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Current Been a while.
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Back a year later with starbux
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Wow Typos
7 yrs ago
Life working full time is a vortex of "IM SORRY I CANT POST YET IM SWAMPED WITH WORTH" Sorry ya'll<3;;;
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7 yrs ago
Dang thicc hips, Bomb ass lips, I could rule the world on my fingertips. ~<3
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Current look and haircut~<3

A Flamboyant and Stylish Mini-Boss has Appeared!


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Oh wait, I meant to put that in gender.

lol


Oh. I'm sure you did. After already putting female under gender. How .... convenient. Must have been one heck of a slip up. Just get distracted?


Alright, he's almost ready. Would you mind adding another image under appearance to give me an idea of his outfit?
@Mr Allen Jmmmeh, I'm interested in where you'll take it. One last thing bothers me, what uh

whats up with that vaguely

sexist comment under 'species?'

>_>


Finished my character. I hope she's acceptable, and I'm willing to change anything. Anywho, in case you're wondering, "Verde" means green in Portuguese.


Hold up, Muay Thai with nunchucks as her main weapon???
@Mr Allen J I appreciate it very much that you took the time to really consider how to connect your character to lore. That being said, the same thing I said about Rowan applies here. Martial Arts is too vague, too broad. What STYLES were implemented? What did she focus on most? Why?
@Chickn Evasion? mm, try some of the Shaolin Monk styles, they focused on pacifist tactics I think.
@Turboshitter

*sigh* no, still not good enough. Here, Have some more pointers...

@Turboshitter Nnnnope. Didn't realize it wa 100% ready for me to look at again yet. Let me go do that.
@Chickn I love your sincerity. I can tell you really are fond of this character you've created, I can relate to that a lot. There are only a few things I need to inquire about.

-His name needs to have something to do with color in there somewhere

-My partner in crime was president of the mixed martial arts club before they graduated college and currently a black belt in several of them. When you say he is versed 'several martial arts,' that's a very vague and BROAD term. It would mean leaps and bounds if you brushed up on the forms of a few types of martial art and selected a few you think would fit his fighting style. They all look different, and they all do different things, which is why I need to know what you're going for.

Since there's a lot I'll help you out. Do you want him to be free flowing and use imbalance to his advantage, or do you want him grounded, firm, immovable? Knowing what you want him to LOOK like as he's fighting helps when trying to select something out of all the millions of styles that come under the term 'martial art'
@Dragonfry This feels somewhat uninspired and I don't feel like I want to learn any more about her character. It's almost too cut and dry and I'm not excited to see where she is going. Since there are only so many slots left, I would prefer for someone more compelling to fill those roles unless you could prepare a CS that I feel you could really make stand out once the roleplay begins.
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