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@sassy1085
Your spells need worked on, a spell tends to do a specific action not vague multiple act both of your spells are fairly vague. Your water flat out sounds like an ability instead of a spell. then they need names and a simple chant and you'll be accepted, so we can get started. worry about the rest later.

Soul Eater: Dance Of Devils

It'll be interesting to see who will be the ones to be accepted, and who will be reserved. Thanks to a random thought I started to write a little story lol, wrote the prologue and three chapters in no time flat. No idea if it'll go well, or if I'll even get to finishing it. It's a simple Reincarnation story, about someone who becomes a dungeon master.

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@Empress
Though I would prefer longer chants (I did mention earlier for them to be around 3 words at least), accepted.

@sassy1085
You have Talent Light and Water yet have Ice and Water 'abilities' for your spells. Spells follow a 'programed action' they aren't freely manipulated, the program can be changed to get new spells but once cast the spell sticks to the program. look at the accepted people's spells to help you out there if needed, and ask questions if anything you are confused on.

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@sassy1085 @Empress @Rune_Alchemist @Zahir
so only 4 of the 6 remain.. can't be helped I guess. I know Windel has withdrawn, they sent me a PM stating so, while idk anything with Lyra, and only two have their characters ready.

@sassy1085
Try to finish your first draft sometime soon please sassy.

@Empress
You only really need is some kind of chant for each spell.

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@Zahir
I live in the country so kind of no one around me let alone any internet really lol.

@TheWindel @Zahir @Empress @sassy1085 @XxLyraxX @Rune_Alchemist
Sound off! see who is still here and wish to participate.

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@Zahir
It's already back up when I made that post man lol, only way to make good posts is with my computers since my phone doesn't like it when I'm sitting on something for so long, it tends to go 'NO' and either just kicks me off, or crashes the app in a slow process, and where is everyone :(.

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@Zahir @TheWindel @Empress @sassy1085 @XxLyraxX @Rune_Alchemist
I'm Back everyone, internet is back up and running, turns out it was the cable that was the problem -_- it was chewed on by our dogs so we had to get it replaced, then I had to do things on the modem because of stuff I had to do when troubleshooting it beforehand with the people on the phone.

@Zahir
They are actual spells now so that is good, accepted.

@Empress
Get spell names and small chants for each spells and you'll be accepted, I will state for future spells atlest in terms of conjuration, they can't be a 'summon anything that fits in this category'. In other words like your 'Summon any small bronze object' Summoning spells for both conjuration and summoning tend to target one thing at a time. There are 'Group Summoning' which summons multiple things at a time but they fit in a specific way.
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P.S. to everyone, since we have exactly only 6 people really I will end up accepting everyone, simply as soon as their CS' fit the roleplay.

Soul Eater: Dance Of Devils

@DearTrickster
lol frankly I wouldn't really know where to begin most of the time, since I end up just picking songs I like instead of ones that fix the character lol.

P.s. I'm back! internet got fixed up sooner than anticipated, didn't need the repair guy after all. we found out the problem was our outside cable was chewed on by our dogs so it didn't want to send a signal, replaced it and then had to do some stuff digitally in the modem and boom bish bosh internet back online.

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Note to my roleplayers, won't be back on until Saturday, internet is down, phone doesn't have much in terms of data.

Soul Eater: Dance Of Devils

Internet down until Saturday unfortunately so won't be on again until then.