RolePlayerGuilt

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 1 (Completed)

@Mortarion, how's it cracking, bud?

I'll try to get to it tonight or tomorrow at latest.

@Dervish

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 1 (Completed)

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 1 (Completed)

You all were just gabbin' away, huh? Sorry, I've been caught up with homework, so keeping up on the OOC is a bit difficult. Make sure if anything needs/should get to me, I get tagged - please. ^_^ Just in case, cause... well, trying to juggle a lot right now. Thanks, guys!

@Scout

Solution: quit school

ＥＣＨＯＥＳ - a mysterious sci-fi adventure

Interesting. Reminds me of Starless, but sci-fi instead of fantasy.

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 1 (Completed)

Personality expanded on quite a bit. Valen don't have much outside his work as it were. Its what happens when someone is raised to be one way. What he does have revolves around his vices (drinking, picking fights).

@Hellis

Looks good to me. You may want to proofread the sheet and stamp out grammar, spelling and formatting issues. Other than that, you have the all clear from me.

Let's see what @Dervish and @Leidenschaft think.

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 1 (Completed)

@Hellis, I would like to know what kind of hobbies Valen has outside of his job, and what other personalities exist (or existed) beside stoic and bitter. Expanding his personality is fine if you don't want to change the background.

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 1 (Completed)

Farid would actually be eager to beat up our runner boy.

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 1 (Completed)

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Just what I thought! Shall I get us started?

@MacabreFox

Whenever you're ready.

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 1 (Completed)

@MacabreFox, time for Edith-Sevine collab on Gdocs.

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 1 (Completed)

@Hellis, not bad at all. Valen will fit into the group fine and I believe he has a lot of potential. There are some spelling and grammar issues, but nothing that makes the sheet incomprehensible.

I would only ask you to: 1, put the image in a hider to save space; 2, tell me a little about Valen outside of his work, which will help build a rounder character.