mito

The Masque of the Dragon || Fantasy Dragons hiding among Humans

I'm not sure what the policy on dropping in at a later point is like, but I'm kind of in a sluggish vibe so id like to make use of that in case you want to start the rp before I'm done with my cs.

The Masque of the Dragon || Fantasy Dragons hiding among Humans

Sorry about not being around, unexpected life stuff came up.

@WindsOfFate
Sorry about you missing the cutoff. I'll keep you in mind if any spots open up in the future.

@mito
While you have some interesting ideas, right now your character sheet is hard to read. If you could clean it up with proper sentences and paragraphs, and clarify some of the descriptions and back story it would be more likely to be accepted.

@Dead Cruiser @Nakushita @King of Soul
Are you guys still interested in participating. If not can you post here to let me know.

@Martian

Hmm i should definetly proof read it and fix some basic mistakes, but to be honest i do struggle a bit with the sentences an paragraph's. I think im going to do some research.
Beside that i would apreciate any feedback.

The Masque of the Dragon || Fantasy Dragons hiding among Humans

Here's my new cs.

Nari

dragon appearance

human appearance

Name: Nari
Age: 76
Gender: Female

Dragon appearance:
While in dragon form she has a 49 ft wingspan, is 65 ft in length and 18 ft in height.
She has a rigid face largely made up of bone, with large horns on the skull and large spikes covering the vertebrae. Together they form good protection to the spine.
she has a powerful jaw which is prominently used to snap bone and grab targets.
her teeth are slightly blunt while the incisor teeth are relatively small.

the arms are fitted with additional spikes on the elbows while the claws feature sharp talons.
The hind legs are fitted with similar talons.
On the tail end more spikes can be seen. they can give a tail-whip a concentrated force of impact, enabling them to cut materials when enough force is applied.
The body is overall muscular, sturdy and covered with tough scales. Its shape is rather generic, with a slightly increased body length because of the long tail.
Her small wingspan length, limits her flying capabilities and in order to compensate, the muscles are mostly made up of slow twitch muscle fibers, increasing total flight distance while further decreasing top speed and mobility including climb speed.

The joints and body structure do not allow for stationary flight motion.

human appearance:
Her human appearance somewhat reflects her current age conversed into human standards, looking right on the edge of maturity.
She's 5 ft tall and weighs 110 lbs.
She Has Dull reddish hair and ussually wears yellow or green commoner outfits.

personality traits
Shy, timid, reserved, polite, aloof, a bit deadpan.

description:
Her upbringing used to be strict and disciplined but when her parents got to know her, she was gradually given freewill.
She let smaller dragons boss her around and acted shy and docile.
She rarely opposed anyone and usually responded subjective toward friends and elders.
Along the few friends she had, she was reserved and occasionally responded with deadpan jokes and reactions.

When she got older she lived an uneventful ordinary live in the village, supporting her kind.
As her fellow dragons occasionally went out for business regarding tasks given by the masque, her family members sometimes went out as well.
She started to keep up with the news and what was going on around her living place, as she developed her sense duty for the wellbeing of dragons around the province.

Magic/abilities:
In dragon form she's able to spew fire, and has increased vitality and strength.
she's of relatively large size and has good mobility on land but limited mobility in mid-air.

Beside this she has the ability of Power bestowal and sharing.
The ability to transfer her strength and vitality with multiple individuals including other beings that aren´t dragons.
All power shared with others gets transferred and removed from the dragon.
Initial usage costs a lot of energy and time and the same applies when withdrawing the power that was initially lend out.

In human form her abilities manifest by increasing strength and vitality to a fraction of her dragon form. Enabling her to break metal and send humans flying, while swords have trouble slicing through flesh and are unable to sever bone.

