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@GreenGoat I guess you do have a point. It would be unfair for the 15 people who've posted if I delay the update because of 2 others. I suppose they'll just have to catch up then.

Will be updating in a bit.
Currently have 3 more slots left. OOC is very active if you guys want to check it out.
He'll just power everyone up while he stays safe in the back line. He's probably the best support type character here. Or he's tied with Clive.

Just waiting for two more people to post. I think Hayaso and Sodium. Not sure if Masaki's gonna edit more of her post too.

Actually, I've got the update already typed up.
We might find out who the true protagonist of the story really is.
@Letter Bee That's kay. Just remember to be consistent, man.
Emphasis on the word "used". Good for you, man.
@Mercurial Good to see you. Since the change in the magic system in the RP, most have already edited their character sheets accordingly. Did yours, you just need to edit the CS. Feel free to edit the name and description. Thanks, man.

Magic
  • Name: Combustion
  • Type: Transmutation
  • Description: Allows can emit fire from his body. At present, he has only sporadically managed to produce it from his hands, and still hasn’t the foggiest as to how it actually works.


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OOC. I've never seen someone take criticism of their character this well.
Me too, but I don't think that its a bad thing. Most usually try to defend themselves or rationalize.
Just make him act naturally, man. You don't need to be told how to do that. Just remember, you're RPing a character, an actual human being; not a a mass of various personalities and emotions packed into a single person.
@Letter Bee If you look at how Mikhail has been acting so far, you'll see what Banjo means. He was protective and caring of Nico and aggressive towards Don. Then when Alice came into the picture, he was judgmental yet accepted her as a friend, but the way he was expressing himself was cold and wasn't consistent with that he was saying. Then Anna suddenly appeared and Mikhail suddenly turned into such a kindhearted person. He saw Don, then suddenly turned arrogant and aggressive.

The problem I see here is that there isn't much transition occurring in terms of mood. Everything was quite abrupt. It was like seeing three different characters/personalities instead of a single character experiencing various emotions.

Not trying to be mean here, just want to help resolve this habit before it continues. I could be completely wrong though.
@Letter Bee As Banjo mentioned, please avoid instances that could be perceived as meta-gaming. Its better if it didn't happen at all instead of being told that you're abusing your powers.

Also, in regards to Aura of the Cornerstone and Don's Harmonise, which would be stronger, is still unknown; it would be wise to not assume that Mikhail can resist it. I mean, Mikhail can think that, but you shouldn't.

Anyway, I noticed that Mikhail jumps from demeanor like oil being poured into a heated pan. Not saying that its wrong, that's the way you wanna RP him. Just hope you stay consistent with this type of personality.
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