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    1. MaxStokes 10 yrs ago

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I finished the rough draft of my new CS.



*edit* - Does anyone have formatting advice?
That sucks, I've been having instability problems with my display driver recently so I feel your pain.
Maxwell: I don't reject the premise of the game, if I did I wouldn't be here. I was merely trying to understand my own reasoning behind having a hard time thinking of character motivations that make sense.

You don't need to feel like making rebuttal. I wasn't trying to make an argument.

Lastly, can you point me to a golden standard that I can take notes from while I work on my new CS?
Nemaisare That's kinda what I meant to be asking. Are those kind of "not the friend of the king, but interests coincide with the group." motivations and personal situations ok for a character to have.

Maxwell I think my tone was a little bad in what I was typing. I had just got of spending a while getting my ass beat in street fighter and it was the second time I had to type up the response due to some annoying error.

What I meant was I can think of only a few potential motivations for the characters.

Anybody who is self serving or got their position at court by climbing the ladder isn't going to be motivated to avenge the king. Unless I guess their whole family was killed. Even then only in specific cases.

Anybody who has a family or other people that need their skills isn't going to be motivated to avenge the king. Unless their whole family was killed.

There can be only so many "I was his best friend/guardian and he was all I had but somehow I wasn't present at his death." Before it starts to become strange.

I've thought of a character that is young man who's father was all he had and was killed. Him and his father being courtiers of some aspect. It seems like this idea will probably work, but the whole thing still bother's me a little.

Revenge solely as a motivator is a strange thing for a group of people in my opinion. Especially on this scale. It's generally considered to be destructive, to the point that those who want revenge generally know that it is destructive but are emotional enough to not care about their own well-being. It just seems to limit the party variety to people pursuing a goal with no real rewards beyond emotional gratification, in a quest that it seems fair to classify as a suicide mission. Which makes it a little difficult to create a character distinct from the others while still maintaining that specific motivation. Throw in the additional qualifier that they need to have known the king personally and you end up with a potentially even less diverse group.

Mostly that paragraph was me trying to work out and put into words why I think I was having trouble coming up with a character who's motivations made sense. It's probably just me making excuses so don't pay it too much mind.

Anyways I didn't mean to dismiss the motivations of people's characters, from what I have seen most people's character's motivations make sense and fit well with their personality and back story. The comment I made about self-destructive and petty were more about potential characters I was thinking of more than anything else.
Maxwell:Yeah for some reason I thought that if the characters interest's coincided with the rest of the group, that is the killing of the invading king, it wouldn't matter much that the char was in a close relationship with the king. I should have read opening better.

As far as the back story goes, i got too into writing it early on then got lazy toward the end so your assessment of it makes perfect sense.

I think from what you said it might be the best idea just to completely scrap the character. Idk I'm trying to think of something interesting. It might be cool to do an actor or a scholar or something. The problem is making the motivation fit. It seems hard to justify a character going full vengeance over the king. Either they had to have really liked the king (if so why weren't they there when he died?), or they are kinda of self-destructive and petty.

I mean even assuming they knew the king but had some other family member/loved one killed in the war/siege (like the court wizard) it only really makes sense for them to seek revenge if they lost virtually all of their family. Otherwise collecting them and trying to get out of dodge or make a new life seemes like a more reasonable plan.

Idk, I'll have to think on it more.
Rough draft of my CS. I think I went too ham and story-telly on the back story so I will probably revise/shorten that later.

Hey all, I ended up spotting this RP on a different site before Maxwell decided to move it over. After a couple of PMs I found my way over here.

Seems like most of the discussion is currently going on here. I wrote up a rough draft for a race profile of the character I was thinking of making. Was wondering what you all thought.

Feel free to ask questions and say if anything doesn't make sense. Hopefully I can hammer this race out quickly so I can start on the CS.



Side note, is there a way to preview a post before it goes up?
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