Nytefall

Before RvB there was project freelancer

@The1Rolling1Boy I think and no offense intended that, that might be a good idea. Casual isn't as hardcore as advanced but still requires good spelling and grammar.

Supernatural Mansion (Dead)

@MikkishtheLeprechaun @alisdragon911
Cain explored the house further. The architecture was superb and as he explored the mansion he heard the distant sound of fighting.

Hunger smiled inwardly at the idea of fighting someone.

Cain shook away Hunger as he approached the noise coming across a battle scene out of some kind movie. "What in the world is going on here?!"

Two people were tussling in front of him. "Need help?"

Supernatural Mansion (Dead)

I still don't know whats going on so I can get involved. Can someone fill me in please?

Before RvB there was project freelancer

@ShatteredZeroxk no worries keep me in the loop

Supernatural Mansion (Dead)

Cain looked at the outside of the mansion, than at the letter he had in his hand. "Room 23? No idea where that is. But I guess i'm in the right place".

Picking up his duffel bag, which contained his only possession. He slung it over his shoulder and headed into the mansion. It was big on the inside a lot bigger than on looking at it from the outside.

"Some real time lord stuff going on here". He muttered to himself.

Finding his room after a lot of trial and error he dumped his stuff in the room. After grabbing a snack to stem his cravings he left the confides of his room to explore the mansion and the ground.

Supernatural Mansion (Dead)

Well i'm entering the fray now. What's happening?

Before RvB there was project freelancer

@The1Rolling1Boy The problem I have is that your back story doesn't make sense. Mainly down to wording and what not. I've made some changes to it but there are parts i don't understand.

changes

Chinoki never knew much of anything beyond a laboratory or a military base. So one day in her late teenage years she snuck off the base and into the 'real world'. She was amazed at what she was seeing. As she was exploring she came across a ship that had crashed in a clearing. Someone had left the door open and wanting to explore the ship, she snuck in.

She looked around the ship curiously, it seemed alien to her but all she had known was the inside of the base. So seeing something like a ship out in the open was not a common occurrence.

As she was exploring the ship she found what she thought was someone's body. But after checking it out she discovered it was only an old combat suit. One that she did not recognise from the base she had snuck out of.

Being the Teenager she was she ended up sneaking out whenever she got the chance to. Exploring the ship with each new visit. She later learned through her parents and other people in the base how to go into the ships' databases. Learning through her new found skills about the original owner's information.

Part I don't understand

One day she ended falling asleep at the control panel while reading through PDAs but she ended up getting caught by someone but since her parents died the month before in an accident in the laboratory she couldn't get turned into them instead got turned into the person in charge of the base who later on becomes her trainer and teaches her how to actually fly a ship like the one she found.

Once she was old enough to join the military she did so. With the help of friends who were previous members once she got her suit, she got multiple gifts like add-ons and mods for it, one of her favourite ones is an energy sword that she got from a family friend who would visit her multiple times a day has much has they could after her parents died.

Before RvB there was project freelancer

@The1Rolling1Boy look up hemingway or use google doc which has spell check

Before RvB there was project freelancer

@Argetlam350 sick and sick

Before RvB there was project freelancer

@Argetlam350@LetMeDoStuff If you guys can add the AI bonuses to your cs