Neo Is Delight

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The Night Terror of Emulis (Dark Fantasy RP)

@ManoftheNorth

You really shouldn't leave the roleplay because someone had a different view of things than you. o.o

I think your character is a lovely concept, and I for one would love to see you stay and see it in action :D

The Night Terror of Emulis (Dark Fantasy RP)

As it goes, I am a traditional Rper, growing up with the oldest forms of D&D and Fantasy lore.

The first picture you have provided is a Neko. The second is both a Beastmen/Beastkin to myself. As an older fella and from a more traditional standpoint, Beastmen/Kin are the same thing, with the difference(s) being the word a particular person might use; or the particular custom universe a person might make in which Beastmen and Beastkin are different. As it goes, this Rp is designed and stated as being Witcher and Dark Fantasy inspired, which leads me to believe it is also more traditionally inspired by the older stuff, such as D&D.

@ManoftheNorth

I can see how that might be, but the first image is not a neko. A neko is a cat, as in, a household critter. A nekomimi, is likely what you are thinking of, but the first image does not technically qualify for that either, as it is a snow leopard, and not your common household pet, which is what nekomimi's tend to be. But, as said, I wasn't trying to force my beliefs upon you, and as I understand your view, I shall edit my character concept a tad bit, so as not to cause conflicts with yours. :3

The Night Terror of Emulis (Dark Fantasy RP)

@ManoftheNorth
If I could lend an opinion, your character seems more beastkin than beastmen. Beastmen tend to be depicted more as, humans with animal traits and behavior, where as beastkin are more the anthropomorphic animal type, which seems to be what you were going for.

this is an example of a beastmen

This is an example of a beastkin(though, your image is also an example)

Unless when you meant beastman, you actually meant something like beastskin instead? I am not trying to force anyone to accept my opinion or what I have to say, but I was going to make a Beast woman using the first imaged example, and I am trying not to create inconsistencies. Though, I'm sure I could say she's a hybrid or something. ^.^"

The Night Terror of Emulis (Dark Fantasy RP)

@Whiskey Business
You're welcome. owo

May I suggest adding a Skills section to the sheet? That kind of be important to know.

@AngelofOctober

I would also suggest something along the lines of racial abilities being added. Different races are drastically different, and have certain natural talents to show this...otherwise it comes off as all these fantastical races being just normal humans, with fantasy race appearances. :3

The Night Terror of Emulis (Dark Fantasy RP)

@Whiskey Business
I was looking over your character, for a general idea of what you were looking for in the sheets, and I noticed your character's equipment, particularly their weapons, seem to be going off the weapons in the image.
But, there's a small thing I noticed with that.
This is what you have:
Long sword, Short sword, Daggers x 2

But, that's not actually what's in the image.
You see, the blade in his right hand, is a short sword, while the one in his left is a dagger. The two sheathed blades, are just average knives. I know how it might seem confusing, since daggers are often portrayed as normal knives, but they are not. They are larger than knives, but shorter than swords. Often used in tandem with a short sword.

An easy way to tell, is a long sword is a two handed weapon. One would have to be either untrained, or extremely foolish to use it as a one handed, much less dual wield with one.

I'm not trying to be judgy or anything, just helpful, sorry if it comes off as bitchy or anything ^.^"

The Night Terror of Emulis (Dark Fantasy RP)

*peeks in and looks around*
I was sent here by Angel. Totally not stalking them. I am intrigued, and shall start working on a character.

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@queentze

I've notices something reading Tut's history, and I know you were talking to Angel in private about it, but I know he wouldn't have accepted had he noticed what I have.

the body Tutan inhabited was immortal but he would remain an immortal child until his mother died, and she would only die if the baby was harmed
This particular statement has huge issues. Allow me to be more specific.

If the body Tutan inhabited was immortal then that means he can't be harmed.
Seems pretty flawed right off the bat
until his mother died
This seems like a redeeming quality.
until
and she would only die if the baby was harmed

If the baby is immortal it can't be harmed, the clause being he loses the immortality if his mother dies, which seems broken, but in a non broken way.
The issue, being, that his mother can't die, unless he's harmed. How can he be harmed if he's immortal? He can't be. Which means, she too, is immortal.

Now, excusing the fact that this was hidden in the history, instead of being listed in the powers as well, it's too OP of an ability for any one character. Even the space entity that is Umbra can be injured and/or killed. And no, the obsidian thing doesn't count in my eyes, because kryptonite weaknesses are nothing more than cop-outs. Not everyone will have access to it, in fact, it's likely nobody will.

Edit: It's been brought to attention that there's another flaw.

Egress: When No Name is given this name she becomes the avatar of spatial movement for her master. She embodies the power to open and close portals to anywhere she has recently seen, thy details for her portals must be accurate or else she might end up in another dimension no matter how close it is to her original. Her power works best when she has something Specific to call upon, maybe a ditch n the road or a monument that has odd color, details help keep her in this dimensions and help her go to the correct place. In order to use this ability she has to sacrifice on of her limbs to make the portals, what is left over is a useless ghostly arm, leg, head, torso, this is Tutan's term.

With the limit stated, there's two issues. One directly correlated to what I had pointed out: If she's immortal because the child is, she can't lose any limbs, as that would cause a paradox. Second, it's stated she has to sacrifice a limb, and then in the examples you've included her head and torso, neither of which are limbs, only legs/arms have that classification, so she would only get to use it four times, and if she did so even once, and it has the limit stated, the paradox would cause neither of them to be immortal, as the history claims them to be.

Your Avatar Has A Kid With The Avatar Above

A combination of a bunny girl and a neko? Clearly, a child so adorable, it will bring the world to it's knees.

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