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Just a dude living in Prague and being super pretentious about it.

I like world-building as much as storytelling so I tend to lean to sci-fi/fantasy. Will probably RP a dude.

I've also self-published a book but I'm not so obnoxious I plan to shill it here. You can PM me if you want a link.

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If you’re reading this letter, then it means I’ve either managed to get enough salty dogs to join the expedition, or you’ve looted it off my corpse.

Assuming the former, it’s time for us to meet up again. Make your way to that little town I told you about, on the northern shore of the Ink Sea: Nesville, and try to be there on the 17th of New Breath. It’s a tiny little shitstain, as I mentioned, but it’s the closest dock to the island and I’ve already made arrangements with the locals. You can get there via Ferry if you head to Old BlackSky, or you can take the rail to Clakestown and then hire some horsemen. You could also, which I would not recommend, walk, and given the weather and the disposition of the starving farmers that surround it, you’d better be prepared to stab some blokes as you go.

Right, on that note, bring whatever coin you want, but on account of their livestock having made the journey to this mysterious island of ours, the folk of Nesville are far more inclined to exchange goods and services for food. I’ll be supplying the rations for the trip itself, so you don’t have to worry none about that, but if you want a room, or a cohort, or just wanna watch the old ladies dance till their legs bleed, bring meat, salt, bread, the works. Just be ready for knives in the back. Or the front. You mix hunger with desperation and they’re liable to try their luck against any of you.

One last thing. As I mentioned, I’m taking responsibility for the rations, but I’m also stocking up on fuel, oil, first aid supplies, steam-cells, ammunition, the works. That means I’m going to be a few days behind you all but I expect you can spend that time productively getting to know each other and the locals. So do as I says, not as I does.

Anyways. Assuming the latter, you can go ahead and blow my corpse, you filthy rat.

Sincerely,
The Recruiter
(I also go by Kenningway if you’d prefer.)


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The town was described by The Recruiter as a “tiny little shitstain”, but that was honestly doing a disservice to shitstains worldwide. It would perhaps be more astute to describe the town as a husk. Battered by an unusually cold spring, starvation, and the usual turmoils of endless rain and howling northbound winds, to create a gray, empty corpse that looked as if it had never seen the sun or a smile since the day since some fool decided to lay the first brick of his home here.

Indeed, fortune seemed to have long abandoned this Gothic stone town. At the very heart of Nesville was the town square, which hosted a barren and long dead tree, from which hung the bodies of thirty men and women who had been caught by the sheriff doing anything he didn’t like, which might occasionally include breaking the law. On the trunk of the the tree, several people had carved names and dates, makeshift tombstones for the decaying bodies, and the same phrase repeated over and over: “N’knan Uoon”, which came from a long-dead language forgotten by outsiders.

Surrounding the town square were a number of buildings, which may have one point been fronts for a bustling market, but were now half-collapsed and largely used by the poorest within the city, who used makeshift wooden roofs and improvised iron furnaces to try to keep the spring cold at bay, with little success. Hey and mud were everywhere, remnants of when the livestock used to provide both livelihood and an extra source of warmth, but were now simply another layer of grime to scrape off their shoes when they dragged themselves home every day.

The circle of buildings beyond the town square were in slightly better repair, although it was still very normal to find a broken gargoyle eroding on the street, or a giant hole in a wall that was eaten through by the open-air sewer that flowed through the city like a series of irrigation canals, using water from the sea to wash away their filth. Here, the tradesmen, the miners, the sailors, the craftsmen, and the low-level government officials languished, working their trade out of a resigned acceptance that if they don’t, they’d have nothing to do but waste away into nothing. They could still get coin easily enough, traders came from all over to buy their goods low, and sell food at a premium. And every time some blacksmith had the bright idea to rob them, their armed guards made quick work of his makeshift blunderbuss packed with wet powder and rusted screws.