History:
Nari was born in a village in the northwest of the province of Kaelis.
The village of Sunderburg lay at the edge of the large forests that covered most of the province.
in the north, large mountains and plains could be spotted behind the several hilltops close by.
The surroundings were a mixture of groves, rocky hills and creeks with a few small lakes as well.
There were orchards and many pastures spread out in the area while the closest town lay far to the south east.
The weather and climate were considered temperate with snowfall during the winters and plenty of green during the summer.

To the north and west were; hard to traverse hills and rocky terrain covered with undergrowth.
the village lay nearby the convergence point of the province kaelis and the other 2 nations, the empire of huldern and the kingdom of nihn.
the area was rather secluded and offered plenty of open space for dragons to stretch wings and to hunt for wildlife like wild goats and boars.

In this region the dragons lived in human form as well as in their natural form.
To adapt to what future society was appearing to look like all dragons in the clan were told to start living like humans while encouraging them to feed and stay fit in dragon forms.
The village had traders who set out to other nations to collect tools and cultural knowledge in order to learn from it and integrate it into their own.

Nari's breed was one of the prominent species in the village.
The breed now united under a clan and was known to be fierce and vigorous. They were involved in plenty of conflicts between other dragon species in the past. Most of which were territorial disputes.
The breed was especially differentiated for their high coherency. With their ability to empower their comrades with strength and vigor, They offered incredibly tough fighters able to withstand large amounts of blows.

As the dragons had to withdraw from their old homes and started working together during the great departure, their leading figures decided on settling the large border area in the north west while serving the masque in defending their territory when force was ever required.

Nari grew up in this area and didn’t turn out as one of the smaller ones either. In contrast she acted in no way as expected of her appearance.
Back from when she was young and even until later on she always preferred to let others slay her prey, she disliked having a squirming screeching animal in her jaws and couldn’t bring herself to kill anything, despite her imposing appearance.
She was a real oddball out and never took over her group's fighting spirit in spite of peer pressure.
However she was still loyal and greatly appreciated for her sense of responsibility and willingness to help her kind.

Addressing her inate abilities while in human form, she has not managed to gain them yet.
This will likely change in the near future.

Although most of her species live in sunderburg. Not all of them do.
Nari is currently in whistle hill to visit relatives who live there.

The Masque of the Dragon || Fantasy Dragons hiding among Humans

this is what i got so far.
i still have to work on history and personality.

Nari

dragon appearance

human appearance

Name: Nari
Age: 71
Gender: Female

Dragon appearance:
While in dragon form she has a 49 ft wingspan, is 65 ft in length and 18 ft in height.
She has a rigid face largely made up of bone, with large horns on the skull and large spikes covering the vertebrae. Together they form good protection to the spine.
she has a powerful jaw which is prominently used to snap bone and grab targets.
her teeth are slightly blunt while the incisor teeth are relatively small.

the arms are fitted with additional spikes on the elbows while the claws feature sharp talons.
The hind legs are fitted with similar talons.
On the tail end more spikes can be seen. they can give a tail-whip a concentrated force of impact, enabling them to cut materials when enough force is applied.
The body is overall muscular, sturdy and covered with tough scales. Its shape is rather generic, with a slightly increased body length because of the long tail.
Her small wingspan length, limits her flying capabilities and in order to compensate, the muscles are mostly made up of slow twitch muscle fibers, increasing total flight distance while further decreasing top speed and mobility including climb speed.

The joints and body structure do not allow for stationary flight motion.

human appearance:
her human appearance somewhat reflects her current age conversed into human standards, looking just a moments notice away from maturity.

personality traits
Shy, timid, reserved, polite, aloof, a bit deadpan.
description (wip)

Magic/abilities:
In dragon form she's able to spew fire, and has increased vitality and strength.
she's of relatively large size and has good mobility on land but limited mobility in mid-air.

Beside this she has the ability of Power bestowal and sharing.
The ability to transfer her strength and vitality with multiple individuals including other beings that aren´t dragons.
All power shared with others gets transferred and removed from the dragon.
Initial usage costs a lot of energy and time and the same applies when withdrawing the power that was initially lend out.

