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In an bit of inspiration from another RP that I am in, I am going to add something to the CS that I would like those who have already sent me their sheets (@Rockerman403, @SheriffLlama, @void liege, and @SomewhatAverage) to add, as well as the rest of you still creating to include. This will allow me to get a better feeling for your roleplaying style, as well as allow you to expand on a certain aspect of the sheet that I have noticed needs a bit more emphasis.

The section will be you actually roleplaying out how your character heard about the request from the Employer. You can even go as far as to elaborate on the travels of your character on their way to Roses if you choose to do so, but it is not required. Be as creative as you like. It can be anything from a casual conversation over a tankard of ale, to eavesdropping on a pair of gossiping townsfolk, or even receiving a letter or being approached by someone if your character is sufficiently famous or noticeably skilled in certain areas.

EDIT: This also means that including the same information in your history is no longer necessary, but if you want to keep it there that is completely fine as well.
@SavageI have an idea of a runaway prince/noble son turning mercenary, and was wondering if you preferred either, and if there was anything I needed to note of making a (former) highborn.


So based on the research I've done, which I admit isn't very extensive and just a very broad surface level, Princes are a pretty high noble title. Usually this is given to the son(s) of the king. Sometimes this isn't the case, and that's pretty much were I stopped reading because all of the politics of Medieval Europe are very confusing. Anyway, fact is that the current king, Osfirth II, has no kids. So being a prince wouldn't work out to well, however there are many other high ranking noble classes that exist. See the last hider I made for a link to a page about the ranks of nobility, it will be able to help you out I think.

Other than that, just keep in mind that the life of a noble is pretty much like playing King of the Hill. You are always squabbling with all the others to try and out do them in the eyes of the King and gain more prestige, land, and power. Other than that though you have a great deal of freedom to write out your character.
I see, and thank you very much. If I choose to create said mercenary/scholar, I'll give you a small summary before the full CS is submitted.


You're very welcome. I look forward to seeing you what you come up with.
Small question. Can one play as a member of the northern barbarians that were mentioned? If so, how much creative freedom do we have when it comes to them and what is set beforehand? Whatever the case may be, expect a CS shortly.

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The barbarian tribes were mentioned more as a footnote to further elaborate on the world. They are not quite fully fleshed out, but what I've created so far is a race of savage, bloodthirsty, wild people. Not typically the type you invite over for dinner. Perhaps in another game set in this same universe we will further explore them, but they are very very far off, well past the borders of the Star Kingdom and not really a threat to anyone in it yet.

If you would like to explore the barbarian tribes, and maybe do some of your own world building on them I can make another suggestion. Perhaps you are a traveling mercenary or scholar, that has ventured into the far northern lands to study these people or been hired by forces outside the Star Kingdom to fight them?
@Savage I noticed that you listed gunpowder as one part of the technology tab. Would that entail flintlock weapons, like pistols and muskets, or would that only be for cannons?


It also entails flintlocks. I made mention of musket armed soldiers in various areas of the different hiders. So cannons, muskets, pistols, and other things you can think of for gunpowder are available. Gunpowder is dangerous and unpredictable though. It can backfire and explode, or malfunction and only leave a very non-lethal sizzle for your gun. More expensive black powders are better, while the cheap stuff is like flipping a coin on whether you actually shoot something or end up writing with your non-dominant hand.
@Savage I saw the limit of characters, so I'd like to ask if I could save a spot for my CS. I really love how in depth this concept is. Consider me interested!


I am not making any decisions until after everyone who is interested has submitted their sheet, or a decent amount of time has passed, on which characters will be accepted and which will not. With that being said, there seems to be much greater interest in this than I had anticipated (which of course makes me incredibly pleased that you all have found excitement in what I've written so far). If I receive more than 6 characters that I can tell are made with care and attention and would very much love to have in this story then there will be more than 6 available slots.

If it comes to a point when there are simply just too many characters, some of you which are passed up for a protagonist position may find yourself receiving a PM from me and asking for your assistance in portraying some of the nightmares I have planned. These will most likely not be full time positions, and you will have less freedom over your actions as I will be dictating when and where you "pop up," but it would allow you to explore the story in your own way.
For any who are interested, I have added a Races section to the OP. This details out a bit more on humans, Fae, and the mix between the two.
“Reconnaissance Drones returning to their bays now Admiral,” came the calm, light tone of the Air Caste pilot as his thin and dexterous fingers ran across the control panel in front of him with practiced ease and skill. The holographic display in front of his responded as the Drones were locked into their bays, the feeds from their memory core instantly being uploaded into the ship’s data banks.

Admiral Firestorm sat upon her command throne, dressed in the snuggly fitting pilots uniform of the Air Caste, a Pulse pistol holstered against her hip. The bridge of the massive Custodian Class Battleship was sleek and smooth, the material an all white color that contrasted sharply with the dark red and black uniforms of the pilots and crew members of the bridge. Admiral Firestorm brought up her own holographic display without a word, bringing up the data from the Reconnaissance Drones and examining their findings. Her fleet lay at the very edge of a new system that the Tau fleet had just recently arrived. Several planets had been observed on their sensors, and as a common practice they had laid in wait within a defensive formation as they sent Drones to scout out the area ahead. The hiss of a door behind her and the steady thumps of cloven feet on the hard floor went nearly unnoticed.

