ReaptheMusic

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@Yuritopia Oop.... I missed something. Just change the skills in combat into bullet points instead of a sentence. I'm so busy x-x

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@Yuritopia Saffron is Accepted! ^.^ Congratulations for making the second slot in a limited space rp. Please place her in the Character Sheet Tab. Welcome!

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I thought I did... Wings. Hubris.
I'm sorry. I'm not being adamant about anything. I legitimately thought I was answering your concern.

@Yuritopia

I asked for you to put it on your CS, not for you to explain it to me. I understand it's obvious, that doesn't mean I still wouldn't like for it to be put onto the CS. For example "Her wings are attributed to the story of Icarus who flew too close to the Sun. It's this point of the story which I gained inspiration for her ability to use the sun as her main source of power."

They say that seeing Da Vinci's conceptual work leading up to the final product is far more valuable than his actual final products. This is why showing your work leading up to why you felt compelled to make a character based on this individual legend that matters to me most. I forgive you, and I also apologize for putting my foot down. Many people have taken advantage of my kindness in the past and though I don't let it squander my attitude, I do take it into note when handling my business. Make the changes to your CS and she will be approved.

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@Yuritopia Please just highlight the character's connection more. It's in MY rules. After that she would probably be okay enough to be accepted but honestly I don't appreciate you being adamant on such a simple request.

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@Crimson Clover Do you think you may be able to try and find more similarities to highlight in that section than that, if any? ....She does remind me a little bit of Bloody Mary, actually.

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@Crimson CloverI would like for it to be. It's RWBY afterall and everything has a theme. I just feel... iunno, it would be respectful to Monty Oum.

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@Chickn Let me know when you're finished please.

PHEW. Done ^^'

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@Yuritopia You've a very cute character. ^.^ Please talk more specifically about how she is similar to Icarus. You may think it's obvious, but I like to see all the work that is pulled from the inspiration. As for your semblance, is it megaman rules where for the most part she shoots lemons from her hand but takes time to charge up to fire a LARGE beam? (In other words, are her attacks small unless she takes the time to charge up? Does it not work at all when she's in the dark?)

Here's something interesting for you. Saffron's last name is Lumenaire yes? Is that just a coincidence that the name is so similar to the Lumiere brothers who were the first to invent the usable film cameras we use in Hollywood today? If it is, good show. If not, this actually presents an opportunity to make her more steam punk in style, which would be a lot of fun considering her abilities and weapons. This, of course, is up to you.

R.W.B.Y. ~ The Colors of Dawn ~

@Crimson Clover Be sure to let me know when it's completed, and please while I'm thinking of it add how her story is similar to the inspired story in specific.

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@Eirene

Notes

-If possible, I'd like to have extra images used that emcompasses things like his outfit and etc. These can be placed in a hider beneath his current photo.

-You may only have ONE semblance, and while I like the idea of influencing roots to snag enemies, 'Spirit Song' is too overpowered for this rp. That being said, if you want since it ties into his inspired character, why not have him sing in order to control plants in general? That way you combine the two and it's a metaphor for singing to life so that it may grant death. What I just said was cheesy but I hope you get the point.

-I asked for bullet points for your combat skills. You gave me a paragraph.

-I like him :) Your description for his inspiration was super on point. I can't wait to see him in action.