MelodyNoir

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@Crimmy
I think I can't hold back my opinion about this anymore, even more so after your more recent comment for Kotori to initiate the conversation with Brooklyn.
The way you are currently going (yes, I can see you have only just made a few posts) your character is going to end up in the shadows, ether forgotten or players are just going to find it bothersome to go out of their way to interact with Brooklyn since that is what they are going always going to need to do.
First off, you can play a introverted character without just sitting there and hoping for the next person to say something so you can be a part of the roleplay. I have seen introverted/silent type character roleplayed well and interesting without getting others to feel like they have to drag the character along to be nice, and so they don't feel left out.
I just don´t think it is fair to KoL the way you have started things here in the OOC, you are sort of putting things into their hand if your character is going to get any roleplay, instead of just initiating it yourself. If KoL hadn't been nice enough to go fetch you by the looks of it, Brooklyn would have been left in the forest since she seemed too 'lazy' to move.
It's not very, how do I say, flowy. Wooosh. Super woooooosh. That type of thing.

Though, while I am at it, I think I should also just continue to comment on the things I have noticed.

@Onarax
Ether write at the start who it is from, or switch to third person perspective.
Though that has already been noted, I thought I would state it.

I don't agree you are more limited when writing in third person, and that first person is any better or "go tight on the character's perspective".

@Bleu Chess
Cheeese! My man, my man~
The only thing I can say is lack of posting, and you have already excused yourself. The life of the meat-suit comes first after all. Actually, not to sound like I have favorites, or anything like that... You are actually the one who has impressed me the most when it comes to both writing, and bringing your character across in a really comedic-interesting way.

@KoL and @karamonnom
You two, I can't say anything else other then I love the characters :) They are fun to play with, as well as I like how you two have stuck to a personality trait.

@TrixyTrix
So far I have only seen two post, but I loved the fact that she enjoyed seeing Ian fear her, and I loved how you played with that as well. Look forward to seeing more.

@Rakurai
Pffffft... Don't need to say anything here xD You know what I think~

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Ian found himself blinking his eyes and landing on his backside into the bush that he had made his way out of when he met the sight of the canine eared man. Just who in the world had he stumbled upon? Shaking his head, the brunette awkwardly climbed his way out of the bush before hissing slightly from between his teeth. Not only was a hospital gown perhaps a bit too revealing for a trip to the woods, but also it did not seem to shield him from the branches that caught him. Lucky enough for the boy though, the bush he had fallen into was not a thorny rose bush. Being caught by something like that did not even seem pleasant just imagining it. Green eyes found themselves looking over to the eared stranger that had startled him enough to fall backwards, curiously raising a brow when the other spoke of having seen more. Surely, the three he had bumped into already would have mentioned seeing a wolf eared man with a tail if they had.

Though a sound coming from the direction the wolf had been running from, got Ian to get his attention there; seeing the girl with the crimson red eyes. The way the sun rays and the shadows of the tree hit them almost got Ian to jump willingly back into the bush he, just moments ago, had such trouble getting out of. The sinister look they gave almost got a shiver to run down the boys spine as he took a careful step backwards, while he debated with himself on who looked more terrifying; the man with the cute tail and wolf ears, or the girl with the blood red eyes that had been running after the wolf man.

The green eyes also did not seem to take all that long seeing a glimpse of a blond running from the same direction after the brunette. Just who was chasing who here? Ian asked himself as another step back was taken. Though, when the brunette managed to see the girl better, the sinister look he had seen before slowly vanished as the light from the sun changed it's setting due to the shadows from the trees. The girl looked like she was just a bit younger then himself, and a bit shorter, and Ian most likely had at some point described her as cute if the shiver from the sinister look had just not finished running down his spine. So far, it seemed, the group of people was getting a bit bigger. Though the big question was; who was the wolf man?

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Hmmm, Nommnoms, if you are waiting for me, then it has to be a bit longer. Got class today and my own class to teach later today xD I should be back in about 7 hours-ish.

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Emilie seemed even more all over the place then Ian was, the girl looking up at him all innocent and excited when she asked if she could touch his hair. "Uhmm, sure?" Ian spoke with a smile before moving his hand to pull out the rubber band that kept the long strands close together, allowing his long hair to drape over his shoulders as he placed the band around his wrist. Tilting his head slightly to the side to lower himself enough to ease the access to his hair for Emilie, Ian flashed her a goofy grin. "Go nuts!" The boy said with a chuckle before looking back to the stranger when Kotori began to speak. Staying in the woods at night from the start had never seemed to have been appealing to the brunette. Thinking things over, Ian decided that over thinking things and worrying about the possibility that someone was watching was not going to do anything other then to rile everyone into a panic.

