clenched her fingers around it, wondering how could she get herself out of drinking alcohol. She followed Anthar's example, and raised her cup high in the air, only to then lower it again, far from her lips. His particular facial expression was enough proof to her, that she made a right decision not taking a sip. If Jet Fuel did that to him, God knows what would have done to Mori. But since she couldn't just stand there with a full cup in her hands, she had to act quickly. After his question, she took a few steps forward, and landed her hand gently on his chest. She licked her lips while observing his, and then raise her gaze up to his eyes. ''Me? Oh, I just come here to lure good looking men into this room, and then tricking them into drinking that awefully strong shit of a vodka,'' she smiled temptingly, sliding her hands to the sides of his waist as she was slowly to hug him.
No problem. I'm happy to help, and answer your questions. Better to clarify things before they become a problem in the IC ;)
@RPforthatPR I admit you got me confused, since I thought dialoguing is pretty simple :) But if I understood you correctly, you were wondering about how many questions/statements should you put in one post, is that right?
Anyway, the way you ended your post is pretty ok. You could add, question or comment something else, though, giving others more material to respond to, but sincee we are only beginning, and there isn't much to discuss yet, this shall do.

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