Further outward, outside the village proper, were the farmers fields, which were still too frozen to start working. These people had it worst of all, with the traders not even bothering to stop by and offer them the chance to sell anything. The people in the city, too, seemed to scorn them, as if it were their fault they were all starving and cold and wet, and thus any farmer who was found walking through the cold, cobblestone streets were usually not long for the world. And if they were to get killed either way, many decided it would be more comfortable to do as much killing as they could beforehand. Thus, the road were peppered with desperate and starving men and women, armed with whatever sharp objects they might have on hand.

The only part of town that was still keeping the whole city alive, if barely, were the docks, where the fishermen worked day and night to bring in enough white meat to keep the people of the city fed. At least, in theory. The dock-masters took their cut, and then the sheriff, and then the mayor, and the sailors, too, had to steal some away for their own families: which meant that by the time the fish were rolled into the morning market, the offerings were thin and the quality, barely edible. All the same, there wasn’t a day that passed where someone didn’t break someone else fighting over the last scraps of some ugly-fleshed bottom-feeder.

In the whole time Wolfgang had been there, which was considerably longer than specified by the letter, the sun had never come out. The sky seemed trapped in a murky, violent darkness, and on the days it wasn’t raining, the town was covered in a fog so thick it may as well have been.

Wolfgang had lived like a king for the past week. Taking the Recruiter’s words to heart, he had taken some of his heard, four of his less-valuable cattle, and brought them with him when he took the ferry over. Between the cattle and his large body and swollen stomach, proof that he was someone accustomed to eating well, he as treated like a god, and was only stabbed around five times since he arrived.

Still, by the 17th, his last cattle had been butchered, and he only had a few thick slices of red meat left. He had traded his food very quickly, and very carefully.

“Good morning.” He smiled as he stepped down the stairs of the most well-to-do inn in the city, a wooden building with a modern fireplace right by the docks and sea, typically used by captains when they docked for the night. The wooden stairs seemed to buckle under his weight, loudly protesting his every move. He was used to that by now.

The woman who ran the place, a gangling old wench with a figure as thin as her dark blue eyes, merely glared at him as he approached, readying his morning cup of tea. He knew she hated him, but the feelings weren’t reciprocated. His round face balanced a pair of silver glasses nicely on his button nose, and he adjusted it slightly as he picked up a cup far too small for his meaty hands. He sipped as he glanced out the window, an idle smile on his rosy cheeks.

“The others should be here today.” He spoke, both to her and himself. “I wonder what they’re like.”
Great story, SpeedLimit, looks like we have three partners, and room for two more.

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In that case I might make a few quick little edits to mine... Maybe. One of the bigger things with Mergoux is she's supposed to have been active before the industrial steampunk revolution, and retired partially because of the drastic change effecting the world. She's got age and experience on her side, but hasn't fully embraced a lot of the new tech. How long ago are we saying the Steampunk revolution started? Is 30 or so years ago workable or does it need to be earlier?


The world did not uniformly enter the steam age all at once: like all technology, steam-powered tech started at one point and it spread out from there. Maybe wherever Mergoux came from only recently got the technology, within the 30-year time frame.
I disagree respectfully, because I suggested this type of character sheet with the express goal of giving you all a chance to help build the world/lore before the RP started properly. So if that's your reservation, I say banish it: but if you simply prefer a standard character sheet, then far be it from me to tell you otherwise.

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Great! So one person's seat is guaranteed.

We just need a few more stories, so come on people: if you don't get em' out we'll have to give your seats away to the first people who do ;)

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Sure, we can make it a party of five. But that's the max, assuming everybody's still interested/nobody's dropped out.

I look forward to your character story.

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Here, I'll kick things off with my own "character sheet":

It’s a story everyone's heard before. A cruel dictator finds himself opposed by a jealous mayor who didn’t so much detest his evil as much as he envied his ability to commit it. The two raised their armies, and they fought, and thousands upon thousands were crushed in the unfeeling machinery of war. By its end, the dictator had won himself a foot of land.