"Perhaps so, Kotori. I think we should just focus on getting out of the forest for now..." Ian let his voice trail out a bit as his gaze went towards the trees, a thought forming in his mind, only to get interrupted as the stranger spoke once more. Remember? The boy blinked his eyes a few times, a poker face clearly did not seem like the brunettes strong point. Now that he thought about it even more, not even just a little memory was there. Almost like if someone had torn out the first few pages of an already written diary to make sure that it was obvious that they were missing. Parting his lips slightly, Ian settled with starting his answer with just shaking his head.

"The only thing I remember is my name..." Ian began as he collected the words. "First thing was just the blue sky, second thing that sank in was the pain, almost like I had been hit by a truck. And lastly? I stood up with the intention of finding my way home, only to realize I had no idea where that could possibly be. Though since you are asking that question, I am going to go on my hunch here and say that you don't remember anything ether?" It was clear, even though his last sentence hadn't really been a question, that the brunette was hoping that the stranger would tell him if he was wrong or not with his assumption. Looking at Emilie, Ian found himself raising his hand on top of her head, giving it a light pat on the head, whether she was playing with his hair or not. Were Emilie and Kotori on the same boat as well?

The sound of rattling leaves in the not so far distance got the boy to tense up, bringing Emilie almost protectively to his chest as his as his gaze went to the sound. Slowly, almost reluctantly, Ian let go of Emilie, giving her one more pat on the head before taking a few steps to the sound. "Uhm..." Ian began, wanting to protect his new 'friends' from any possibly harm. "I'll be back... Just stay here." With a rather awkward grin and a wave before he started to run towards where he had heard the sound. Though, perhaps running towards something possibly predatory in a hospital gown was not going to seem intimidating at all... It was then when it hit him, just what was he going to do if the thing he was closing in on actually was the predatory type? Shaking his head, Ian was going to need to think about that once the situation presented itself, for now? What mattered was that Kotori, Emilie and the new guy he hadn't gotten he name of were safe.

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@Onarax No need to apologize :) An hour should be fine, I have time to wait tonight so I should manage to write up a post before heading off to bed. Silly time zones~

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I think I might wait for Onarax to post so they don't get left out and they still need to respond to what happened.

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Well, I'll get started on my post in about an hour or so. Glad to see another person joining in, in the IC :)

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@KoL The reason why I mentioned it is because they rounded it up to 1 and not the nearest 2 :P

Well, I have written up my post :)

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Welcome on board Trixy! Glad to see your character sheet :) I am going to add though that you have your feet wrong. 158 cm is 5'2".
Cake knows since he is a short a** himself

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Ian couldn't help but to find himself tilting his head to the girls little riddle of a wingless bird, curiously trying to think about how would be the best way to approach the situation the trio were in. So far it seems that the two he had come across were just as at loss as he was. Surely, there must someone be around who knew something? At least what forest they were in. Not that the brunette knew all that much about the names of places, but at least a name would be nice none the less. Tapping his finger to his lips, the boy found himself humming slightly before giving the new girl the same bright smile he had given Emilie before.

“Kotori Tsubasa, what a lovely name. It´s a pleasure to meet you, and you as well, Emilie.” Ian spoke, almost in a humming like tune before looking up to the sky. “I suppose, since we all seem to be terribly lost in this place, it wouldn't be a bad idea for us to stick together and see if we can't find ether a way out, or someone who might know the way.” With a smile, the green eyed gaze lowered once more to the two girls that were there, before he took a few more steps, carefully trying not to leave the two behind by just walking off on his own. At least there was someone there now, and something about the girls being just as lost as he was, got a rather familiar feeling to stir in his chest; yet at the same time a feeling Ian couldn't place a name on.

It didn't seem long for the brunette to absent minded humming a tune to himself as they walked, the green eyes occasionally looking to the two, almost as if to make sure that they were indeed still there. A soft smile found its way to the boys lips when he heard Emilie start a conversation with Kotori as he slowed down his pace just a bit so he could be a part of the conversation as well. Though, it did not seem to take long for the forth to join in. Turning to face the newcomer, Ian addressed the stranger with a smile and returning the wave with one of his own.

"Hey there! I sill say, we are just as lost as you are." Ian spoke with a lopsided smile as he rubbed the back of his neck, letting out a slight little chuckle. "I'm Ian, the blond here is Emilie" the brunette began, gesturing to himself with a hand to his chest, before gesturing to Emilie. "And her name is Kotori" Ian finished, gesturing to the dark haired girl as well, before making his way towards the new guy. "We are sort of hoping to find someone who might know where we are, or manage to find away out of the forest. "You are welcome to join us if you'd like. Perhaps we'd work better as a group." With a bright smile, Ian extended out his hand for the other to take and if the stranger dared to take it, Ian was not going to be able to hold back his excitement and give the hand a 'few', happy shakes.