Commander Warstrider, the defacto leader of the ground forces after the untimely demise of Shas’o B’shase, strode confidently into the bridge. He was dressed in a black robe trimmed in red and white, synced around his waist with a white cord. The emblem of the Farsight Enclaves adorned his right shoulder, as it did on all of the uniforms of the Enclave Tau. His voice was curt but respectful when he spoke, for he was within the domain of the Air Caste here, and the woman seated next to him still technically outranked him.

“Admiral,” he started, giving a small bow, inclining his head slightly. “Shas’el,” came the soft reply, with barely a glance toward the Fire Caste veteran as Firestorm perused the data. Warstrider ignored the small insult. He had been at odds with the Air Caste leader since he had ever set foot within her fleet. Guidestar and Firestorm had been close, and he felt that she resented his eagerness to replace the old Commander. More so, she forever seemed distasteful of his strategies and plans. As long as he was on her ship, he would hold his tongue. He knew his place, and knew that on the ground there would be nothing stopping his orders from supplanting hers.

“Is there anything worthwhile for us here?” Warstrider continued, and Firestorm nodded. “Yes, there indeed is. Initial scans show many planets rich in mineral resources, though we have picked up an abundance of life already here.” The answer brought a nod from the male, mulling over the information. Rich resources were something very much of interest to them on this mission. So far they had been unable to find anything that made their expedition worthwhile, only a few loose agreements that could very well fall through later. He would not return home empty handed. “How many? Do we know who they are?”

In answer to his question Firestorm brought up the main holoprojector in the bridge, allowing Warstrider to see for himself. The image showed a planet, no too small for a planet. It was a moon, and there was a fleet laying in orbit over it. Warstrider squinted at the image, suddenly recognizing the shapes of the ships hovering over the lunar body.

“Gue’la,” he spat, the word rolling off his tongue like a poison. The shapes of the anchored vessels was unmistakable, with their sharp prows, jutting command decks like fortresses, and gun decks bristling with weaponry. “How many?” He repeated.

“Too many for us to fight alone. It looks like a force far too large to be merely planetary defense either. They may be waiting for resupply, or staging for their next move. I would advise that we wait, engage the stealth drives and watch until they leave.”

“And what if they don’t? You know as well as I do that we are running low on supplies and fuel. We can’t afford to sit around and wait for them to move on. They may be waiting to attack or colonize this region. We should strike at them while they are at anchor, cripple their ships and hit them before they even realize we are here.”

Firestorm shook her head, “No. We cannot hope to defeat such a large force in open combat. But you are right, waiting could prove to yield nothing. We will compromise then. Approach from the darkside of the moon with stealth drives engaged here,” her slender fingers traced a line along the image, projecting their course. “From behind the planet and out of view. We wait behind the planet, and send a small force of your Fire Warriors with Water Caste diplomats to make initial contact. They won’t know the size of our fleet, or how many warriors you possess. We may lose the initial element of surprise but that fleet will have no idea that our forces wait just behind the planet. If things turn sour, we can still hit them with speed and surprise and make our escape before we are badly damaged.”

Mont’ray did not like the idea. They had a perfect opportunity here to launch an ambush while the human fleet was vulnerable in orbit. However, they did not know if there were reserve force on the way. If he acted rashly, the entire fleet may be destroyed and their mission a failure. “Very well Admiral. Our lives are in your hands,” he finished, turning on his heel and marching out of the room, his last words almost like a threat in the air as he went to prepare his soldiers.




Lying in wait, ships cloaked and engines running at the lowest level possible to conserve heat signature but still be primed for a lightning quick attack, the Enclave fleet lay in wait just behind the planet. Two shuttles launched from bays on the flagship, streaking out into the void. Within each was a dozen Fire Warriors and four Water Caste diplomats. The Warriors checked their Pulse rifles and equipment, the Shas’ui barking orders and inspecting their respective squads as the diplomats discussed their plan of action. Trusting in their stealth drives to get the shuttles close enough for the message of parlay to reach the moon and the fleet, the shuttles broke from one another. One aiming to make a landing on what their scanners showed as an inhabited colony on the moon, while the other went for the fleet hovering above the surface.
@Savage Teleportation, mindtricks, showing the horrors of his mind on his enemies making them gouch there eyes out. You know fun stuff :)


All things are possible within the realm of magic. Just take care to elaborate on these abilities and do your best to limit them in a way that would ensure they are not deemed overpowered. Keep in mind that characters with magical abilities will be more closely read and criticized by me in order to try and keep everyone from getting too wild.

Also, the more powerful your abilities, the harder it will be for your Assassin to control. Teleporting across a small room may not tax his mental state as much, but jumping across a town or several miles will require an intense amount of skill and willpower to achieve without having an unforeseen result. I look forward to seeing what you come up with and offering my advice to help guide you in the direction I am looking for.
@Savage I was actually thinking about making an somewhat insane assassin, that writes poems. And has some rather "Dark" magical abilities.


Depending on those abilities, it is not off the table. The insanity aspect would actually tie in well to having some kind of powers. Perhaps your character has made some sort of deal with a cosmic entity, which has possessed him in a more symbiotic relationship instead of total control. Thus your character gains a small bit of this creatures power, at the sacrifice of their own sanity.

EDIT: Also I am realizing this course of action would provide you with the interesting option of "talking" to your otherworldly inhabitant within your own mind.
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