@ViolentViolet
ok so I finished my CS can you tell me if it's good now. Here's a link to it.
roleplayerguild.com/posts/3300600
ok so I finished my CS can you tell me if it's good now. Here's a link to it.
roleplayerguild.com/posts/3300600
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Sail on a sweet silver mist
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Player; DK
Age; 23
Sex; Male
Occupation; Air Force
Location; Alnilam
Race; Rakshasa
Dead men tell no tales
So listen to this story from a whale
She sailed the silver river
But only found a purple butler
There was a grey parrot, and the crane both agree
That the turtle should search for the one manatee
Now you see your monster
Or maybe your insanity
The pirate needs more ales
Age; 23
Sex; Male
Occupation; Air Force
Location; Alnilam
Race; Rakshasa
Dead men tell no tales
So listen to this story from a whale
She sailed the silver river
But only found a purple butler
There was a grey parrot, and the crane both agree
That the turtle should search for the one manatee
Now you see your monster
Or maybe your insanity
The pirate needs more ales
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Do we have a posting order¿
I'm interested. This looks well thought out.
@KoL
Kazuki had been weaving in and out of traffic on his bicycle all day. He never wore head phones like the other messengers. He enjoyed taking in the sounds of the city. No matter where he went, the city had a pleasant tune for him. From the boistrous noise from traffic and chatter in the commercial district, to the quiet and serene nature around the temple. All of it pleased him. It also helped him stay more alert to everything going on around him. It was easy for him to get lost in thought, and that could easily mean disaster when flying through the city.
He was finishing up on his last delivery for the day. The last package was a manilla envelope that was to be delivered to some businessman. Faxing and E-mail was obviously quicker, but those could be traced and duplicated. A messenger never looked at their deliveries and never sold them either. At least Kazuki held to that standard. Another messenger sold a package once and got caught. He was only fired from the messenger business, but the recipient of the package wasn't to happy. The messenger was nearly put into a coma after that. It really made Kazuki wonder what they could be carrying half the time. As Kazuki took the man's signature and handed him the package, something seemed to be wrong with his head. It started as a slight headache, but then quickly cleared out as he realized that this was actually a call. So Miss Aria needs me now. Well this should mean for some fun. What a better way to end a busy day than with more work. Although Miss Aria does always have intriguing jobs. He unlocked his bike and headed down to the Dangeki Pawn and Parlor.
The sun had just set and a orange hue turned pink as it extended into the sky. The colors protruded through the outlines of skyscrapers, as he whizzed through the city. Traffic had died down since the end of day rush home, and he let himself relax a bit and get zone out on the scenes around him. He evidently did that a little to well, because before he knew it he was at the Cafe. He entered the familiar establishment and gave Ellie a warm smile "Hey Ellie, can I have a Chai, like normal. I'm going to need it after today." He went up and sat down at the bar for a moment, talkig to Ellie as she made his Chai Latte. He needed a break before Aria gave him more work. He could refuse it, but her work was good pay, and he didn't like to disappoint her. "I had quite a few deliveries today. One was even to the temple. It's nice going out that way, but it is a long ride. So is it looking like it's going to be a long night?" He was hoping to get a little insight to what Aria might be asking of them tonight.
Kazuki had been weaving in and out of traffic on his bicycle all day. He never wore head phones like the other messengers. He enjoyed taking in the sounds of the city. No matter where he went, the city had a pleasant tune for him. From the boistrous noise from traffic and chatter in the commercial district, to the quiet and serene nature around the temple. All of it pleased him. It also helped him stay more alert to everything going on around him. It was easy for him to get lost in thought, and that could easily mean disaster when flying through the city.
He was finishing up on his last delivery for the day. The last package was a manilla envelope that was to be delivered to some businessman. Faxing and E-mail was obviously quicker, but those could be traced and duplicated. A messenger never looked at their deliveries and never sold them either. At least Kazuki held to that standard. Another messenger sold a package once and got caught. He was only fired from the messenger business, but the recipient of the package wasn't to happy. The messenger was nearly put into a coma after that. It really made Kazuki wonder what they could be carrying half the time. As Kazuki took the man's signature and handed him the package, something seemed to be wrong with his head. It started as a slight headache, but then quickly cleared out as he realized that this was actually a call. So Miss Aria needs me now. Well this should mean for some fun. What a better way to end a busy day than with more work. Although Miss Aria does always have intriguing jobs. He unlocked his bike and headed down to the Dangeki Pawn and Parlor.
The sun had just set and a orange hue turned pink as it extended into the sky. The colors protruded through the outlines of skyscrapers, as he whizzed through the city. Traffic had died down since the end of day rush home, and he let himself relax a bit and get zone out on the scenes around him. He evidently did that a little to well, because before he knew it he was at the Cafe. He entered the familiar establishment and gave Ellie a warm smile "Hey Ellie, can I have a Chai, like normal. I'm going to need it after today." He went up and sat down at the bar for a moment, talkig to Ellie as she made his Chai Latte. He needed a break before Aria gave him more work. He could refuse it, but her work was good pay, and he didn't like to disappoint her. "I had quite a few deliveries today. One was even to the temple. It's nice going out that way, but it is a long ride. So is it looking like it's going to be a long night?" He was hoping to get a little insight to what Aria might be asking of them tonight.
@Obscene Symphony
Yeah, that's fine, not sure I'll be able to get Etherpad to work on my computer though. Or at least it will probably be more work than I want to put into it. haha
Yeah, that's fine, not sure I'll be able to get Etherpad to work on my computer though. Or at least it will probably be more work than I want to put into it. haha
@Ace of flames01 Haha, settle down man. You're the one that slapped me.
West was really impressed by Celia's Crimson Melody. They were so small compared to his weapon, but that seemed to just make him admire them more. "Wow, Crimson Melody seems really cool." You could probably even conceal them. I just realized something. I'm the only one with a weapon without a name." West thought to himself for a moment about what his lance's name should be. He came to the conclussion that he was going to need more time to think about it.
Vivianne's conclusion was most likely correct. The four had introduced themselves or at least given as much introduction as they were going to give. Food and exploration sounded really good to West right now. "Yeah, I'll go with you to the cafeteria. I'm pretty hungry right now. I want to explore the grounds afterwards as well, if anyone will join me for that, it'd be great."
Vivianne's conclusion was most likely correct. The four had introduced themselves or at least given as much introduction as they were going to give. Food and exploration sounded really good to West right now. "Yeah, I'll go with you to the cafeteria. I'm pretty hungry right now. I want to explore the grounds afterwards as well, if anyone will join me for that, it'd be great."
@Ace of flames01 *Stares back indignantly*
@Bryn@2b3heart
The door slammed on Grey's head forcing him out of the attic. "Well at least Faris has his strength still." He was mad for a moment as the pain pumped on his head, but that quickly subsided. He knew Faris wouldn't hurt Aria, and left them to be. He trapped her up there and would have to let her out now. Maybe she could talk to him for a moment. He went back down the hallway and was making his way back for the fireroom, when he ran into a new girl, being escorted by Nyra about the house. "Well hello. I am Prince Greykin, but you may call me Grey. What brings you to our castle?"
The door slammed on Grey's head forcing him out of the attic. "Well at least Faris has his strength still." He was mad for a moment as the pain pumped on his head, but that quickly subsided. He knew Faris wouldn't hurt Aria, and left them to be. He trapped her up there and would have to let her out now. Maybe she could talk to him for a moment. He went back down the hallway and was making his way back for the fireroom, when he ran into a new girl, being escorted by Nyra about the house. "Well hello. I am Prince Greykin, but you may call me Grey. What brings you to our castle?"
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