In the eyes of history, the One-Foot War was just another calamity that would be obscured by the rising murk of the Steam Age. But for one man, it proved to be more: it was the start of his legend. For those who returned spoke of a mysterious figure who walked the fields of battle soon after the final shots were fired and the boiling clouds floated away. A man whose imposing figure was wrapped in doctor’s robes, and a thick leather mask to protect his face from the disease and identity. These survivors claimed that he treated all, no matter their side, but he did not treat them equally. Some soldiers were given serums from strange vials that renewed their spirit and injected them with life. Others were poisoned and had their suffering end prematurely. Both were lucky: for there were others who were treated with something else, something that had kept their bodies moving but could barely be called alive. Some half-state of endless pain and power, and the figure would watch unflinchingly as his “patients” tore across the fields of dead, rushing with madness in their eyes to wherever their fevered feet and minds would take them.

To the Recruiter, it seemed like a tall tale from warped minds battered by the war. But the more he heard the story in his travels, the more convinced he became there may be some truth to it. So he went to these battlefields, where the ground was now cold and the bones, bleached by rain and crow, and he looked for any truth to these claims. Too long had passed to find evidence among the dead, but he did investigate nearby towns, asking if they had any encounters with these “living ghouls” created by his serums.

And surprisingly, the sober villagers spoke of such things. By the time these men and women had reached their village borders, whatever this “doctor” had done to them had faded, and they were hollow and half-dead, barely able to move yet inhumanly compelled to do so. Most were unable to speak, and approaching them provoked a feral snapping like a starved dog. So most were mercifully put down by the farmers and their rifles.

One, however, had survived, as fortune had dictated he stumble into the yard of someone who knew him from long ago. The recruiter found this survivor roped up in some old woman’s barn. To call him “alive” was a discredit: his body, between the infected wounds, the exhaustion, and months without food and water, should have died ten times over. But “it” was still alive in the most technical of sense: with no energy to move, all it could do was release shallow breaths and, occasionally, blink the flies from its dry, milky eyes.

Whoever had created this… ‘thing’ had a sick brilliance the Recruiter admired, and knew he would need for his expedition. He went to the larger centers in the region, the walled-off city states and the company-owned villages where intelligent, morally compromised people tended to congregate. He investigated at the doctor’s guilds, the underground surgery rings, the body-cults, the academies and private institutions, and while he didn’t find the mysterious doctor, he did discover a ill-tempered, witless surgeon who was praised for somehow creating medicine that could ‘miraculously’ heal even the most gravely injured. After some… persuasion, the Recruiter was able to uncover the surgeon had received his miracle medicine not from a peer in his practiced field, but rather, a chemist living in the outskirts of town, who typically made his living mass-produced steroid cocktails to fatten livestock to absurd sizes.

The Recruiter politely asked for an audience.

The moment the Recruiter saw the chemist, a huge man with broad shoulders, he knew he had found the figure the soldiers had whispered about in the bottom of their ale-tankers. But whereas he had expected some twisted madman, he was surprised to find this Chemist was a fairly well-mannered, social, and civil figure, offering him a cup of tea and a polite smile from under his slightly-grayed whiskers. The recruiter even doubted, for a moment, this could be the same genius who had somehow forced a body to stay alive through countless deaths.

But the chemist admitted to everything. Walking the battlefield to test his concoctions on the dying. Making on-the-to alterations with a portable laboratory to improve and alter his formulas. Experimenting on these near-dead humans, because, in his own words, “I can’t experiment on my cows. I need to sell them.” It was a grim confession, but one made fearlessly, almost joyfully.

It was this offhand dismissal of his misdeeds that had convinced the Recruiter, and it’s what made him offer the job. At first, the Chemist didn’t like the idea: after all, he was being hired to keep people alive, and he knew how to do that well enough. But when the Recruiter mentioned the Juun, the Chemist reconsidered: after all, what kind of wondrously strange concoctions could he make with just a pinch of Juun in every vial?

