Stryder said
I'm just saying honey, if you were in the army, you'd see it my way too. And if you were the president, I'd listen cause I had too xD
I know sweetie, but no matter how big a part your character is of you, it is still just a character. Try to keep personal feelings out of it, cause let's be honest; in real life you'd never get to experience Hell as a fallen soldier, only to meet Satan's heir to the throne and pretend she's your little sister, right?
Or maybe you can, you never know, but at this point you CAN'T know so you base your character on a set personality and the general plan you have for him.
What I'm asking is to place yourself into your character more, instead of basing his responses on your own feelings.
You're character finds himself in hell, is put against creepy things and still holds true to the army? Every normal guy would have been like "fuck the army, army ain't gonna do shit for me now" and try to rely more on the people he met than hold onto past life stuff, you know?
A bit of rambling from my part, sorry xD It's really early, my mind can't find a proper way to explain what I mean
Oh and reply on whatsapp and pm, or I'll get pissed ;3