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The Treasure of Emily Gray - A Swashbuckling Sci-Fi Mystery

@RumikoOhara np, np

The Treasure of Emily Gray - A Swashbuckling Sci-Fi Mystery

The "pilot without peer" bit is still in but apart from that it's all good.

The Treasure of Emily Gray - A Swashbuckling Sci-Fi Mystery

@RumikoOhara Alright, that's fine. I've had that problem before. Just be sure to develop her personality as the game goes on.

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Seems fair to me, I was a bit hyperbolic in my original run through of it. I would cut those bits you suggested, but I still think she's still a little powerful. To me, I think her Personality is the weakest bit of the CS and needs more depth. If her only two tenets are that she's friendlybto those she likes and all business to everyone else it makes her a bit two dimensional. I would compensate with some character flaws in her Personality. Just flesh it out a bit more.

I should probably just cut and paste "add a couple of character flaws" at this point.

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Lmao you're not even in the same faction

Telecommunications - Something Evil is Coming.

lore

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Character Sheet

Captain Carver

Carver

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"We're all gonna die one day, might as well make some cash along the way."

Name:Captain Howard (Howie) Carver

Race: Human

Age: 56

Sex: Male

Appearance: Exactly as image

History: An old military veteran. He was trained intensely for a war that never happened. After that he discovered just how little the civilians appreciated his practise and sacrifice. After many struggles he took his skills and started a small mercenary guild where he and his company would do what ever was necessary for some money. As time passed and complications grew he gave that all up. He took on the simple unadventurous life as a mechanic before deciding he needed one last final hit of excitement.

Personality: A tired man who has lived his life with all the hardships and honours it offers. He believes in enjoying every moment as it could be your last. For this he has little possessions and a strong taste for the finer things. He cares little of what others think and has very little time for bullshit or deception. He is an straightforward simple man with a caring heart and playful laid back attitude.

Allegiance:

Occupation: Mechanic, Pilot and even occasionally a Merc.

Personal Effects: (What belongings do you keep on your person?)

Other: (Anything else you want to note.)

@Dark Light

Okay, so CS review time for you, @Dark Light.

Everything looks good here, I'd just expand the personality section a bit and give him some more depth. After that, feel free to post him in the Characters tab.

On a separate note, I'm assigning you to the Addisons, where you'll be crewmates with @DeadDrop (Zack Killchain), @pandapolio (Sevro Barca), @superservo27 (Jin Kobayashi), and one GM character played by myself. You will all be crewing the Troye Darcy, and it's up to you four who will take what position on the ship.

Crew Roles can go as follows:

• Pilot
• Co-Pilot/Navigator
• Weapons Officer/Tactical Officer
• Engineer/Science Officer
• Communications/Ship Doctor/Other

Please state your preferred position and work out who is going to do what amongst yourselves. The GM character will take the remaining unfilled role.

Also, to anyone else reading, the RP is currently looking for one more player in the 'Alvirstein' faction. Discord preferred.

Semi-realistic future with human augmentation

roleplayerguild.com/topics/170112-the…

Pretty much fits the description.

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@Dark Light

You should prolly get it bro or we're going 2 plan shit leave u in the dark (LITERALLY!) AND ur char may struggle because of this...

@DeadDrop

This, honestly. It's your decision whether you get it or not but I would highly recommend it. There are private text channels for each of the three factions there so as to plan their next move, discuss roles, et cetera. Normally this would be done through OOC but since we have everyone else in the Discord most of it gonna be done there. Otherwise, they're going to have to communicate via OOC or PM.

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@Dark Light Shame. Ah well, I'm gonna do some more sheet reviews and then we can start.