And so the Recruiter had found his first “partner”: Wolfgang, the Chemist.

Great news guys: we've got a party of four (you two, one from a PM, and me) and we're ready to roll.

Now what we need are character sheets, but plain old character sheets are boring, so we're going to do something a little different.

I want ya'll to tell a story about how the recruiter found out your character existed, and decided to seek you out. How did he discover you exist? What did he learn about you as he investigated further? Where did he find you, and what did you do? And most importantly, how did you react to his offer? This is your chance to really shape the world, it's culture, and the people who occupy it, so go crazy!

If none of you like that you can do a normal character sheet, but this sounded fun, so... I figured I'd try it out.

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Happy to have you on board!

Let's see if this can snag at least one more person before we start talkin' characters, sound good?

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Yeah, sure, chalk me up as interested.

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"A’ight, we’re gonna start ‘ith the legend, and eve’ though I know you know it, ou’re gonna sit down and shut up while I says it, cause this time it’s got a twist endin’ I thin’ you’ll ‘preciate.
Time was, long ago, there ain’t nothin’ in the whole damn world. Nothing, cept’ these lil’ tiny sprites we call Juun. Now these Juun are worthless lil’ babbles, cept this one who we now call ‘The First’.The First, outta nowhere seems like, became aware that it existed. N’ just like that, it was alive. N’ this little critter woke up to discover a big empty place with nothin’ but other, mindless Juun floatin’ around. But now that The First was all woke, e’ took it upon m’self - yes, m’ callin’ it a he, s’ my story not yours - he took it on m’self to bully all the other Juun into doin’ what he wanted. With lil’ Juun he could make lil’ things, like a rock or a cat. Big Juun let m’ make big things, like planets n’ stars. Before long The First ‘ad made a whole universe, n’ buggered off to let it do it’s own thing.
Thin’ is, he wasn’ able to use up all the Juun before he left. There was still some floatin’ around, and if you manage to get your hands on it, you can make stuff just as easy as The First. Stumble upon a speck, ya could replace a stolen knife. Stagger into a chunk, you got a fancy new mansion. N’ if you’re anything like the ol’ Pig King, you’ll stagger into a load so large you can make yourself your own country to rule.
Now quit rollin’ your eyes at me, because this ere’ is where things get interestin’. There’s this town, see, way up north, right on the shore of the Ink Sea, the kind of where folks don’t got no steam-scythes to do their farmin’. Couple weeks ago, they send some kid down to complain, see, says a whole bunch of rats suddenly show up… but they don’t cause no trouble. They just pop in, run straight to the shore, and swim like mad to some shadow in the sea. Someplace ain’t nobody’s seemed to notice before. As if an island just appeared overnight, yeah? And after the rats, the local pigs make a go for it, then the dogs, then the cows… yeah, the people are starvin and all but we ain’t here about that.
No, here’s what we’re interested in: the place is apparently swimming in Juun. Like, it’s covered with the damn stuff. And there are lots of prospectors who have been grabbin’ their weapons and charting off to this island to, heh, strike their fortune.
Don’t let the fact none of em’ have ever returned scare you off. M’ sure that just means there’s still lots of Juun to go around.
And I says, I says it’s time you and me stake our claim, yeah? I’m makin’ a crew, and I want you on board. We each get a fair cut, we each take 's much as we can, and we make off like kings. I’ll even supply the steamboat. So whatta say, pal?

You in?”


What is it: A steampunk low-fantasy adventure with a small party of players who have to work together to survive a mysterious and twisted isle, while making sure their companion's knives keep out of their backs.
Who can you play: The world is open enough that you can be just about anyone, with any sort of steampunk-style tech you can imagine. You can start with a bit of Juun but not too much. You can invent any races you like. World-building will be a collaborative affair.
How it'll work: I'll play a character (not strictly the guy in the intro) and will have minor-GM powers for the sake of communicating big things on the island. Beyond that it'll be collaborative.

Anyway. Anyone interested?
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