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@NightmareInd
I made a second version of my character, want to know which quirk you think is better between the two, Had just randomly started thinking of it so made two to see which people might like better.

@HeroicSociopath
Ya it kind of sounds like a combination of Himiko's Qurik and Jin aka Twice's Quirk so it is a very dangerous quirk, without the draw backs of Jin's quirk. So think it could be very dangerous so as Nightmare and Kreutzer says need more clarification and possible more limits.

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@kidjab
I had stated it with the link in the interest to here, and I even put a rule in stating it.

Should probably not state it as a 'Mobile Defensive Quirk' if it can be used in more than defense, granted defense itself like shields can still be used as weapons but that digresses. With that kind of example, she probably be extremely at a disadvantage because of two things really.. it would be extremely situational for her to actually get to such speeds, and second is most quirks can pretty much shatter or incinerate concrete fairly easily so the speed she is most likely to actually even get close to reaching in most situations wont be able to defend against much.

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@NightmareInd @kidjab

Ya, that is one of the biggest questions. If it's just made of energy then it would question how strong is it, or if it is a material what is it. The quirk states it's only defensive stuff as well so it's kind of a lot weaker version of Momo's ability of Creation with unknown factors currently. So need some things cleared up before the verdict.

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@kidjab
Also did you really put your character in the char tab before they was accepted?... and I'll wait to see what @NightmareInd says about your ability as well, so I can get his opinion on it. It seems fairly balance since she basically needs momentum to do anything, but that could also incredibly backfire as well in some situations.

I don't remember ever a flash having any ability besides the speed lol, then again I only know a few versions of flash.

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@kidjab
To be frank with the new Quirk it does confuse me somewhat trying to understand it completely.

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@Turboshitter
You don't need to be incredibly specific at how it does this or that. The suits are all made specially through unknown means, After all like the anime/manga example I've been using Shouto, his outfit is literally just clothes, nothing special in it, yet it keeps both halves of his body at different temperature to regular his Quirk easier. It's all a special fiber the clothes made from.

The Suits always makes others question how it can do this or that but never explains it.

@Kreutzer
It's good, don't mind the changes personally. So I would say accepted.

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@Kreutzer

Their suits can get upgraded later, all the anime people eventually get new and better suits as they train their abilities and improve them. Usually they would have something they can reduce some strain. An example probably for your character is the suit stimulates some of his pressure points that can help relieve head pain, allowing him to stay over his limit bit longer than he would otherwise but not increase his limit.

The suits are pretty uniquely made, I mean for example with Shouto's outfit, it looks like simple clothing yet it regulates his body's temperature on either side of his body differently (reason why his fire side is frozen) and even had spikes on bottom of his shoes that you wouldn't notice to keep his posture steady and not slip on his own ice. Though you wouldn't realize it was his suit that did this when you looked at him.

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@Kreutzer
The Hero outfit is usually more then simply an outfit, it is made to assist people with their quirks best they can, like being shock absorbent, or pressing on pressure points to assist with other things. Sorry for late response, had to take care of stuff around my house.

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@Zahir

Charles would watch him as he spoke and when he stood up Charles would sigh again "..Reason I say you need a meal.. because it's the last one I am going to provide" he simply states "The moment your training begins, I will be throwing you out in the wood surrounded by magical creatures and other beasts" he tells Aviva "and see how you survive" Charles would look over at one of the other random patrons in the room "You come here and show the boy your Grimoire" he would state. The Man who he spoke to would suddenly stand up and bow saying "Yes sir!" he would walk over to their table and put his hand out, palm facing up and speak like an incantation 'By the power in my blood, manifest and grant me power' would be spoken out in a strange tone that felt like it was full of power. The man was putting magical power into his words, as energy would swirl out of his hand before suddenly like a poof of smoke a thick tome would appear in the air, it would have a red and black cover. With two battle axes crossing the front.

"This is a Grimoire" Charles would state "It is where your start begins.. you must awaken your Grimoire, the words used to call it differs from person to person." he would wave the man away before continuing "I was going to have the training begin tomorrow after you had a decent night's sleep and a good meal.. but since your so eager.. bye" he says before snapping his fingers causing Aviva's entire vision to go black.

After what felt like a few seconds Aviva's vision would return to find himself in the middle of a forest, trees nearly as tall as redwood, yet only as thick as oak. The grass at his feet would be half way up to his knees, some strange herb like plants scattered around at base of some trees. He was in new and unfamiliar territory with no sign of the master. There would be a pond to the north about quarter of a mile. Mountains to the west about a mile away with various caves. While the forest seems to just stretch on in the other directions.

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@NightmareInd @Kreutzer

I did say that the roleplay would start on first day of class not to long ago, The entrance exam was going to be the start and simply be a chance for everyone to just show off. But I have decided that it would probably be better to just go past that and go straight into whats pretty much the beginning of the story. Granted if people rather start at the entrance exam I can just switch it back.