RolePlayerGuilt

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 2 (Completed)

Discord Hall of Fame™ episode 2.

The echoes of @Stormflyx



@POOHEAD189's got a bone to pick.

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 2 (Completed)

@Stormflyx



Ashna is in, congrats!

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 2 (Completed)

@MiddleEarthRoze

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 2 (Completed)

Seeing how tall Ashna is, I decided to compile a list of other tall boys, girls and snow demons of FoC. Note that some are my personal speculation; do correct me if I'm getting something wrong.

^Reference

• Hakkeam (Kamal general, hostile NPC) - ~2.8m (armored)
• Dzuungits (Kamal knight, hostile NPC) - ~2.6m (armored)
• Relmyna Vibato (Chapter 1; werewolf form, fully standing) - ~2.4m
• Tennant Ibnazh (chapter 1) - ~2.1m
• Keegan, Jorwen Red-Bear (chapter 1) - ~2m
• Sadri, Dael - 1.95-2m
• Solveig (chapter 1) - ~1.9m
• Ashna, Leif, Rhasha'Dar (chapter 1) - 1.85-1.9m

What Are You Listening To?

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 2 (Completed)

Alright, @Stormflyx, looks like you've taken Dervs' advice to heart and definitely fleshed out the character better. With that said, there are still some areas to expand on.

• Add a note on why she calls herself the Colossus (to honor her adoptive father, because of her larger than average stature etc.)
• Being an important figure to Ashna, Bjogar's story is missing at parts. Elaboration on how his relationship with Ashna shifted from master/slave to adoptive father/daughter over the years would be nice. Also, Bjogar being a former sailor was not apparent until the second last paragraph; some hints earlier in the background will make this less jarring.
• Ashna's interest in reading and her forgetfulness is scarcely mentioned in her background. Please explain how these traits came to be.
• Why did your character choose Solitude and the mercenary company? I assume it is because she heard Windhelm has been occupied by Kamals and Morrowind, and Dawnstar is too chaotic at the moment. Add some of her rationale at the end of her bio.
• How much of her bandit past would she disclose to the mercenary commanders? Revealing more shows off her skill set better, but may be treated with suspicion. The choice is up you; how much Ashna shares of her experiences may affect her initial assignment as either a frontline fighter or a laborer.
• She needs marksman skill in order to throw axes effectively. I would make room for novice marksman at the very least (apprentice or adept may work better).

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 2 (Completed)

@MacabreFox, they would be on the ship by 5th evening. Change it to the 4th.

And welcome back; looking forward to more quality content from you.

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 2 (Completed)

play with myself

@POOHEAD189

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 2 (Completed)

@DearTrickster, great work. Maj is a unique character with personality corresponding perfectly to her background and skills.

There's a few typos, and I advise you to read over the sheet and fix them. Besides the typos, I have only one nitpick. Maj is familiar with the Daedric alphabet, yet she carries a Daedric alphabet translation book.

Once you address the issues above, and anything @Peik may bring up, you can add Maj to the roster.

The Elder Scrolls: Fruits of Contention - Chapter 2 (Completed)

On a more serious note, here are the top ten user-voted posts (or sets of posts) of chapter 1. These are in no particular order.

• Suicide Bombing by @MiddleEarthRoze and @Frizan
  
  • Windhelm Docks
  • Sea of Ghosts
• Solveig and Jorwen by @Leidenschaft
  
  • Family Reunion
  • The Chasm
  • Parting Words
• Farid's Downfall by @Gcold, @Leidenschaft and @POOHEAD189
  
  • Farid's Wrath
  • Farid's Death
• Do'Karth and Sevine by @Dervish and @MacabreFox
• Frigate Fight Time by @Peik, @Mortarion and @MacabreFox
• Overload by @Peik
• Niernen's Homecoming by @Dervish, with @Father Hank's character
• The Reunion of Niernen and Do'Karth by @Dervish and @Father Hank
• Soultrap Go! by @Gcold
• Keegan Getting Rekt by @Gcold

Bonus: The Apotheosis of Climb Kit (Read the entire page and 4 posts into the next)