In human form her abilities manifest by increasing strength and vitality to a fraction of her dragon form. Enabling her to break metal and send humans flying, while swords have trouble slicing through flesh and are unable to sever bone.

History:
the province of Kaelis (wip)

The Masque of the Dragon || Fantasy Dragons hiding among Humans

so i was scavenging the internet for good dragon art this one time, and maybe this will safe anyone some time.
drive.google.com/drive/folders/1_2KH0…
(ps:the second* image from the left* is taken by me )

The Masque of the Dragon || Fantasy Dragons hiding among Humans

Maaan, im so excited for this.
Maybe i can use my cs that i wrote for another rp.

The Masque of the Dragon || Fantasy Dragons hiding among Humans

Boy im in!

Dragonier (Medieval Fantasy, Dragon Riders, Magic, War)

Gotta say im pretty bummed to hear that the dragons arent able to communicate and that they are as intelligent as regular tameable animals.
is it possible to make a dragon with an exception to that rule? A possible reason for that, it being a diffrent species of dragon for example?

It would be cool if we could either pick a rider or a dragon as a character.

Akasha Agency

Nice to hear, yea i was planning on it to be a very generic type of dragon with only fire and with alot of strength and vitality that normaly isnt able to use magic as a penalty for balancing, but true, other ways can also be thought up to still allow arts.
Ill remove the droconic element thing then.

Akasha Agency

i already had a look at the framework you had in mind, but its really in an early phase and i first wanted to check if the overall specifications of the character were acceptable. ill make it look nice and tidy later. And ill keep this feedback in mind.

i guess I'm going with rank 3 because of the brute natural power and no skill.

I'm not quite sure how i can include having no control of the dragon form because its her true form and she should be having more control than while in human form.
i can take away the fighting instinct, and have her need to adjust to moving in dragon form.
as well as add a penalty because her dragon form was always dormant. making it so, that it became stiff, weak, malnourished and still small, having to build up strength.

maybe having an initial growth spurt of about 9 months. where she will change from: 33 percent in size and 20 percent in abilities and parameters, into the described size and power of the character sheet. with fire breathing and resistances starting from zero.

You've specified that she's human in default so that means she needs to transform into dragon form before she can actually do anything right? I'll need to know the details of the transformation as well. I need to know stuff like is there a time limit in dragon form? Is there a condition? It's also probably a good idea to make that a separate ability.

she starts out having no dragon benefits while in human form but later develop them as she gets stronger in dragon form.
i would like to go with: because her true form is a dragon, there's no time limit for dragon form, if anything, being human should take more effort and should cost more energy.(i guess explaining why her dragon form is malnourished) i can make her a bunch weaker in human form as well i guess.
maybe a 4 second transformation delay to turn dragon, and taking 20 seconds to turn human.

Draconic Element Manipulation is never gonna come up. There's not going to be any other dragons unless something funky is happening or you want them to and I approve so probably don't bother with that one.

a way to increase power beyond the natural specifications, and a way to still unlock the use of arts and other abilities, allowing for character development. and yea, its just adding some options for the future, if there's ever a need to get stronger.

The part in power bestowal where it says 'self sustenance linked to the dragon', I don't know what that means. Firstly are self sustenance and perpetual nourishment supposed to be different? I'm assuming the Linked to the Dragon part applies to all of the abilities and not just the self sustenance part.

yes all the abilities gifted by bestowal are linked in aptitude with the dragon.
and ill just go with the two nourishment abilities being the same thing.

Also what do you mean she grows when she eats in dragon form in the Consistent growth and Adaptive development section? Is it if she eats anything? Does she have to eat something specific?

inherently she never completely stops growing if she keeps eating, and all that is required to get stronger is eating a proportionate amount of sheep cattle or other types of meat sources. shell gain power just because of growing in size and cant obtain new abilities.

ill just remove the adaptive development thing aswell.