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Got my Archer all written up. Will smooth this out if it gets accepted.
I'm never early on these things, so here's to hoping I don't take too long making this and all the spots are taken. :p

Gonna update this as soon as its done.




Guillame considered acting scared for a moment. He had served in the army: he had known many mages, and he knew that you couldn't turn someone into a newt. At least, he was pretty sure. Kind of sure. Maybe not so sure. It's probably all in good fun anyway, right?

Not that the threat was really necessary. For a free horse and enough supplies to make it to the border, Guillame was more than willing to deliver a letter. Really, he was would have been willing to do more for less, but this was war, he supposed. It's not as though there's an excess of messengers around, and even fewer who could make it to Ylisse without much incident. That's the sort of thing you would pay high price for.

Slight issue, though. He couldn't ride a horse. Like most common folk, he'd never really needed to. His family didn't move around much, and on the rare occasions when they did, walking was always the cheaper option. As far as he knew, the horse could just end up bucking him around and then running off. Or maybe he'd end up dead with a hoof-print on his forehead.

Returning from his thoughts, Guillame realized that, both literally and figuratively, he was looking the gift horse in the mouth. Taking the reigns from the young woman, he nodded and smiled politely. It'd be a challenge. And besides, horse riding could a be a useful skill to have under his belt. "C'est déjà fait," he said, smoothly. "It is done already. Show me the best road, and I will take it."
Hey, I'll get something up tonight.
@BlazeGamma

Azama was a real train wreck, because they didn't bother to localize him.

He's one of the best Buddhist character in fiction, tbh, and if you aren't schooled in Buddhist philosophy, then he just seems like a total asshole. Buddhist philosophy maintains that suffering is a necessary facet of desire. Thus, the only way to prevent suffering is to not desire anything: love, friendship, status, etc.

Presumably, a Japanese audience already has an education background on Buddhist tenets, so, culturally, Azama is less of an asshole, and more of a monk. Americans/Europeans aren't schooled in the intricacies of Eastern philosophy, so he just seems like a dick.
I've started calling Fates "Jumping in Front of the Protagonist Simulator 2016".

Mechanically, I love Fates, but the story really leaves a lot to be desired.
Guillame couldn't help but feel that there was something... off about the young man. And by something, he meant everything. He looked like a genuine madman. Still, it was to early to pass any real judgment: books and covers and all that. Still, he had briefly considered giving a fake name, which was rather silly: there were more than a few Guillames in the world; it's not as though you could figure much out from a given name. Still, he did deliberate over which name to give. Guillame knew that his name was often written as "William" in Ylisse, but that wasn't typically how he said it. Maybe a nickname? His comrades had called him Guillame la Bâtard after somebody let the next-of-kin forms slip. But that hardly seemed pertinent to the situation at hand.

He shook the younger man's hand."I call myself Guillame. It is good to know you, Sules," He said, diplomatically. "I am indeed headed towards the border, as you presume. I am a..." he hesitated. "A wanderer, if you will. Ylisse it not my destination in particular. Simply, it is there, and it is there that I am going. Technically, there were no lies here, save those made in omission. He hardly knew this boy: it would be a particular illogic to tell him everything.

And besides, thought Guillame, what would this stranger care for a traveller like me?
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I dunno. It doesn't feel like he fits the setting. Dyed hair? In medieval fantasy? I don't think they do stuff like that.

I also don't understand how you could add fire damage to a thunder or wind spell.


I can't speak to how well the character fits, that's not my job, but Venetian nobles used to dye their hair.

Red hair dye could be made using Wood Ash and Vinegar. It was super gross, but the Greeks did it.
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