So if you guys would still care to take me I can edit, I just would like to point out a few things in your post.
Point 1: I am not sure where you get your measurements but an athletic man at 6 foot 6 is suppose to be pretty heavy, I mean Michael Phelps is 6 foot 4 and weighs 194
Point 2: Also Yeah I didn't realize I had left out details on the appearance until my laptop died so i wasn't able to edit that. Now that i am at a computer I can just rewrite everything then.
Point 3: Personality wise I tried to make him as close to human as possible where he isn't constantly extroverted since that just gets annoying. But I can and will change him as you wish. Also the paragraph break was just a typo.
Point 4: . Also I can do edits then for the rest, I didn't go into too much detail but it wasn't suppose to be that he killed the guy just "took care of him" because that would be all he gives. the person, and my apologies as I can see why you got confused with how the wording was. I was wanting to leave it open for discussion on other people later on.
Just to be clear, I understand you can't develop tourettes and you are born with it, since in real life I do have tourettes, I can see why you made that mistake as the way I worded it was odd. Also I can do edits then for the rest, I didn't go into too much detail but it wasn't suppose to be that he killed the guy just "took care of him" because that would be all he gives anyone who asked, I understand though.
Point 5: My apologies I didn't see that, I was going through and looking for one but must have missed her sorry,
Point 6: I would also just like to say though to point six, that Sylvia stores sound in her body and unleashes it In her Sonic bombs.
Point 7: Okay understand I can edit if you would care to take me still.